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Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life
I love the loops you're throwing into the plot, but can we pleeeeeeeease have some Bella/Emmett time?? *persuasive grin* He is far too yummy for his own good...
Reviewer: babybluefire2007 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I love this story.
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity
I'm sorry I never got around to leaving you a little note about Emmett's kareoke performance, life got a bit crazy for a moment there. But the storm has calmed so to speak ad I just had to let you know how much I LOVED the outtake.
It had me laughing so hard I was crying. I wish you had been able to leave it in the story, but at the same time I'm glad I got to read it separately. It was quite the comic relief after the whole Edward debacle and him finding out that Emmett loves Bella.
Please update with another chapter! I'm dying from withdrawal!!!
Heater
Reviewer: Siobhan (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Well I could seriously care less if ASSward didnt take it right or not, let him whine like the little boy he is. Ilene should have body slammed him right there *smirk*
Woohoo for Emmett and Bells, yeehaw!!
Love this story, I have to say that everytime, just cause its true. I look forward to the upcoming ASSward drama *points and laughs at poor little Eddie*
Reviewer: emma27th (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 - This Time
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Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
this story is so cool! I never pictured an Emmett/Bella pairing. I'm intrigued -- update again soon, OK?
Reviewer: prettypoodle (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I LOVE IT!!! It's weird to think of Emmett and Bella together, but I just LOVE Ilene! And you're version of Alice is just perfect!
Reviewer: AngelicPegasus (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Edward really is a dick, hope he gets what's coming to him. Not sure if I like Ilene or not, I do, then I don't. She might be growing on me. Intersting character, just a bit bitchy and know-it-all for someone who doesn't know any of them.
Reviewer: caligirl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
i do i do! <3 hehe. cute chapter! loved it yet again. hehe! update!
Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
So question....is Edward still in love with Bella? Is he starting to love Ilene? Personally, that little shit (aka Assward) hurt Bella so badly that I'm secretly (well, I guess not so secretly now) hoping that he stays in love with Bella and has to sit alone as he watches Emmett's and her relationship blossom.
Anyways, enough ranting...I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
Reviewer: November Falls (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
WOW! I haven't ever read a Em/Bella story before...this was amazing. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I wrote you a lengthy review early but I don't think it went through.
So, this one I'll make super short.
As much as this story pains me b/c I love Bella and Edward together so much, the thought of Bella and Emmett is sweet.
I just hope that whoever Edward winds up with, not in any time soon, I hope, he will always pine for Bella.
I'm waiting for the next chapter. Keep it up!
Reviewer: Jaznbells (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Omfg that was great...finally Emmett and Bella kissed. I was waiting for it to happen! Great job luvii
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Oh my! I am really feeling your story. I like Emmett and Bella together. They kinda fit, Oh hell I just like Emmett period. Don't get me wrong, I am totally Team Edward but I hated when he left her.
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
this is an awesome story, great job :) cant wait for find out what edwards going to do
Reviewer: wickedgrace (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Just wanted to say I love your story!!! Can't wait till next time....
Reviewer: OrangeJuiceLover (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I GIVE THAT A 1,000,000 out of 10!
Reviewer: doornumberthree (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
Well, it was kind of awkward that they had their first/second kisses in front of Alice and Jasper.. but well done, overall!
Reviewer: Suzan528 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
OMG I am dying without chapter 10- I love this story! PLEASE update!!!!!!
Reviewer: MAGalovic (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
OMG, this was an awsome chapter, I have to know what is going to happen next, lets please hope you are going to be adding the next chapter SOON!
Reviewer: aylag (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
I don't usually like Bella with anyone else (even though I love Emmett) but you have pulled me in. I don't know if I like this Ilene yet... More please!
Reviewer: nobing (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
This is so fantastic! I never expected to not only be okay with, let alone LIKE a Bemmett AU, but I really do! Keep on keepin' on..I NEED to see where this goes!
Reviewer: dee-dee (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
this was a great chapter
Reviewer: BellaRose88 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE!!!!!!!!
I can barely wait!
Reviewer: donnac85 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
i love it want more more more x
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