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Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Gotta Be Somebody

I liked seeing this from Bella's point of view.  It was a great way to gather insight into the story.  Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Fix You

So sad and touching. You write Emmett so beautifully.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 3 - With Arms Wide Open

How will he handle the elephant in the room? And tell her about Rose. I am excited to see how this plays out.

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move

U am definitely curious to see how this plays out! And what, or who, are Edward's hands full of?

Reviewer: pomme_de_terre (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

So sad, Vicky! So beautifully written!

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

i don't know about this . . . but alas I will eagerly await more from your clever brain!!

Reviewer: alice-cullen-104 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

i love this story!!!!!!!!! gr8 job!

Reviewer: cchrispell (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

love this story…don't get me wrong I love edward, but i really like emmet as well :)

Reviewer: froggydee (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

This is an awesome story - I love Emmett - please hurry with the rest!!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Very interesting. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Great chapter. I'm glad Bella put Assward in his place...Ilene isn't so bad :)

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 - This Time

Assward. haha...

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Cry

Edward cannot be with Ilene!

 



Author's Response:

Oh yeah?

Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

I totaly agree love the pairing of Jacob and Leigh and love your updates!

Reviewer: tooold4this (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Great work!

Reviewer: daisyhellride (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

oh please don't stop now this is such a lovely story...love the em&bella keep it up! so well written...look forward to more

Reviewer: strangecookie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

This is my favorite fanfic!  I love the idea of Bella and Em!  Oh, and I like Ilene from the first time we meet her.  I think she's spunky!

Reviewer: breecreely (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

oh man i've been waoiting forever!!!! please right more!!

Reviewer: mrebeccan (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Oh god, I have been captured by yet another story. Bella and Emmett has always seemed more like siblings to me, so I thought it would be weird giving this story a try, but I really really love it...

can't wait for next time

Reviewer: TheRealMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Awesome... I can't wait for your next chapter!

Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Great stuff!  I hope everything goes well with school.  Take care of you and we'll still be here waiting for an update when you get a chance to write :)

I hate how much I love that Jake imprinted on Leah.  I wonder if there is any jealosy on Sam's part?  I know he has Emily...but will there be even a tiny bit of resentment toward Jake for this? 

And how bad is Charlie going to FREAK!?  I can't wait to see how that goes :)

Reviewer: Unfinished Perfection (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Gravity

Ooh, a brave move killing off a major character. I like it a lot. I never did hate Rosalie as much as most do but I never fully embraced her as a likeable character. Much better now that she's dead lol. Very sad though.

Reviewer: turtlegirl922 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

Cool chapter...I like the pairing of Jake and Leah.  Hopefully, with Jake imprinting on Leah, it'll let Emmett know that their is nothing to be jealous of when it comes to Jake and Bella.  Oh yeah, and Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass and get over it.  ;-)

Reviewer: turtlegirl922 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe

Yay for Emmett and Bella kisses!  Loved this chapter and hope that Emmett kicks Edwards backside!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life

okay so I love this for the fact that Emmett is going for Bella and Edward finally realizes that he's an idiot and maybe just maybe it wasn't all he thought it was.. I mean maybe he was just attracted to Bella because she is his singer.
The pull he had to Ilene was just too much of one to not recognize.
Hmm I wonder..
But I can't wait to read more. I love Emmett and I think that this is a good twist to things.

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