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Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You
yayyyy yayyyy yayyyy yayyyy i love bella and Edward! woohoooo!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You
Squeal!!! WOW his first time with Mr right hahahaha his hand LOL I am so looking forward to more chapters but when you said this was a show Edward some love chapter never ever did I think he would OMG and then he OMG and wow I mean squeal!!!
I can't wait to see how they talk their way throughthis and wow she was thinking of Edward so umm yeah Jasper can have Keppy he needs to find his happy ending!!!!
Post again soon SQUEAL!
Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You
Thx for updating so soon I love yr story :) I loved Japser's voicemails and txt msgs they were hilarious :) But that's probably because I am a massive Jasper fan in this story :) Well done again excellent writing!
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You
So grateful that you post so often
Reviewer: Lily Stargazer (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 19: As One
I live in a tiny town in Indiana.But Jazz is my favorite character ever and if he is naked? Even better!
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul
17 chapters of terrific so far! Not a B/J fan, but they are growing on me and but I'll sheepishly admit that I hope she ends up with Edward, but won't be angry if she doesn't. =)
Reviewer: sbr0275 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
great!!!! but poor Jasper :(
Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Poor Jasper. My heart is breaking for him. Please give him somebody that he can call "Darlin'." On a personal note, I received a phone call at the office today and the fellow employee on the other end called me "darlin'." I was so startled that I asked him to repeat what he had just said. I melted. He has no idea....... :) LOL In a follow up email, he thought that I had been offended, but I reassured him that I found it to be "doggone cute." OMG, I love Jasper!!
I am not writer......just a voracious reader!
Reviewer: Lily Stargazer (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Moirai
I loved it! Can't wait 2 see what happens next.
Reviewer: Lily Stargazer (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Moirai
I loved it! Can't wait 2 see what happens next.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Yeah! I'm so glad that they're going to make it. I'll make sure to get my girls on the phone and start getting ready for them. I feel so bad for Jasper. It however is really nice to start liking Edward again. Can't wait to see what she picks out for the wedding.
Reviewer: livedieyoung (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
I love it :) More Soon, me hopes.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Ow! You're breaking my heart (and Jasper's too)!
That said, I want you to know that despite the knocks that Team Jasper is taking, I am truly loving your story and can't wait to read more. I'm pretty sure I've neglected to say that in previous reviews.
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Love the direction this seems to be heading.
Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
OKay I am seriously on pins and needles. I've been re-reading this all day!! OMG! Does she end up with Edward? Jasper? Please let it be Edward. He's so fragile.
Speaking of. I want him! lol. Have them come to Southgate Michigan. It's close to Detroit. ;) lol
I'm waiting for my story to be Validated. It's a song fic. But the song I use. Would work GREAT in your story. It's "everytime" by britney spears. Here are the lyrics
Come notice me
And take my hand
So why are we
Strangers when
Our love is strong
Why carry on without me?
And everytime I try to fly
I fall without my wings
I feel so small
I guess I need you baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, it's haunting me
I guess I need you baby
I make believe
That you are here
It's the only way
I see clear
What have I done
You seem to move on easy
And everytime I try to fly
I fall without my wings
I feel so small
I guess I need you baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, it's haunting me
I guess I need you baby
I may have made it rain
Please forgive me
My weakness caused you pain
And this song is my sorry
Ohhhh
At night I pray
That soon your face
Will fade away
And everytime I try to fly
I fall without my wings
I feel so small
I guess I need you baby
And everytime I see you in my dreams
I see your face, it's haunting me
I guess I need you baby
Let me know what you think. I'll be checking frequently for updates!!! please hurry to squelch my nerves! I need MORE!!!!! your new pal. Tabby
Reviewer: EBCullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Prologue
Okay I will admit I was all Team edward before I read a lesson of release. Now I am rooting for Jasper! I was very disappointed to hear Bella say she still loves Edward....I am actually starting to dislike her again. Please...for my sanity DO NOT let edward win....stick him with Kelly...they make a better match!
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
This chapter was too short, although I do appreciate how quickly you update. I am hooked on this story. I am beginning to woner though, will something eventually develop between Kelly and Jasper? Or am I thinking wrong? I really need Edward and Bella to reconcile. They were meant to be with each other although Bella did cheat.
Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Poor Jasper!
Reviewer: Rylee Skye (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Arkansas is next right? I do hope so...
Amazing chapter. I feel like I'm having to choose between the boys as well! Gah!! :)
~Rylee
Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Oooh, South Dakota? I could make that trip in a couple of hours. ;)
Great song, but I think Jasper's starting to get on my nerves. Spoken like a true Team Edward member, eh?
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Poor Jasper. You really don't know who has it worse here Jeaper or Edward.
Thanks for posting.
Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Oh no, no!! Please, please don't let her go back to Edward! I'm not necessarily anti-Edward (I like E/B stories usually), but "Lesson in Fate" has been my JasperxBella fix and I don't want to lose that. In your story, it just seems that Jasper & Bella are better for each other than she & Edward are. Please let her & Jasper be ok! Aargh! Now I really can't wait for an update - I'll be wanting her & Jasper to get back together, but even if you don't take that route, I'm so hooked, I'll have to read about her getting back with Edward like I'm watching a train wreck! I understand her need for space & time to think, but it doesn't seem like Bella is being fair - I never would have pictured Bella being in love with two guys like this. The suspense is killing me! (By the way, you're doing a fantastic job weaving this tale, if you couldn't tell from how addicted I've become to it!) Pleae keep up your great writing & update soon!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
I love that song. Perfect for the moment.
No wonder she had made that rule about not being affectionate in front of Edward. No man should ever have to see the girl he loved in the arms of another man. This is just occuring to Jasper now? He really has been thoughtless throughout this. Hating Edward, hoping Edward doesn't steal Bella from him, not thinking of the pain his brother must be in losing the only woman he's ever loved in over 100 years.
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
Are you kidding me that Jasper actually had the gall to make Bella feel guilty by saying he wouldn't share her? What exactly did he think happened when he stole her in the first place? Of course he's always known she still loved Edward, but instead of recognizing her dueling feelings, he ignored them it and capitalized on her sexual desires to win her over. His arrogance is no better than Edward's. In fact, it may even be worse because Edward had never been in love before Bella. He was going to make collosal mistakes as he learned how to love Bella, just like she would make mistakes. Jasper, on the other hand, had been in love with Alice - for years! He understood that it takes a partnership to make things work.
Ugh - his betrayal of Edward's lack of knowledge in loving someone is disgusting.
Still, only a good story can evoke a passionate rant like that. So please, don't stop. :)
~Lisa
Reviewer: Painfully_Addicted (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: Confessions Part II
So... I think I might have an idea where this is going but I c=don't want to say it and be completely be wrong... so i wont...
But I just want you to know that I LOVE this story!! Every time I see there is a new chapter I get really excited!!
Can't wait to see if I am right about that is coming up... =]
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