Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
Just lovely! I admit, my favorite line was when Bella thought "romance, not porn"! Hilarious! The part with Bella getting Nessie from the crib was so sweet and so descriptive, it almost made me yearn for those baby days again... until you got to the sexin! Makes me glad to have all the baby days behind me after all!
Great story!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
What a sweet story... really like your writing.
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 2
wow that was hot and romantic at the same time, just loved both POVs.
Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
I loved both chapters! I am so glad that I found this story! Please keep on writing!
Reviewer: elisena (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 2
wow! beautiful and so sweet!
Reviewer: JED (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 2
Thankyou for writing Edwards POV - I just loved it. Beautifully written
Reviewer: Lily Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh this is so sweet and so perfect! i am reminded all over again of why i love you!
Reviewer: alebodden11 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 2
I Really love this ff! I've read it like 6 times already!! It's just so adorable and cute and all kinds af amazing blended together! =] Wish there was a continuation though! hahaha! but really... I love it! =]
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 2
Nice to hear from Edward's perspective as well. super touch to get both reactions to this one wonderful, perfect evening for Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wonderful short. Extremely romantic and erotic at the same time. Seems like everyone one in this scenario, Bella & Edward. As well as Carlisle & Esme get another grandchild. Alice and Jasper have another niece and newphew. As well as other babies were born 9 months later with the blackout. Busy evening all around.
Reviewer: SiamNikki (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very, very sweet!!!
=^..^=
Reviewer: mineFanatics (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was good :)
Keep writing. Your stories are good :D
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Perfect- really there are no other words.
Well, except for more please.....
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
Girlie you can have whatever kind of treats you want- this story is wonderful!
There is nothing like a serious committed relationship to foster intimacy...
Looking so forward to next chapter..
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
such a beautiful, sexy, erotic story. thankyou.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
A seriously beautiful story. It took me a while to get to it, but I'm glad I finally did. It was sweet and romantic and perfect. If only real life were that way...lol.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Loved it. So true to life of what could happen after a child is born, but their love for each other always wins out.
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great one shot. I absolutely loved it. You had me feeling mad, sad, happy and hot and bothered. Nicely done.
Reviewer: LaSuaCantate (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVED IT! I definitely felt the emotion of this story physically as well as emotionally. My heart literally hurt for Bella when she was feeling rejected. And then I felt very different emotions when I read of their time together later that night hehe. You definitely get an A for this one...it's an AWESOMELY written story all around: rejection, lust, angst, humor, romance, passion...I am blown away! Thanks for sharing this with us =)
Reviewer: psychochick89 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
*sigh*
I absolutely love this. So sweet and romantic and just perfect.
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 2
And loved Edward's POV on the whole thing. So beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
Found this after reading your other story, and had to read it given the title. There don't seem to be many country fans in the Twi fandom. I love this song, and you created a beautiful, beautiful story around it. Funny enough, my story started off a Garth song too.
Author's Response: Haha, I am actually very much a country fan, but my taste in music is very broad. This song just happened to pop up on my playlist, and I'd always loved it. And thus, this one shot was born :)
Reviewer: tby789 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love this story! Your Edward is beyond perfect. I love that he is a real man struggling with the problems and stresses of the real world. Very well written and can't wait to read more from you. Awesome and very original.
Author's Response: Thank you daaaaaaaaahlin. My lovely muse (yes I know I'm behind in my responses and I'm supposed to be writing. keep that whip away!)
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
This was wonderful. You really have a deep grasp of what goes on inside a marriage--I know my husband and I have had spans of time when life conspired to make us feel so disconnected and far apart from each other. Coming back together is more than just relieving frustration (though that can't be discounted!), it's about remembering how much love has always been there, underneath it all. I'm glad that Bella was patient with Edward, and that Edward got the wake-up call he needed. This was really beautiful and believable.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Marriage does give you some valuable knowledge, even if the marriage doesn't work out as well as this one in the story seems to have lol. But thanks again for the compliments :)
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
very hot and sweet! :D
Author's Response: Glad I achieved my goal :) Thank you!
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