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Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
omg! That is amazing!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Very cute chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Yay as much as I enjoy the drama, a happy, lemony chapter is just good fun xxx
Reviewer: weirdstar007 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
very funny
Reviewer: LilMoCullen (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
*LOL* This chaoter was cute :D
Reviewer: AliciaZA (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Absolutely FABULOUS chapter! I loved it!! Possibly my Favourite chappie, but since I loved them all, its hard to tell (lol). I adored Jasper and Emmett in this chapter - they were hysterical. The fluff & lemony goodness was Brilliant. I could not stop giggling about the underwear issue, the note passing between Edward & Bella and the story behind Jasper's ringtone. I seriously hope that you write a few more chapters - I want to know what Bella's gift/power is!! And I so DESPERATELY want to read about Edward & Bella's WEDDING!!
About the sequel, PLEASE write one!! There's so many creative plot lines to be mined - the Denali Coven, the Volturi, the Quilete werewolves, Victoria (looking for revenge maybe), Bella's half-brother/sister (since Renee is pregnant), the plot lines are endless. Since "I've Been Waiting For You" was so brilliantly written, you could add new unexpected plots since this is YOUR story. Keeping my hopes up (hopeful grin) but looking forward to whatever you write.
You Rock... AliciaZA
P.S. Congrats on making the top ten most reviewed list!
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
I love it and love what you have done with it!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
Dont worry..i dont think the love scenes were there just to so you could feed us lemons, LOL (although, i like some lemons too, haha). This is Edward's POV and it's part of his struggle. In the earlier chapters, he almost killed her when they got to that part so this part is necessary to show his progression and his control. thanks, i think it was done great :)
Reviewer: nugnugs (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
I have always loved this story from the very start of it and will be so disappointed when its time for it to end so pretty please with sugar on top tell me that you will be writing a sequel to it??? I just LOVE your intiguing way of writing which keeps me spellbound with every single chapter update that u end up putting out....please give me something to look forward to after this one ends by giving me another one to read and look forward to. I will already love you forever as it is but i'll even love you more so if u should decide to continue with a sequel to it.....hehehe....thats how much i love this story and would very much miss it. I live for updates to this story....;-) Keep up the AWESOME job and writing....LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!
HUGS,
NUGNUGS (DONNA)
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
I love it, you did so well with this story all the way through! You are a great author! I hope you had time to work on your actual book!
Reviewer: kay321 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
great chapter! I am glad there will be at least one more!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Another escellent chapter, it is very well written, entertaining and humerus, while always managing to stay true to the spirit of the characters and their realtionships with each other. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially sonce Bella is now a vampire, with no apparent blood lust, and starting to associate with the humans around forks.
I also loved the teasing and banter between the Cullen children, the image of Jasper as a dude is a lady is halarius, and now that bella is one up on Jasper, I think it's about time that Emmett got his comupence, and I can't wait to see what Bella does to him.
Please don't keep us waiting for too long, it's not uncomfortable sitting on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits
Just HAVE to stop here and thank you for having Bella insist on brushing her teeth before her morning make-out session with Edward. NOTHING is worse than reading a story that skips that critical detail and has two people smooching with morning breath. So much worse when one is a vampire and has super-senses. It takes all the joy out of the scene for me.......but then, I'm sort of neurotic. ;-)
Fantastic story so far and I'm settling in for a marathon read. Can't wait to see where you take me.
Author's Response: I like to promote good dental hygene--lol!
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
What a nice chapter. I like that Bella adjusted so well. I'd love to hear more about what the other students thought about Bella's transformation. It's always so interesting to hear what they say while Edward hears what they mean :)
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
The beginning of this chapter made me think very hard and the conclusion I came to is that I quite like "wild, uncivilized fucking" lemons, lol. I think we should definitely have Bella and Edward go hunting together again. :D
Bella's underwear problem was quite funny and it was even funnier that Edward was the reigning champion of destroyed underwear. I love how you incorporate stuff like that into your story. It kinda makes you scratch your head and think "Huh, I never thought about that aspect of being a newborn before." Same thing with the doors. I love that kind of stuff.
I also loved Emmett and Jasper's teasing, of course. Big surprise there, huh? Lol. And the dinner with Charlie was very sweet as always. I do kinda hope he gets to see Cullen baseball, lol, I can just imagine the look on his face, but it probably will ruin regular baseball games for him. Really happy about Bella's lack of bloodlust. And I loved Alice's comment about being outside the mall for her was like dangling a carrot in front of a rabbit.
And the story of Jasper's ringtone...priceless. So freaking funny, but also very sweet in a way. I guess he really has proven that he would do ANYTHING to make Alice happy. Awwww, hehe.
LOVED IT!
Author's Response: Thanks TJ. I'm glad you liked so much about the chapter. It was so much fun to write.
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Haha, that's awesome. Jasper with 80s pants! :D
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Oh my cullen I do love this chapter to death.... Laught so much on the underware of mr. Cullen ooooo and poor em's dinner that was was great you did great on that part... Jasper's ring tone is my song from the 80's..... You did a great job I laught threw the whole chapter....see yeah next chapter. (Kym)
Author's Response: Thanks Kym.
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
This was a wonderful chapter! It had some humor, some family fun, some time with Charlie and was a little bit lemony. I really loved it.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Loved the lemon--nice & juicy. This made me laugh--Your Emmett is so funny--
My obnoxious brother came over to congratulate us. “I’m so damn proud of you two! Damn proud! A destroyed bed and sex so loud that it chased away my meal! I’m just so…so…happy…” He started mock crying, making Bella bury her head even further into my chest.
Jasper came over and handed Emmett a hanky, which he proceeded to pretend to blow his nose into noisily. I couldn’t help but roll my eyes, but it was only in mock irritation. In reality, I was torn. Part of me wanted to rip them apart for teasing us. Another part wanted to gloat. Yes, I had mind blowing sex twice in as many hours. I felt like a stud.
“Our little boy has become a man, Emmett. I remember just the other day, he was a prude little vampire. Where has the time gone?” My sisters and parents howled with laughter in the background.
I'm glad that Bella is doing so well as a vampire. It's a funny bit that newborns destroy their underwear, and Jasper's hair-metal pic is a hoot! Great chapter!
Author's Response: I like making you all smile. I think we all deserved some light hearted fun. Thanks for reading, my1edward.
Reviewer: rannaoja (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
tee heeee !!!!! Awesome!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
=D
My sides are pleasantly sore after that amazing chapter!! HELL YESS to that damn hot lemon.
I love this story and my heart is sniffling because I don't want the story to end, but I am excited for you to work on Cinderbella and Gifted =D Which are my two favorite stories on this site. hehe.
More please
Reviewer: rannaoja (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I totally loved this chapter!!!AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Fantastic chapter!!! I loved Charlie's reactions to everything, and Bella having zero bloodlust is awesome. Your explanation of the ringtone had me cracking up too!
Great job, it was nice having lighthearted banter and just fun with this chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story and whatever you do next!!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
ohhh, that is good
Reviewer: hellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Beautiful chapter! I love the shedded underwear.
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