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Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Excellent change scene, I like that it was short, because most of it was already done. Very nice chapter!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow
can't wait to find out what they will think!!! GREAT WRITING!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
I liked it!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!! :)
Reviewer: aussievamp (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Fantastic chapter...but YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE PROM SCENE! You promised Charlie remember!!!! sigh!!! Love it Love it LOVE IT!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
You know what? THATS HOW BREAKING DAWN SHOULD HAVE BEEN! Edward changing her ROMANTICALLY, then them having a NORMAL relationship. Not Bella being Super!Bella, and being PERFECT. THANK YOU!
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
OH Yeah!!! I think this is one of my favorite chapters. Thank you
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Yea! Yea! A super Chapter! Thanks for a great story!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Freaking awesome.... AMAZING!!!! I love how Charlie told Edward to do it... hehehehehe
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
just dandy chapter--I'll be interested in her going to this year's prom, or will she have to wait a few more decades?
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Thank you for updating! I've been so anxious about this one. *biting nails again* You did such a wonderful job with this chapter. I hate that Bella couldn't do a few more "human" things before her change like visit her mother and go to the prom, but I see why Edward had to do it now. I can't believe Charlie gave his permission, but being a good father, he saw that she was too vulnerable in that world to remain as she was. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Yes, I'm that greedy. I'm already ready for another one!
Author's Response: I'm glad you understood my motivation for Charlie giving his permission. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
This was perfect. I loved it. I'll be sad if this is the last chapter, but you did an AMAZING job if it is. This story seriously is one of my favorites. I would love to see a sequel!!! :) You're an amazing writer and I so cannot wait to read more of your stuff!!!
Thank you so much for sharing and I hope there is at least one or two chapters left :) If not...Thanks!!!
Author's Response: I definitely have one or two chapters left. Still debating on the sequel. I'll write a few chapters and see if they flow. If not, I'll leave it in a good place so that the story can stand on its own. Thanks D!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
awww..that was cute.
She called him an asshole, he called her a bitch! How dare he! I still think Edward is the asshole, Bella was just provoked, hmph! It's funny though!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
outstanding!!!! Hilarious!
Reviewer: leena (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
I loved it it was a great chapter
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'
Wait, how can Edward think she's pregnant if they haven't done it?
I mean, wasn't that the reason he almost lost his control? That they pushed their boundaries? Did something happen at the back of the car? But how can they have done it there without Edward not losing control?
Reviewer: Evilangel6714 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
YAY!!! Wow I've never had a chapter dedicated to me before. I feel special! lol I'm so happy he finally changed her and i found it hilarious that she was the one that actually ended up "taking him for a ride" lol The UST must have really gotten to her. Any way thank you again for the dedication and I'm sad that we are almost at the end, but if you do decide to make a sequal I promise to make a banner for that one too.
Author's Response: Thanks for everything! The banner rocks! I love it!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
i am still loving your story! It is completely different than any other I have read! Great writing...and I really mean that!
Sorry I am just getting to the story....I see that it has been posted for a while....better late than never, right?!?!?!?!?!?
Teacher
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
oh wow that was so funny that she jumps Edward almost immediately hehe :)
Reviewer: hurley1003 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
That was an amazing chapter! I could not see Edward changing her in anyother way. It was passionate and just the way Bella needed.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Squeee!!!
Wow Holy Crow hot ness!!!!!
That was intense and wild and just breathtaking! The moment with Charlie made my heart swoon the love froma father for his daughter is a strong bond and he handed it to Edward and with love and devotion to what Bella could ever have hoped for! And what a change! I mean that was just well writen no surprsie I guess all your chapters thus far have been just that extrmely calculating graceful free flowing and perfectly put together! You know how to take a chapter and turn every emotion from sadness to utter elation!!!
Post again soon That was a hot wake up scene hehehe!
Author's Response: Thanks Sarah. I like emotionally packed chapters--that's for sure. I think the next one will be a little lighter though. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
AAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know what to say, I blushed SO many times!!!!!! FANTASTIC chapter!!!!!! I agree that this chapter woud be a good end but I also want you to keep going!!! I guess we will see, soon hopefully?! Let me know (if you decide) what your sequel will be. WOW!!!! I'm leaving you with: AAAAAAHHHHHHHH OMG!!!!! Squeal!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I hope blushing was a good thing? Don't know...I guess it was. Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Woohoo! Finally!
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
WOnderful change! I really liked that Bella was a "caveman" a little while. Mostly in other fics she just wakes up without any kind of newborn effects. It gets little boring after reading it about dozen times.. XD Anywya, love this fic, and I hope you continue it still :DD
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love that she just HAD to have sex even before she hunts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
loved this chapter!!! I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY! It is becoming one of my new favs! I love the competition you have set up here! I am just wondering about how easy it is to get to the Edward and Bella being together! And where are the other brainless girls? Jessica, Lauren...you know...dee da dees!!! ANGELA IS GREAT THOUGH!
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