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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 05:16 PM · On: 3: House Call

interesting

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 02:59 PM · On: 2: Guarding the Jewel

I CAN'T REVIEW ON FANFICTION GARRR

I'm on chapter 7 over there and omg I started crying! That was so sad. I guess Jasper did have a thing for Alice.

Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 02:48 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

Okay, Fanfiction is down, so I found this story here and let me say, wow! This is great.

William is a Vamp, as well as Edward, Esme, and creepy stranger outside the window at the hospital. There was no car accident. Creeper killed William and attacked Alice. Alice is not dead, but was bitten by either William or Carlisle. She is not dead at the moment. Bella's blood still sings to Edward. Rose, Em, and Jazz re human, as well as Bella. William can see the future. He always gave wierd looks to bella because of her scent. But I am confused about some of the conversations that occurred in the hospital while Bella was incoherent...

Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 11:11 AM · On: 3: House Call

really like it so far...but i'm so ready for edward to show up and Jasper! I mean he has to be in love with Alice already...he just has to be...and...*smiles* anywyas please post again soon

Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 06:52 AM · On: 3: House Call

THis is great.  Bella was absolutely cracking me up.  I think I can even smell Carlisle now.  I think I may even a drooled a bit myself. lol 
YAY, Edward is on his WAY!  Now I can't wait to get home from work so I can read the rest on FF.  Its blocked here at work, dang.  :)

Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2009 03:48 AM · On: 2: Guarding the Jewel

The thought of Alice riding a bike is absolutely hysterical to me.  I love it!  Very original.  So not Alice in most FF.  She loathes the bus. lol

So William, Vampire???  That's my guess. 

Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 06:49 AM · On: 1: Best Friends

Great start.
Rose going on a date with Tyler, totally hilarious. :)
I'm guessing the guy at the market is Jasper.

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:57 AM · On: 1: Best Friends

I loved the way you described her trying to drive the car and the flashback to the ditch. So funny. SM always said it was hard to drive, but you really made me feel like I was there.

Reviewer: Emibella (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 09:23 AM · On: 3: House Call

Have you stopped publishing this on twilighted? I love this story so much. It's a top ten. It really shows your brilliance with unique ideas and your willingness to be edgy. I know I can find it on FF but it's nice to see it here as well. More people should be able to read it. It is seriously exceptional writing.

Reviewer: MidnightDancer (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 05:05 PM · On: 3: House Call

Ah, so Edward is in this story. I  can't wait to see what happens when they meet each other. Thanks for writing an interesting story. =)

Reviewer: MidnightDancer (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:55 PM · On: 2: Guarding the Jewel

Ooh, some mystery. I have absolutely no idea where you are going with this story. I don't think I saw/read any mention of the ships involved. And so I am very intrigued. I wonder if Bella simply smelled too appetizing to William or if he could detect that she was unaffected by whatever special talent he may have.

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 10:30 AM · On: 3: House Call

Not fair Edward and William what's a poor girl to do?

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 10:26 AM · On: 2: Guarding the Jewel

Hmm......William someone new to drool over,  I'm so glad you brought this over here.  It's worth reading again:~)

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 09:51 AM · On: 3: House Call

I totally forgot about how she gets that whiff of delight every so often. Lol. I love it.

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 09:44 AM · On: 2: Guarding the Jewel

DUDE!!! I've now reviewed this chapter TWICE and it keeps messing up. I don't even have the strength to retype it all again. *sigh*

I love rereading this and remembering what my thoughts were last go around. I love your beautiful writing.

Oh, and why can't it be nominated? Surely it has way more than 40000 words.

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 03:24 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

Excellent, my dear.  Your writing is just beautiful.  My favorite description of all time:" Her skin was fine: glowing, smooth; the palest imaginable shade of olive tinged her complexion. Her eyes were dark and glowing like burnished coffee beans, but too large and open and beautiful to really compare to anything so common."

 

seriously that was incredible.  I missed this story and hopefully i can keep up w/ re-reading it as you post.  I picked up so much this time that I didn't pick up on last time.  Glad yo are posting it on here.  

Reviewer: chloe9 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 03:13 AM · On: 1: Best Friends

I'm glad to see this story posted here, it's one of my favorites, and one of my most frequent recommendations.

Reviewer: Agnus Bimbal (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 08:25 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

*clapping hands*

 

Reviewer: MidnightDancer (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 06:02 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

I am really intrigued by the start of your story. Your descriptions are wonderful, and I love how you show what the characters are doing physically while telling the story. It's a perfect blend of showing the action, giving us insight into Bella's mind, letting their actions give us information, and bringing life to the characters. I especially enjoyed your descriptions of Alice. Love her already. The timing of this story is interesting. She's only a sophmore. I look forward to seeing where you take it.

Reviewer: withthevampsofcourse (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:36 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

ahh i remember back when i used to read fics.  when little jenny stalked me and i was scurred i had a jennifer jason leigh on m'hands.  heh

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 05:28 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

Bout freakin' time. As soon as I find a state where it's legal, I am eloping with this story. My true love.

Reviewer: Savage Juno (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:54 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

Well, hell yeah.  I'm glad you decided to post this story here.  One of the best...as the insane number of award nominations attests. 

Love that you're exposing it to more readers.

Reviewer: vjgm (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:43 PM · On: 1: Best Friends

Fantastic start! I am so  happy you brought this story over to Twilighted!

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