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Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

"Jeez, you two, enough already. We’re sick of seeing the constant public displays of affection, - that’s all you’ve done this whole trip,"

I choked.

 

This story is awesome. The fluff, the hilarity, the pranks. Ahh. Adorable.

Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 8

"I much preferred his previous behavior in this dream."

"[Bella now] understands the fundamentals of keeping a canoe upright. She also had a small swimming lesson that day.'"

*dies*

That was hilarious. Ohmai god.

Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

"Maybe they could form a club."

"Warning: Contains Bitterness and Resentment"

"Rosalie tried to do the same after she’d made up with Emmett, but he claimed he was pretty in pink, and refused to change."

 

Haahaa. I love you.

Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 2

This kind of reminds me that Bella can be a miserable bitch. She's being such a party pooper, which...is totally Bella. "How dare they be nice to me and buy me things and put up with me! Ugh!" Heh.

Reviewer: k89g (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oooo sequel please! I hope you get the time/inspiration you need because it would be wonderful to have more.

A lovely fic that I am sure I will be reading again and again!

Reviewer: lamaril (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 11

one of the best i've read so far - THANKS

Reviewer: Cancan227 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: karlamwheeler (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved this fic! Definitely a breath of fresh air, I love angsty-fics but it's nice to read some light and funny like this. Really good job :)

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh, I so saw that one coming. Edward should have known better. Charlie wouldn't miss the chance to watch his daughter on a camping trip with her fiancee!!

Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 4

This was so funny!! Especially Em's snail story hahahahaha. wonderful!

Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

very funny! I laughed out loud and my husband thought I was nuts!

Reviewer: Angel-Star (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh I loved this. I nearly fell off my chair laughing and Loved Edward's pay back. Star

Reviewer: non-evil Victoria (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 11

I love it!  Most Twilight stories are angst-ridden, but this was a breath of fresh air.

Reviewer: non-evil Victoria (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 2

HIlarious!

I knew I loved Emmett, "Their tent had a huge orange and white flag streaming from the front of it, with a big "T" on it in, presumably representing Emmett’s favorite Tennessee football team."  GO VOLS!

Reviewer: queentara (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

OMG that was hilarious! I am reading this at work and trying hard to hold back my laughter. I loved it when Jasper made everyone scared and Emmett ran into the tree and the spider on the face was great!

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 11

oh my gosh, that had me busting at the seams! oh gosh, thank you. awesome story!

Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 11

Hilarious bravo!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 11

This was a romping good time. Thanks for the fun.

Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 11

ahahh emmett is soo funny at times. aww its kinda sad that edward and bella didnt really get 2 spend time 2gether

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

LMAO!! Perfect ending.

Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 11

I loved this story! You are incredible!

And I would love to read your sequel.

Can't wait for that!

Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 11

This was great!!!!!!  It was funny and well...leechy!;-))  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 11

This was great!!!!!!  It was funny and well...leechy!;-))  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 11

This has been one of the funniest stories I have ever read!  It defintiely went out with a bang :)

I am so looking forward to your next story :)

Reviewer: redvampee (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 11

I totally enjoyed this comedy piece!!! PLEASE do write a sequal...I have not laughed as much in some so called comedy Movies as I laughed reading this story. Great work...I was able to visualize evrything from start to finish and some of it was just to damn funny!!!

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