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Reviewer: effward (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Gah! This story is getting great. You know it kills me to say this, but I love
Em and Bella together.
But Edward should not get off easy and get the new girl.
Hell Let Bella share Edward and Em.
She needs to hump Edward and leave him naked in th woods, and tell him
he will forget in time. He just a toy to play with.
Reviewer: tnall (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Love this story!!
Reviewer: tnall (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Love this story!!
Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I just started reading this today and I love it! I really like Ilene! I think she's exactly what Edward needs in his life - someone who refuses to bend to his every whim or coddle him and his ego. Don't get me wrong, I do love Edward, but he has some serious issues. I love it when fan fic writers bring those issues out!
I had never considered an Emmett/Bella relationship before, but now that I've been reading this, I love it! I really like the part where Jasper makes Emmett and Alice feel drunk! That had me cracking up!
I really can't wait to see where you go with this!
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
come one you have to carry on. personally i feel that edward and bella should be together, but it does awnser the what if bella moved on and emmett was the one to be there for her. i think it's great. i loved it truly. LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sunchyme (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I love emmett and bella, but people don't seem to write it. I really like how you make Bella a stronger character than she appears in the books. Can't wait for Edward's reaction- he's so spoilt, it makes a good read though.
Reviewer: Emmetts_stalker (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I so want the Emmett Karaoke Experiance!!
And for a next chapter to be up lol.
I love this story I review everytime so PLEASE update soon!!
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
OMG!!! I just read the Emmett Karoke outtake. Holy crap that was the funniest visual I have seen in a long time!
Thank you for that. Totally made my day!
Reviewer: Emmettlover1 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Love you even more than i used to i loved this chapter even though i don't really like the fact that Edward ran like out like a pussy but I still love it. I hope ilene forgives edward i mean they are meant to be right? We whatever keep up the good wok i love it.
Reviewer: Emmettlover1 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Love you even more than i used to i loved this chapter even though i don't really like the fact that Edward ran like out like a pussy but I still love it. I hope ilene forgives edward i mean they are meant to be right? We whatever keep up the good wok i love it.
Reviewer: TwilightLoBe (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
This was the best chapter you have written till now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I L O V E YOU!! I love Edward and everything!!!
I think the kiss was a bit off but I finally loved it too!!!
Is Carlise and Ilene real brother and sister?
Reviewer: Jasarey (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Thanks so much for the art of don't cha. It made me laugh so hard, I spilled my wine and I didn't even care. I'll tell you this: every time I hear that song from now on, I will see Emmett struttin his stuff. HELLS YEAH!!
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
enjoyed it, great chapter
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I'm not too sure how I'm feeling about this. While I want Emmett to heal, I 'm conflicted about the whole Bella/Emmett/Edward triangle. Could possibly Emmett end up in the end with Ilene and the whole Edward/Bella universe be in it's correct orbit??
Hmmm, so many things to ponder. I can't wait to see where you go with all of this.
Great story, by the way.
Author's Response: I don't know what to say to that...
I don't think you will like me by the end of this...
Reviewer: danieblu (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
wow things keep getting better
Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I just read this story for the first time today, and I must say I love it. I love reading your Emmet, you have him down to a T. Hope you update soon...
Reviewer: Brads babe (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Please I want more i always thought Edward was an ass!!!!
Never team Edward!!!
Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
This is soooo good! I really like it! BTW, I like the opportunity to see the relationships between Jasper, Alice, Emmett & Bella at the beginning -- it's so healthy compared to how she & Edward & the family always interated. More like equals or true siblings...
Reviewer: twilightgirly12 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I LOVEEE this story!! I was kinda sad about the whole rosalie dying thing but now its cool.Emmett and Bella are great together in this story.I want to see what edward does,but if he ends up with ilene so help me god. Write soon! =)
Reviewer: Suzan528 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You
I am so entranced by this story- you are a wonderful writer.
Reviewer: Suzan528 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
OMG OMG I am so excited!!!!!!! Damn, I had so mucch to do today- now I'll NEVER get out of the house!
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
oh, me want Emmett seeing.
I was so thrilled to finally see how Edward's gonna react To B&Em. Thank you
Reviewer: Darla (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
This one is really great - thanks for this perspective!!!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Great job!
Reviewer: grammysharbear2 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I am so happy Bella is standing up for herself. I love the Bella/Em relationship too. I do feel sorry for Edward but by golly he deserves everything he has to go through. I also like your Jasper :)
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