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Reviewer: misinmyname (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
Can you tell us what the Spanish that Alice says is?
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
Ahh...power dimples ! Can't wait for the next chapter. Get to the sexin' already.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
Squee! Is that a foreshadowing of how next chapter will start!!! See its stuff liek this that makes my blood pump into my own story! Yes its official I have you and a few otehr writers who have become like a muse! I love your story and the what if factors!!! Please post againI can't waitto read more and if you want hop on over to a Test of Fate and let me know what you think!
Squee I can't wait for EM and B to get comfy muah hahaha
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
i can't wait for more
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
hooray!
Reviewer: Amor (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
I found the whole medical drama thing funny, also how Emmett doesn't see why others think he's not so bright xD
I realy dislike Maria though =/ She seems so ugh...haha that's the only word I can come up to desrcibe my dislike for her.
And the spanish part when Alice spoke in Spanish I didn't quite understand. I speak spanish, but I got the point of the sentence. She pretty much said, "Leave my husband alone or I'll break your body into pieces and put into flames?" somewhere along those lines yeah?
But anyways, I hate cliffies xD But this story is really good! Has to be one of my fav. Emmett/Bella. Since I don't really find any good stories with that ship. But can't wait for the next chapter!<3
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
GO EMMETT GO! Give Bella what Eddie never would! And Edward needs to realize that he has feelings for Ilene!
Reviewer: Mirabella Jamison (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
*THUD*
yeah, that's the sound of me hitting the floor with that ending ;)
can't wait for the next installment! :D
Reviewer: mrs_cullen26 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
I hope the next chapter is up tomorrow!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: B-RizzleDizzle (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
More please! And soon!
Reviewer: Vec (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
I feel so, so bad for Edward. Edward belongs with Bella.
Author's Response: Not gonna happen sorry!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
LOL!! Love the little convo at the end best of all. Emmett's gonna get some!!! I've got plenty for him if he doesn't get his fill. >:>
Reviewer: Beautiful_Distraction (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
Oooo...I love it!!!!
It's time for some LEMONS!! lol! Can't wait, girl!
XOXO
-Whitney
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAH....Love the little banter in the chapter end notes...LMAO! Reminds me of Ellie's thread.
WHOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! Let's get to some SEXIN BB!!!!!!!!
Love it, love you!! You are the bestest!
XOXOXOXOXOXO Jess
Reviewer: 1greekgirl (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
I'm lovin this can't wait for the next update you are a great writer! keep up the good work ......I've probably already said that before lol ...
Reviewer: Lori01 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
OMG EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!! NEXT PLEASE!! NOW!!!
MUST KNOW!!!!!
Reviewer: oceanwaters2006 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Better Than Me
Ummmmmmmm Okay...I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!!!!
I just saw the song you picked and had to say that real quick before I read....real review coming in ten minutes!
XOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXO Jess
Reviewer: TaylorMa (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life
i was always curious if jaocb would end up with Leah in the books before he imprinted in renesmee, so i like seeing them together!
and omg even though edward is the biggest kind of ass for leaving bella, it still hurt to see his pain at seeing her and emmett together.
it just feels wrong for edward to even remotely have feelings for someone other than bella but i guess despite his uberhuge mistake he deserves some potential happiness, even if it ilene. i will admit she was not my favorite, but i do like her for edward. he always seemed so arrogant, it is good to have someone put him in his place and not just worship the ground he walks on, so i guess ilene is growing on me.
and i like ilene's back story. i really think it is great that edward at least has someone who can sympathize with his pain of loving a human.
cannot wait to see all the twists and turns and ups and downs that the couples will be facing!
love this story!
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Not Meant To Be
What Happens to Jasper? please post more! i love this
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Not Meant To Be
What Happens to Jasper? please post more! i love this
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The First Day of My Life
Oooh. This is getting so good.
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Breathe
What happens next? I've to to know.
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 8 - This Time
Okay I loved that Jasper was the bartender. That was so funny. I can't believe it. I'm so excited for the next chapter.
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Cry
Well at least Eddie boy now has Ilene. Emmett and Bella sittin in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G!!!!!
Reviewer: lilly_rose_hale (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 6 - You and Me
I wonder how Eddie boy will react to all of this?
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