has any one ever told you your a 100xbetter at writing then stephine meyer becuz you are twilight would be alot better if you wrote it:)

                           as always your #1 fan

                                                           jj

Author's Response:

jj--I don't know about being better than Steph.  She came up with this stuff--with Edward--one of the best male characters ever.  And though I started writing fanfic because of certain issues I had with the characters (the self-loathing from Bella was depression, plain and simple, to me--being a person who suffers with it--to me, Bella needed therapy) and because of how much I HATE book 4, it's still her brain child.  I hope to write my first novel starting this summer.  I've always loved writing, and I will have more time this summer and fall to write.

Thanks for the kind words.  I hope I continue to do my story justice.

LOL okay so yes I liked how she was changed.. good touch.
And I just love the fact that her little nympho brain clicked in as soon as she "woke" up.. lol
Nice.. Cavewoman Bella..
Priceless..

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Glad you liked it.

wow this is a great story im rereading the twilight series and this edward and bella outdo sm edward and bella ten times!

          your #1 fan

                          you guessed it,jj

Who wouldn't want to read a lemon?  Crazy people.  That's why I like this website so much b/c it does have lemons that satisfies the adult in me.  They are fun.  Personally, I wish yours was a little more graphic.  But none the less, I love reading your stories.

Author's Response:

After rewriting that chapter, I realized that the person shouldn't have been reading NC-17, because of what they described that they found acceptable.  Too late. 

I don't like to spell everything out too much.  I like leaving a lot of it to the reader's imagination.  I could write graphic, but to me and in my mind, I find that my mind runs away with things much more and it is more satisfying, to an extent, when things are left a little nebulous.  Does that make sense?  Anyway, thanks so much for your honesty and for reading my story.  You are very kind.

thank you sooo much i almost died with the giddyness i felt when they started making out

your forever #1 fan

                           jj

I very much enjoy this story- I love that you have original ideas yet you still include original Twilight staples within... I can't wait to read on!

disappointed with chapter 16 the smut is the best part thats what makes stories on here so exciting they are real not like just a story like acutualy being there but i still luv ya so dont get the wrong idea but you could of taken just little farther

       your 4ever fan jj

Author's Response:

Again, this was my first time venturing into this territory, and I got a review that scared me into taming the scene.  It gets better.  Lots of steamy moments.  I'm still not terribly graphic--just not my style.  My I can steam things up, and I do, with time.  Thanks for hanging with me, plinky.

Loved it totally!! Thanks for your hard work!!

When I started reading this story I stared to rate every chapter b/c I was so impressed.  But then I thought I'd just wait until the end to rate.  BUT I'm rating this chapter b/c I wanted you to know how much I liked it and I'm not done reading, yet but I've been pleased so far.  Just thought I'd let you know.  Take care.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words.  I really appreciate all the nice things you say.  You take care too!

I hope you continue this story in a sequel. 

Not trying to influence you in any way, but I would love to find a story in which the author gives us a peek into the future. One in which Bella is a full fledged member of the family and they are attending another school. I am sure there are others out there, but I have only found a few fitting that story line.  After finishing Breaking Dawn that was one of the first thoughts I had, in that I would love to find a story that shows them happily married, and living as a family. 

Sorry for my rambling! : )  Just have wished for a while now to find a happy sequel to Breaking Dawn. Are there any stories you would recommend?

Thanks for the story... as I said, I hope you keep up the story in a sequel. I enjoyed your take on Twilight!

Sarah

 

 

 

Author's Response:

I haven't found a "happily ever after" yet either, except for Jen Wordsong's fic.  But it's more about the wedding and sex afterwards.  It's great, but I'm like you--want more school and teenage stuff.  I've already been thinking about the first chapter of the sequel.  I'll write it, but not sure if I'll post it.

I might be actually doing more chapters than I thought to end this.  I started writing, and I feel like I'm rushing through some important stuff.  So, I'll ellaborate and expand.  Thanks for reading, scrider.

You win the prize for the sexiest change into a vampire ever.  Hot, Hot, Hot!

Aww, I did like the change! Yay Bella and Edward :)

love the story but there's a mistake in this chapter, the wolf pack can only hear each other's thoughts when they are in wolf form. jacob wasn't in wolf form when talking to bella but he could hear and reply to leah's thoughts and the taunts of the other wolves.

but the story is awesome anyway!

Author's Response:

I haven't gotten to that yet and may not until the sequel.  In my story, they can--it will be explained later, trust me.  Thanks for reading, Ellie.