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Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Great (hot) chapter! Sad it's almost over, you are a great writer :) Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

You're brilliant! This fic should never end...

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

LOL

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

You bet this story will be able to stand on its own!!  It's in "my favorites" and will stay there.  I do hope you write a sequel(?) and it's not too twisted.  Not that I think you are twisted.  Not at all.  I just like the light hearted, heavy lemoned ones. (smile)

Thank you for writing this story.  I thought it was awesome and thoroughly(?) enjoyed it.  I wish you the best!!



Author's Response:

It's still not over--there's a chapter or two left.  Thanks for the kind words and for reading.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Loved it..Can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

“I’m so damn proud of you two!  Damn proud!  A destroyed bed and sex so loud that it chased away my meal!  I’m just so…so…happy…”  He started mock crying, making Bella bury her head even further into my chest. 

Twenty-seven minutes and three pairs later, Bella had successfully put on both her bra and her panties.  It was a huge accomplishment.

Emmett’s grin broadened.  “Oooooh.  Well, Bella.  How many have ya’ gone through so far?  House record for most underwear ruined by a newborn is twenty-six.”

Bella laughed.  “Is that your record, Emmett?”

Carlisle chuckled.  “No, actually, it’s Edward’s.”

“Thanks a lot, Father,” I said sarcastically.

“You’re welcome, son.”

 

LOL... this chapter was HILARIOUS!!! good work



Author's Response:

Glad you found so many things to smile about.  After the intensity with the James thing, I needed to write some comedy, and I think you all deserved some relief.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

OMG! I laughed so hard reading this chapter. Jasper's ringtone and explanation ... rofl ... Bella taping a copy of the photo on their door with the words "I Know" ... absolutely, freaking priceless!

Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

love it

Reviewer: berdb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Funny!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

That wass cute!! Two thumbs up.

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

That was great!!!! Poor Jasper!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

80's hair bands are hysterical.  That was great.  Good first hunt, too!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Funny chapter!  Can't wait for the chapter!  This was a cute chapter!  Love the Jasper story!

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Kristi:

Happy belated Mother´s day!

I enjoyed this chapter very much! That Jasper bit, ha, ha, too funny and cute. You don´t have to worry about your lemon it was tame, but hot nonetheless!!!

You were right, after last chapter we needed comic relief.

Keep writting, don´t stop.

 

sincerely,

Karina.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Karina.  I had a good Mother's Day because I have the world's greatest hubby and kids.  I am really blessed.  If you're a mom, I hope you had a nice one too.

Glad you liked this.  Thanks for reading, Karina.

Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

FANTASTIC STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Pink Zebra Spandex pants????  ROFLMAO...  I can just picture Jasper in those.

I wonder where the secret rendezvous is gonna be?

Reviewer: yuriinsane (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

love this chapters yey please please make sequel or few more chapters and are you going to explain the powers bella and edward has becuase she is his singer and mate and edward is her creator oris that for sequel i laughed and fell of the bed reading the jasper part i love it lolx

Reviewer: HisAngel8 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

That was hilarious. Although, I am curious has to where they were living in the eighties and why it was so clost to port angeles. I cant wait for the next chapter. Good job!



Author's Response:

Hmmm...good point about the Port Angeles thing.  I'll have to get my map and look...

Reviewer: Hev (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

That was wonderful xxxxx

Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

I need to make sure I go potty before reading your chapters...  I swear I almost tinkled..   This chapter was too funny.   I will be sad to see this story go, but I will be looking forward to the sequel.   Once again, you put out a great chapter!

Reviewer: budgiec (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

The Jasper story was so freaking funny!  I really could picture it.

Reviewer: angie54 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

that part about the photo is funny i hope every things turns out good for them

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

hilarious!  I am so glad that things seem to be working out!  YAY!!!!!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

oh wow - the whole underwear thing was hilarious

“Yeah, and that’s still eighteen less than you, Mr. I’m Not As Perfect As I Want Everyone to Think I Am.”

lol I think this is where someone usually adds "you go, girl!" or words to that effect :)

And Jasper... whilst I'm chuckling, I can't be too bad about it because there's enough compromising photos of me around the place lol it was fun though :)

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn

Hilarious! This has been a fab story.

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