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Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Oh. My. God.
OK --- so eternally happy that I found this story when I did because if I were reading this when you were first writing this and this was the sadness that I was left with until the next update --- well, there are no words.
Thankfully there is a chapter 14 waiting for me! YAY!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Extremely interesting. Can't wait to read the other chapters.
Reviewer: 8th-cullen-is-here (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
all i got to say is HOT DAMN you are good keep it up and hopefully there will be some sort of miracle like oh i dont know maybe....umm where to start well the prom n grad and the full change of bella... and i know this sounds like what everyone wants but if you decide to give them kids how bout a boy n girl like edward pictured.... and will there be a wedding.... im just a sucker for bella and edwards happiness
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
LOL "For the first time in my life, I was jealous of water." --- I loved this line. Cracked right up!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
this was a sweet chapter. i loved the snowball fight!!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
LOL I love Naughtyward --- he's so adorably sexy = )
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
Yet another amazing chapter.
I can't wait for more!!!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow
I know I am hitting this a lot later than most people but I have to comment --- Bella is a quick one and I think she's thinking up some things. It is killing me not to skip ahead!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Again, so cute. I agree with you totally --- his little monologue is a great part of this chapter. You have a real talent for writing these characters!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Such a nice chapter --- I loved Edward and Bella's first kiss! = )
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
I loved it! I only wish that they had Nessie....they are destined to be parents!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
So I just picked up this story today looking for some new things to read and I am awfully glad I did. First off, let me say --- a comment about the previous chapter (one) --- I didn't think it was perverted or anything with Edward and baby Bella --- it was well done and fit with this story.
Aside from that comment, I really like this. Its a cute little unique twist! I don't normally do Pre-Twilight or Twilight stories but I am glad I ventured out from my comfort zone = )
Thanks and I am sure I will enjoy!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you like it, and I hope you continue to.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
i am sad for them not having a baby..
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
LOL "dead puppies" OMG shaking with laughter
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Bella vs Lauren cage fight!!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
Terrific chapter. Definately not filler. Loved the beach (yeah!) and their discussion about the baby.
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
Not too bad for a filler. I LOVED to snowball fight and the snowboarding, that was my favorite!!! Can't wait for the update!!!
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
*giggle* bring it down a notch Edward...Newton *hehehe* such a loser. Having fun reading!!
Reviewer: Cullen Forever (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Its sweet and i like how he new her from a baby. That is so CUTE
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Loved first chapter, can't wait to read more. Read your notes...never felt like Edward was creepy-definately viewed like the imprinting thing in SM's books, nothing icky ;-)
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
I think this was a sweet and funny chapter! I didn't feel it was a filler at all. It was very entertaining!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
I agree it is not necesary, but I like that you did not completely ignore the fact that she also has a mother. I liked the way you wrote this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for your honesty. I felt like I needed to explain some of the time instead of just heading to the end of school. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
Sweetie, if this is filler, keep it coming. I loved it. How they felt when they were separated was cool, the snowball trip and ski fight were fun, I liked Bella enjoying the car and both of them with the baby, and of course, always looking for more!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
I love the graphic way that you write - it's perfect it suits the story and characters so well. Please don't let others make you feel bad.
Reviewer: rannaoja (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
I do not understand why you would get a negative reaction from something that you had written so beautifully!!!
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