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Reviewer: maravilla (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 15
I loved this story, it made laugh and it made me cry. Great Job!!!
Reviewer: mnabbott (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ok, I just started reading this, and the end of chapter 11 made me laugh so much I had to comment. Hello from the land of the lurkers. Will comment again once I've cuaght up. : D
Reviewer: MarilagML (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 15
Sequel please. :-) I think it would be good to have a sequel for this.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thank you for updating. This chapter wrapped the story in its bow, but I do believe there is potential with Bella and Edward trying to make it work into a HEA. I applaud you for very well written and always interesting story. Good luck with your future writing!
Reviewer: PerfectMeadow (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 15
I was so worried you'd given up on this story! I loved it, one of the first fanfics I read that really sucked me into the whole fanfic thing.
Yay for HEA!
Author's Response: aww i love when people say that!
Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
nicely done.....
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 15
Brava.
I'm gonna miss your story.
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 14
*sigh* "You too, huh?" *sighs again*
What a great story.
Reviewer: PoisonousGarden (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
I enjoyed this :)
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for coming back with that last chapter. I really enjoyed this little story!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading! (Im a capricorn too...pisces moon, libra rising ;))
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 10
Holy shit I was about to sucker punch both of them if they didn't get it together. I guess all good romances need a catalyst. Too bad this one had claws. Great chapter! I know I'm jumping in here having just found your story but I'm reading it at work when I should be doing other things so that shows how involved I am, right? Wonderful writing!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 15
Great ending to a much-appreciated story!
Author's Response: much appreciated that you stuck through and read!
thank you :)
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for wrapping this up and the laughs. Good luck.
Reviewer: racquet (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 15
I'd almost given up hope that this story was ever going to be updated/completed so I was completely beside myself when I saw that a new chapter was up! I think this story was amazing though I agree that I'll miss the characters a bit. Still think there's a lot to tell about how things work out for Eddie and Bella in LA, lots of potential for amusing angst there. Thanks for finally completing this!
Author's Response: I did think I'd write a sequel at one point. Tho I'm not so sure now. Maybe sometime in the future. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: RestfulDreams (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 15
Well, I'm pretty sad that this is over! :-(
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for finishing the story. I loved it and you wrapped it up quite nicely. I hope you write something else. Great work on it.
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 15
"I’m going to mint-choco-éclair heaven with Edward by my side." My favorite line!!!
Great story!!
Reviewer: cummingsismyhomeboy (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 15
Brilliant! I love this story, and it's so nice to see it work out (in an appropriately loopy fashion!). Confliced Edward finally gets it, and Bella relaxes into it, and oh, lovely lovely love! Thankyou for a truly enjoyable story.
Reviewer: ambar82 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 15
IT'S OVER?? AWWW!! SAD FACE. GREAT STORY LOVED IT GLAD YOU UPDATED.
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 15
Merry Christmas to All!
And to all a good sequel ??????
Maybe Memeorial Day with the Cullens???
or St Marcus Day with the Cullens with their special houseguests, The Volturi or they go to Volterra to celebrate St Marcus Day...
Great Work and a refreshing piece of Winter's holiday in the early stages of Summer. Love the crisp snowy feeeling of the Christmas holiday! ho ho ho... ;)
Good work. I hope we will be seeing more from you soon! You are a very good writer, and I loved this story!
Disney Vampire (ponders getting out the Christmas tree and putting up the lights and decorations!) I usually decoprate a Palm Tree, Jimmy Buffett style for Christmas...Love a tropical island holiday! You make me WANT Christmas!
Author's Response: haha and its almost July!!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 15
Awww, sweet.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 15
thanks for a wonderul story ! :D
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 15
awwwwwwww...really satisfying endng.thanks
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! You're not done r u?!?
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
i love this story!!
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