Reviewer: mattys_mama (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
Cripes, I live in Jacksonville - any chance I could get an actual address? It's a pretty big city to wander aimlessly in! ;-)
I love this story - I love Jasper, I love Emoward, and I can't decide who I want to win. At the end of Lesson in Release, I was thrilled Jasper won. Now, I'm dying for her to be back with Edward. God I'm fickle!
Reviewer: maria111 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
bella is the only person who is responsible for all this thing,i mean why on earth she remember she had to pretend when kelly was there?pff even that i am a female my self i do find us a bit %$#%#^
poor edward :( seriously this is the one who always get hurts :(
thanks for the new chapter i am glad i can read it before i leave for my easter holidays :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
I tossed him one over the island and tried not to cringe when he used the edge of the coffee table to pop the cap off. This made me laugh. I never thought of Edward worrying about furniture. This chapter gave me whiplash. Edward/Bella, Jasper/Bella. I think I need a chart. Bella seemed to be doing more than putting on a show for Kelly, I think she was marking her territory. Bella is going to need a shrink before this is over. Alice doesn't seemed as concerned for Jasper as she was. I wonder what she knows.
Reviewer: emmettsgirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
THEY NEED TO COME TO DURHAM, NC
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
I like where this is headed. :)
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
Oh ouch. Poor, poor Edward. Seriously. Fuck Jasper. Well ok maybe I had a moment of sympathy for him when he approached the house to rolling lust, but overall it's Edwad that is getting tortured in this situation. To have everything you dreamed of, to know the other person is faking and to know that it'll all end.
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
I have to say that I'm ever so happy for Edward. As much as you've made me think of Jasper in a whole different way, I'm team Edward at heart. When they kissed, I practically jumped for joy. THis entire story has been a roller coaster ride. You should be a professional writer.
And I feel sad for Jasper, but seeing Edward and Bella together, even if it is only a sham is simply wonderful.
Adrian is great. He and Alice seem to be made for each other. That slap of his was very cute. As is his use of the pet name Ally.
Andn now Edward is going to sing to Bella. I squeel in joy!
I liked that comment you made about people in love hurting each other. Our loved ones are the only ones that can hurt us because we love them. Great little bit of philosophy.
Ta
Master of the Boot
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
I just love this story!!! It is my number one favorite!! I cant wait for more! I wonder how this will work out for Jasper in the end, I have a feeling that Bella will choose Edward in the end...
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
Aaaahhhh - this back and forth between Edward and Jasper is torture to read. I'm 100% Team Edward but I don't like to read Jasper hurting. Damn, I think I'm as confused as Bella. How did that happen?
I still have a hard time reading Alice and Adrian together. It's not that I don't like Adrian. I love his character and his relationship with Bella. It's just Alice and Jasper were such a well suited pair and I think it sucks that they aren't together anymore. Of course, if they were we wouldn't have a story would we? It will be interesting to read some Alice and Jasper conversations when they start "pretending" to be a couple again. I wonder if they will work through their sexual frustrations together...
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
Jealous Bella is cracking me up - but they're still not being honest with each other. Man, I hope we're not going to have 10 chapters of Bella leading both of them on...it's going to be torture for all of them. I REALLY hope this doesn't end badly for Edward...he got the wrong end of the deal in your last story!! :D Thanks for the super fast updates! I hope you can keep it up!!
Reviewer: emmettsgirl08 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
omg i actually criedfor edward she hurt him soooooooo bad god i can feel that shit!
Reviewer: scimomyyy (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?
Another great chapter! I am SOOO curious as to what direction you are heading with all of this. As I've stated before, Go Edward! :)
Keep up the great work and thanks for the prompt updates. You're awesome!
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
i really hope that edward and bella get back together=) i love jasper and all but in this story it just feels right to have them end up together=)
Reviewer: Telulah (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks
I'm addicted to your story =) Keep up the writing!! I love you for updating so often =)
Reviewer: Voluptuous Vamp (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
Hmmm, is Kelly going to be a problem? I love how you made Bella stand up for herself in front of Kelly, but then was sad as soon as she knew she was hidden.
Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
I really think this story is breaking my heart for Edward. You are so awesome I feel Edwards hurt. I so hope Edward gets his happy ending. Please update soon I can't stand the supense.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
awww...the end almost made me cry. I feel bad for Edward, but he's kind of a wimp in this story. I'm hoping Bella is starting to realize she might actually want Edward back...I think Kelly will help with that. Is she ever going to realize that she didn't see Edward clearly?
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
I was certain the pain shown through my eyes as I got lost in hers. I could almost pretend I saw love there. Almost.
Those three sentences killed me. Edward may have let Bella go because he wanted her to be happy but damn if I don't wish he would have fought harder for her. His pain now kills me to read. I understand that it's really only through losing her that he is realizing how much pain he caused her. The guide really is a godsend for Edward to be able to find his way back to Bella by finally understanding so much more about their realtionship. You gotta admit that the Cullen family - all of them - have a tendency to think they know best about everything. Jasper, for all his intentions of letting Bella be more independent, more free, not treating her like a china doll etc... still thinks he knows what's best for her - same as Edward. That's what makes Edward revelations reading the guide so great - he is hit with the absolute truth that he doesn't know everything and that he needs to trust Bella more. Love should always be a two way street.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
This is really messed up poor Edward.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 20: A Bad Goodbye
Poor Edward.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
lovely
Reviewer: maria111 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
the new chapter really made my morning,reading it while drinking coffee and my eyes pop up suddently to these!thanks for the new chapter girl you know how much i enjoy reading!so lets starts :
I think Bella is a pain in the ass,with a good way ofcource,she has no idea the pain she causes in edward she has no idea how much edward is trying the battle of his feelings!yes she loves someone else but how in the heck she acts so bizzard when kelly shows up suddently eh?I mean she must felt jealous because i cant find any reason she kissed edward in front of her..ouch!
I like the idea they are back together trying to find a way to work up with things,i like the fact Jasper is not there and they both edward and bella sitting together and read her diary maybe this way she can remember somethings she has forgot or something but still..
Poor Edward he is def in pain poor guys :( he wanted to kiss her but then he remember that even that she wants her heart is somewhere else but Bella act so childlish i mean she was waiting for the kiss but when she didnt get it she simple run to her room and closed the door... argh bella!!
I hope her diary will make her to remember some things right?maybe some things she pretend she forgot or something
waiting for the next chapter!!! :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
Don't forget my birthday is on Tue!!!! 26 yrs old and as giddy as a highschool girl for a hope that I get a Naked Cullen party in North Bay Ontario!
Loved the chapter look forward to the next this chapter almost made me cry so close and yet so far away from where they need to be!
Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
I agree with Kelly. Girl's gotta mke up her freaking mind.
Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret
(Sigh) I am *so* Team Edward...
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