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Reviewer: aubepine815 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

This story was a riot!! I loved it.

 "AAAGGGHHHH! Stupid, filthy, disgusting bloodsuckers, leave me alone!!" - I cried laughing, especially Rosalie's reaction.

And just about anything Emmett does, the noises in the woods - Alice's dance club in the middle of nowhere.

Good story - congrats!!!

Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hahhahaha I'm glad Edward finally got Emmett back.

Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

OME! This story is AWESOME!!! I can't wait for the seqeul!!

Wow, I never expected leeches! Edward's right, she does attract everything that drinks blood! lol! I love the comparrison you made about the leeches and teh Cullens! I'ts so true, too!

And then TICKS??!? Really? Wow! Never expected that one either! So, what else can go wrong for Bella on this camping trip?! Lol!

Is that really how you get leeches adn ticks off? I'm kinda scared to ask, how do you know that stuff?!? Sounds really painful. Yicks! Poor Bella.

"So, when are we going camping again?" Huh? Huh? Huh? He he he! :P Oh so funny! :D

Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 11

Loved this story it was very good and I lol'ed alot. I hope there is a sequel cause I think it would be quite hilarious!!!!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Fantastic story --- I laughed more reading this than I have in a long time! Great job!

Reviewer: Gondolier (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is charming so far! I like the idea of Charlie wanting to toughen Bella up so she'll survive once she's off his hands.

Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great story! It was highly entertaining!

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

This story was great! Very funny and enjoyable to read, and it is definitely true that Bella is a magnet for trouble. I loved the blood-sucking creatures constantly attacking her, a subtle and ironic little twist on the story. I hope you write more, you do a fantastic job of executing each character's personality and mannerisms perfectly. :o)

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 11

What a cute ending to a really fun story.

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

amazing chapter, amazing story!!!!!! please please pleae please please please please with chocolate covered cullen on top write a sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxo

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ok, what is going on? Something is very obviously up with the Cullens. And what is with the tape? I have never heard that before!

Reviewer: beetlejuicelover (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great story! I hope you do a sequal.

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 4

This is easily becoming the most hilarious story I have ever read. I nearly fell off of my chair when I got to Emmet's snail family. That would be so like him to do that. Lol. I probably would have done the same thing though. I have a thing for gastropods... that was my attempt at some biology humor. :)

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 11

i love the story. sad to see it end. i hope you do write a sequel.

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 11

Very well done couldn't have laughed more

Reviewer: air0220 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ha. I jsut love Emmett. He should get a pet at home, he be quite comical with it. The big guy with the cute little fuzzy animal. Great ending with Edward getting pay back. If you write a sequel, I look forward to it.

Reviewer: Zipkins (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 11

A fitting end to a very amusing story. Great that you made Edward the instigator of the last joke, saved him from being the worry-wart. Sort of feeling sorry for Carlisle and Esme for having to tolerate their 'childrens' antics... Thank you, I'll definately be voting for you.

Reviewer: DizziBlnde (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

My children are all staring at their mother laughing hysterically at the computer - I have a sneaking suspicion they are planning my move to the sanitarium as I type.

This is too damn funny, and adorable!

Reviewer: crimsonserpent (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Heh . . . random wildlife pet obsessed Emmett reminds me of someone I know. And it generally ends with something being thrown at him, lol. Truely enjoying the story, good job and I can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

omg that was so funny.

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

THANK YOU SO MUCH! It's SUPER DUPER unny,, i read it at midnight and cannot stop laughing. Totally hilarious, bella and emmet are so funny. You're rally good at making character. And yes, we definitely want sequel. How about bella's vampire camping? with reneesme? Thanks!!

Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

I want a sequel!!! I love the prank Edward played on Emmet. That was hillarious!! I hope you'll write more.

Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 11

I want a sequel!!! I love the prank Edward played on Emmet. That was hillarious!! I hope you'll write more.

Reviewer: Emma Goldman (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

GREAT STORY!!! very fun and light hearted. i really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

That was great. I would definately nominate this for best fan fic.

I don't remember giggling so hard. My husband just kept looking at me like I should be locked up in a mental institute. (If you see Jasper, please send him over to me. Thanks)

I can't wait for the sequel.

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