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Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

*sniff* wonderful beautiful can only begin to describe this story i love the last line and will be waiting anxiously for the sequel

         your #1 fan


Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps

I didn't notice any of the bold, because your writing is that GOOD!!!

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within

I'm angry... Not with you, but with your Edward... He's being stupid, and he's going to leave her... It's going to SUCK!

Reviewer: nugnugs (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Hi Kristi.....i just received your response to my review i left a couple hours ago in regards to your out of this world story thats regretably ended now....:-(  I  had asked if you were going to go on with the much awaited sequel to this fanfic story and u had mentioned that u had started it last night but didnt like the way it turned out so you were scrapping it???  Does this mean that u were going to scrap it for good and forget about the sequel to it or that u were just scrapping what u had wrote last night that u didnt end up liking and start again with it???  I sure do hope that u will give it a go at it again for i have i cant tell u how much faith in u that u will be able to write a killer sequel to this wonderful story of yours...;-)  I mean anyone needs to do is just read any of your other stories and know that u are able to write and create any story.  You're absolutely one of the most very best authors out here in the TWILIGHT FANFICTION pretty please with lots and lots of sugar on top, dont give up on writing the sequel to this story.  I would just love to see Edward & Bella have their fancy wedding and to see more about their most romantic love life together.


Author's Response:

No--I just scrapped what I wrote then--I just wanted to start it differently.  I didn't like how I started it.  So, I'm doing the beginning a little differently.  As I said, I'll write several chapters before posting it to make sure it will take.

Thanks for your kindness.  I really appreciate the sweet things that you say.  I'm glad you read my stories.  Thanks.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike

lol this story is very different, but it's amusing and entertaining to read definitely.

Reviewer: TwilightDiva (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting


Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

I love Em, he's one of my favorite characters.  You know he's a dirty talker.  Between that, and his fun personality, and all those muscles....Rose is a lucky lucky woman.  hehe

Great job!  Must keep reading....

Author's Response:

Emmett is loosely based on my hubby.  He's a wonderfully funny man to have in my life.  We have a great marriage.  I'm really blessed.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up

Around 8:30 that evening, everyone settled in the living room to watch a movie.  It was Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire.  I groaned.  Bella, Alice, and Rosalie kept commenting on how good-looking the guy that played Cedric Diggory was.  He was the whole reason they chose that particular movie.  Therefore, being the jealous man that I am, my objective was to completely distract my future mate so that she would want to leave with me to…well, do other things.  So when the lights were turned off, I went to work.


that was my fave part, because Cedric is Edward, well Robert... But it's funny. Because even when I read the books I pictured him, or someone who would be very close to him! :) SO thanks for that. It made my day

Reviewer: nugnugs (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Oh my heavens...i cannot begin to express just how very much i have enjoyed reading every single word of this story of yours.  All the times ive kept checking my e-mails to see if that day was going to be the day another chapter update was going to pop up waiting for me to, it was sheer torture at times for me.  I absolutely possitively LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVE're one super duper talented writer and dont u ever forget it either, my friend!!!!  Please oh please, decide to go on with writing a sequel to this story for i dont know if i will be able to take not reading anymore of know you would make this one fan of yours a very happy person if u would pretty please carry on with the story.  THanx again for such an AWESOME story.  I'm about in tears just knowing theres nomore updates to look forward to any longer...:-(


Author's Response:

Thanks Donna.  I started working on the sequel last night, but I don't like how it started, so I'm scrapping it.

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I love your story! :) It's exciting and different

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 14: Truth

It was completely reversed from the original... I liked it!

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party

I called it!!! It's soo sad though, she called him exactly how he feels he is... :((

Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

So, now it ended. Beautiful :')

I really hope you do the sequel, your stories are wonderful to read. I love them <3

And this surely was one of my most favorites, it's a great fic :D

Thank you, again <3



Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

ohh no, she's gonna freak out! Isn't she!!! I'm grabbing tissues just in case...

Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

i loved that!!!! so cute

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Thank you for everything. I don't think that it could have ended better. It is a wonderful story all around...

Author's Response:

Thank you Wicked One.

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Absolutely beautiful and stunning. I am actually in tears. So heart-warmingly sweet. I am so very much hoping for a sequel but you made this whole tale so perfect. Thank you so much for writing this!

Author's Response:

Thanks Eidelweiss.  I'm pleased you liked it.  I was in tears when I wrote it, not because it was the end, but because it was the most romantic gesture I could think of him giving her.

When I started researching the Bellagio hotel and fountains, I found a lot of video on U-Tube.  The choreographed shows (water fountains set to music) were absolutely stunning.  I hope to go there someday just to see them.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Beautiful, perfect ending for a wonderful, romantic story. *happy sigh* I'm sad to see it end, but looking forward to whatever you have in store for us in the sequel.

Good luck with your book. I hope that you are able to get published. Thank you for sharing your talent with us...I have enjoyed this story and others of yours that I have read very much. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks DebBee.  I appreciate you reading my story and your kind comments.

Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

I didn't think Edward seemed stalkerish at all. (I knew you didn't mean him to be that way) I think he seems sweet. I thought it was so cute when he called her "my little love" I knew he was referring to in the future when she would be his love. Anyway.... I really like this story so far. I thought it was hilarious when they trew boxes of popcorn at Bella's date. lol

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

I loved your story.  Lots of humor.  I loved the "trifecta" idea.  I will definatly be checking out your other stories.. 

Reviewer: LoveMeSomeEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

I just recently discovered this story and loved it!  Thank you for writing and sharing such an amazing story.  That was a perfect ending!

Reviewer: KayCullen 2009 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

i luv this story a wis sad 2 c it end

but excited fur the sequel canny wait should b gd =)

ur a amazing writer luv al ur stories

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare

Wait, did she faint?  Why?

Lovely, my dear.  Love it to pieces.

Author's Response:

Well, Edward kissed her, she was embarrassed, and it was just too much.  Hope that makes sense.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

"Do not attack the bag or try to eat the Kleenex."


I didn't read his actions as "ooo, I want to make sweet love to little babies" type, but more like the imprinting.  I mean, sure, it did seem kind of creapy, but let's be honest, Edward can be a little creapy, once you look past the dazzling aspects.

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Oh that was a wonderful story - I can't wait to read more.

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