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Reviewer: tori (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2013 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
asshole
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
i like!!
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story so much. It'sd one of my favorite "feel good" pieces I come back to when I need some fluff of the nonromance variety. :)
Reviewer: justwant2read (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
hahahahahaha!!! that was soooooooo cute
Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 1
very cute, i liked the idea of jasper and bella becoming better friends. to be honest i kinda dont like the stories where they have them making out i think its grosse lol
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love that Bella thinks Jasper smells like meringue pie. It's to cute. I really love that Bella stood up for Jasper.
Reviewer: Vampire4404 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
you should make a sequel to this story
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is so sweet, the way Bella and Jasper get closer. I love it!
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
sweet and funny and fluffy. i do so like the fluffiness. and now i am hungry for pie.
still one of my favorites.
forward march.
left. right. left. right...
Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was awesome and completely cute and funny. I loved it and would like to read more stories similar that was very original and extremely creative. you are quite talented.
angel 057
Reviewer: iLuvEdward19 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!! that's awesome!! that's one of the best fan-fictions i've read!!!!
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
nice way to bond with Jasper.. nice and the pie comment I about died laughing
Reviewer: iLuvEdward19 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!! that's awesome!! that's one of the best fan-fictions i've read!!!!
Reviewer: iLuvEdward19 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
OMG!! that's awesome!! that's one of the best fan-fictions i've read!!!!
Reviewer: AnimeAlex1000 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
aww come on!!!!! neeeddd mmoorrreee great story!!!
Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Awww I loved this one! All the while I was thinking 'she's gonna get hurt, she's gonna get hurt' and then when she didnt it made me laugh for some reason! I lovedddd the bonding between Bella and Jasper! You should defooo write more stuff like this! Its so cute because its like they are her real brothers! Keep writing more plzzzz!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
This is awesome. I love it. I am a team Jasper fan and I love it...Thanks..
Reviewer: Emmalie Audley (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
this was really great.
Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great story. I was smiling the whole time I read it. Thank you for the awesome story!!
~Twivamp :)
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
now i want pie and i just started my diet yesterday. no fair! that was amazing. i love emmett, but i haven't seen enough of jasper.
Reviewer: twigirl19 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm so glad you had Bella and Jasper bonding. It was really cute:)
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 1
This was just adorable, but I'm sure you've heard that before. I love that you made Jasper lemon pie scented. It's a really neat quirk. Your right though she's made friends with most of the others but not really with Jasper. Thanks for spending some quality time with one of my fave vamps.
Reviewer: Suzabelle (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was really cute. I laughed the whole way through. Though I seriously doubt Bella could have jumped on a trampoline and not hurt herself once, haha.
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVED this story! Stories like this - lighthearted and funny - are why I troll through thousands of titles. Thanks for posting it!
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