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Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
very cute at both ends, and nicely HOT in the middle
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Too freaking funny and OMG...WAY hot!!! That lemon against the tree had be flushed !!!! :D LOL. You so freaking rock. I gotta have some more of that!
I'm so excited that Bella doesn't like the smell of human blood. That is so awesome. That way she can go to school and spend time with Charlie.
Hey....They need an Eraser Room!!! :D LOL...That's a pretty hot place :D lol
Author's Response: Eraser/blackboards are being replaced, at least in my area of the country, with computerized smart boards or write-on/wipe-offs. So, no eraser room in my story. I might find someplace for them though. Thanks D! Loved your latest Insomnia update, btw.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
A sweet and great chapter!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
LOL!
Reviewer: tillynat (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Priceless, i can't wait for the rest. loved it
Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
So Funny
And Edward is definately lickable!
Reviewer: nessiebells (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
OMG that was good!! Thank you.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
yay this is a cute chapter - I'm glad Charlie is okay!
Reviewer: Amillyna (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Fabulous! I love this story! I really hope you write the sequel. :)
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Awesome just awesome.
Thank you sooooo much for sharing this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Awesome chapter. Edward is persistance when he wants something.
It's funny when the entire family gets togther and teases one another. Like Carlisle telling Bella that Edward ruined 26 pairs of underwear...hilarious. Also, Emmett and Jasper picking on Bella and Edward about thier hunting 'happy time' lol.
Alice made Jasper dress up like a woman? Poor Jasper, although it is funny. It makes his ringtone even funnier! And it looks like Bella is starting to tease, with putting that picture of him on Alice and Jasper's door. xD
Please update soon?
Author's Response: No--not a woman. An 80's rocker (hair-band era--think Twisted Sister). But with the hot pink and lacy shirt, it was kind of womanish. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the teasing.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Happy Times for Newbie Bella!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
HAHAHAHAHA!!! I needed that! Thanx. So, cute and fun and damn, hell yeah sexy! More please!!! with Edward as the ice cream...lick.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
SQUEEE!!!!!!!!!!
I love it absolutly LOVE IT!!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
WOW that was great i cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
This story is just too damn good at this point to stop!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Oh that is just BRILLIANT!!!! I love how Bella reacts to the picture. The note sounds threatening and funny all at the same time!!! I love it. Great as usual!!!!!!
Jace
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Ah...pink spandex....You may have just ruined Jasper for me...LOL!
Kathie
Author's Response: I snorted at your comment. Thanks for making me smile.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Classic, just classic! SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL! Can you tell I want one bad???
Reviewer: liltennisfreak56 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
ok so i just wanted to comment back to you from your other comment. and i just wanted to say that the first chapter edward was creepy but i still love your story. :) thank you so much. i didnt mean to sound attacking or anything. haha and you are a really good writer!
Author's Response: Thanks. Hopefully he will seem less creepy to you as the story progresses. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: mountaintop (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I love your Edward
Author's Response: Thanks, mountaintop. I'm glad. Some people are creeped out by him. I'm glad you aren't one of them. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
i refuse to let you be done with this story please say you have more i want to hear the comments from emmett after hearing that please post just one more chapter please please please
your anxious fan
jj
Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
sequel
sequel
sequel i must have sequel
your now on edge #1 fan
jj
Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
that was a good chapter i really liked the comment about the "fast balls"lol and about your contacts as a contact wearer my self my eye doctor said if my contacts bother me to much and removing them dosent help i need to switch brands for i could cause damage to my eyes im saying this because i dont want you to go blind because try typing with your eyes closed sometime its very hard
your now slighty concerned # 1 fan
jj
(also i feel like ive been kinda writing alot im starting to worry that i might be becoming a pest tell me and ill lay off the review
Author's Response: After two months of suffering with hard contacts, I got soft (yesterday). What a huge comfort difference! I just couldn't tolerate the hard lenses.
You aren't a pest. Thanks for reading, jj.
Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
YaY lemons i love lemons and i like how you went into detail but not a minute by minute play by play i really hope theres more and ive heard about some nasty comments about another time you put in lemons but that person had no idea what good writing is and you should just scroll by people like that u r an excellent writer lemons and all:)
none other than your #1 fan
jj
Author's Response: Yep. The person who wrote the review had no business reading NC-17. She was a complete prude. But, with it being my first step into that, it jarred me enough to make me change my story.
My lemons will never be that graphic. I have a wicked imagination, and I don't like to spell everything out. I want other people's imaginations to fill in the gaps. Usually what our minds can come up with is better than reading it all anyway. At least it is for me. I've been criticized for not being graphic enough, but that's life. Can't please everyone. Thanks for reading jj.
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