Wow! Just.....WOW!  This was an awesome chapter and WELL worth the wait (and the cliff hanger last time).  Can't wait for the next chpt!  ;)

 

Hugs,

Kristi

What, was that a cliffy???  Gah! *bangs head on the keyboard*

That was the most intense make out session yet, awesome to say the least.

Cant wait to see what happens next *smirk*

Ahh! What a cliffie!!!!

 

This is such a great fic. I'm really amazed at how well-developed your OOC characters are, while still getting the spirit of Bella and Edward across. A great way to spend a Tuesday night! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Oh wow, what a fevered blend of anger, raw emotion, angst, and hot sex!  Excellent chapter! This line is just perfectly painful, Bella letting her resentment and anger and hurt out:

"You chose her!” I scream, moving back, truly burning with anger now, “You didn’t choose me, you dated her, you kissed her, you fucked her. I bet you even said you love—"

And you cliffied us!  If I wasn't so turned on, I'd be pissed!  Can't wait for more!

ahhhh a cliffie! great chapter but damn it to leave it like that LOL

i cant wait to read the next chapter.

You've got to be kidding ME! You. Are. EVIL!!!!! gAH! Ok, imagine me sitting on my bed with my laptop rocking back and forth shaking my hands sporadically in the air. This is what you've done to me. f-r-u-s-t-r-a-t-e-d. I think I spelled that correctly. I love angst, I love suspense. I'm not really complaining. Ok, I'm kinda complaining. But. I love you. Really can't wait. For. Next. Chapter.

WAIT!!!...that-what-but-I-AHHHHH! You BEAST! How dare you? I can't stand cliffies.....AND YOU put iot in THE MIDDLE of a sex scene. ARE YOU TRYING TO KIL YOUR READERS? my top theories include knocking at the dorr, since she screamed, she's a virgin (also proved by screaming) or Edwards just frustrated.....Please, i'm eggin tyou and promising all sort of sexual favors that probably aren't legal, but please, just please update....I'm dying here with the sexual tension!

ahhhh! that was amazing and edward's reaction and her insecurities and just brilliant. 

 

but what the hell?? either charlie just walked in or she's a virgin?!

It's been weeks since your last post...and you stop it there!?! AHHHHHH!!!!!! You're such a tease!! *grumble grumble*  Can I have som'more please?

kind of lost...did someone walk in and say that....did edward say that? lol

i mean bellas no virgin...she lost it to edward...right? *brain asplodes* oh well

update?

oh gosh, you can't just leave it there!

Very very cruel!  Good job:)