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Reviewer: Cudleskitn (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL camping trip oh my



Author's Response:

Lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaLuna (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 3

this is a really funny story!!!!!!!!!!!!!I absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Hey everyone - there's a thread open under Post-Eclipse fanfiction now, so if any of you hang out in the forums, feel free to drop in!

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

this looks like an interesting story.  excited for an update!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I just put another chapter in the queue!

Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

lol  this is too funny  thank you



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

LOL!! love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

Apparently books really are dangerous



Author's Response:

Lol!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 3

OMG!  I laughed so hard at this line:

"Bella’s gotta go potty! It’s like having our own giant-sized Betsy Wetsy!" Emmett exclaimed loudly, guffawing...

Really, I stopped reading for a minute to recover.  I just adore Emmett.  The canoe ride seemed so innocent.  It's astonishing that with the amount of trouble Bella can get into as a human, Edward was still so reluctant to make her immortal, and thus taking away the problem. 

I liked the image of them all coming back soaked.  I can totally see that.

Looking forward to more. :) 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! The next chapter will continue the...adventure. Thank you for reviewing - it makes me so happy to see what all of you think.

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 2

Hahaha!  Alice's idea of camping is hysterical! 

I hope that Bella doesn't pout for the whole trip.  Granted, the last time she was in a tent things got really ugly, but she is spending time with the Cullens, so what does she really have to complain about?



Author's Response:

Lol - Alice rocks. Why wasn't she ever around when my family dragged me off camping as a kid? *sigh*

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Imagine (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 3

lol i love this story! rosalie is smart :D



Author's Response:

Yes, she is - she knows better than to get in a canoe with Emmett, lol. Thanks!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Just finished chapter 1.  This is really cute.  I have never read a story where they actually go camping!  Edward's slip about Bella's lack of luggage was quite funny!  This should be a lot of fun.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks - you're actually one of the first to mention his slip about the lack of luggage, so I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

"Stupid camping vampires."  <--Ha!

"Bella decided to read."  <-- Also Ha!  :)

This is so fun...thank you for giving poor Bella a lavatory...I'd hate for Emmett to have that kind of ammo against her. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett would have had a field day with that nonsense... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 3

I was laughing so hard when I read this chapter! I love these family moments, and I wish there had been more of them in the books.  Thank goodness for Twilighted! :)

The part about Emmett finding Bella's "spots" was priceless.  That's SO something he would do!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I wish there had been more of those moments too.

Reviewer: star_66 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 3

What made them think of taking Bella canoeing?

 

I love this story, it's hilarious.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 3

I love it so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 3

HAHAHA

Bella's lavatory... you're so wonderful.

And the series of very unfortunate events made me giggle too.  I don't think I ever want this to end!



Author's Response:

Aw - thanks! I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: rara2007 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my goodness!! I love that darn Emmett!! This story is cracking me up, I literally couldn't breathe at one point! I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks - I'm glad it's making you laugh. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

You have to love vampire camping   that was to good   anyone who has been in a canoe knows what its like to go under.  Please update soon this is a great fic, you really capture the humor while keeping the characters true to themselves.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'll update soon!

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

LMAO! This is really good.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love it! Reading it made me feel the fun, I know that sounds weird but I was completely engaged! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks - that's so nice!

Reviewer: Indie-kid (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 2

this fantastic! can you please write another chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll try to hurry with the next chapter.

Reviewer: The Vampire Girl (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 2

haha this story rules. your really letting alice go here arent you

i wish that all camping trips wer like this... minus the canoeing



Author's Response:

Yes, Alice is my fav, so I tend to just let her do what she wants, LOL. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: miss twilight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

very sweet!

 

 

camping cullen style !

 

please give us more!



Author's Response:

Lol - I'll hurry to update, thanks!

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 2

Sweet fic I cant wait for more "rustic" fun.  I am adding this to my favorites.



Author's Response:

Wow - thank you! That's awesome. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Gattina (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

Hehe, this is hilarious! Update soon XD *still laughing* Ah camping...



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: eakullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 2

Fun fluff story! Alice would definitely go all out for a camping trip. Bella's reaction to the news was really funny! I want to see how it ends!



Author's Response:

Thank you - poor Bella, lol.

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