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Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 7

Will she ever say it..before she gets bitch slapped by TANYA! LOLOL

Love it!

Great for valentines day (even though this is during xmas!)

 

Thank you

 



Author's Response:

i know, like i said, it WAS an excuse fic which ran awry ;)

Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

This chapter was fantastic! Bella better get her shit together! haha - Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 7

This chapter was fantastic! Bella better get her shit together! haha - Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

You need to update REALLY SOON!!! I LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7

That was a great chapter I love the tension between Edward and Bella. I just wish Bella would would open her eyes to relize that Edward is in love with her and wants a realationship with her that spans to more than just sex. We were so close to everything being revealed than our most favorite Person walks in to spoil the moment. Someone has to tell that girl that she has horrible timing. LOL. I can't wait for the next chapter. How was that for not just saying update soon

Author's Response:

haha defo better!!

thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 7

Edward's an asshole. He doesn't love Tanya, but he won't break up with her until Bella gives him what he wants? He'll let Tanya hang around, hurting Bella while telling HER she has to decide? He can't go after Bella himself without Tanya as a safety net? He can't be honest with either girl?



Author's Response:

I think he made the point in this chapter that he has been honest in the past....

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

Thank you for the update. Kill Tanya. Hopefully Bella will be able to relax and just give it a try.

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

very interesting..i am wondering what is comming next cause there has to be some drama comming LOL

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

Love their loving, and a gold star for Edward for being a giver and not a taker.  Good for him. 

However, they still have a lot of talking to do... harumf.

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 6

UGGGG! what is going on?  lots of lemony goodness, but without any meaning??? surely not! can't wait for the next chapter and an explanation from dear edward.

amy

Reviewer: spunktastic07 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 6

oh please update soon!!

awesome story!! it would be cool if edward got really reallly jealous and pissed. lol

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Wow- I was really expecting Tanya to come walking in!  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Great chapter!

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 6

ok that was really hot, hahaha.  loooove this story - sorry this is my first time reviewing.  they're relationship is so dysfunctional and delightful -- i love it ;)  more, please? ...and soon?

Reviewer: hpandtwilight (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 6

so, I'm starting to think Tanya is just a cover.

like a hired date thing person?

I'm so confused.

lol.

love this story btw. update soonnn :)

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

Awe this is so good....update soon

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

All I have to say is DAMN  SO  HOTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MrsRobertPattinson (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 6

I read this on ff.net, and I'm reviewing as you post it here.  I can't wait to read past what I already have!  It's amazing and angst and I loves it!

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

the description is amazing though i wish she was stronger than this.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 6

Thank you for the update. I'm completely confused, hot sex though so pretty awesome. Is Edward still fixated on Tanya or Bella, does Bella even know what she wants?

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Pretty good so far!

Reviewer: plaidpants17 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 5

OMG, what a way to end a chapter! I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!

Reviewer: CharzP (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 5

GAh! cliff hanger!

the story is fantastic :)



Author's Response:

thankies!

Reviewer: buffylvr (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

oohh!! that's good! i really want to know why tanya was so pissed. i have a theory that edward said bella's name during sex, but that's just my hopes.

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