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Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

That was by far the best chapter. It was so good and so long. I loved it. You did an awesome job. I loved this story and do hope you do a sequel. Was any of her powers revealed, I don't think I caught on to any if she has any. Did I miss something? Please please do a sequel....

You are awesome. Thanks for this increadible story.



Author's Response:

You missed nothing.  I left their third power and Bella's power open ended for the possibility of a sequel.  I guess I probably need to write one to give those items closure.

I already have some of the first chapter in my head, so it probably will happen.  Thanks for the positive comments and for reading.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Oh, wow, that was awesome! Sad that it's ended... looking forward to more stories from you in the near future!

Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Loved it!! So this was the last chapter? This was a very good story! Loved the whole Edward wedding thing!! I was so happy when I read that Charlie had signed to let them get married really early! Also loved how Edward used all that money for the first wedding! You did a good job at keeping the right characteristics!

Reviewer: snowwolf (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

you did an incredible job with this story. the plot, the characters, the emotions, all of it! loved it!

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Beautiful

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

I bet she'll take it well, like she did in the original... BEcause it's just Bella.

Reviewer: leena (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

it was a great chapter  i love your story and cant wait for the sequel

Reviewer: yuriinsane (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

it is so special in nest are vulturi coming becuase of charlie and are you going to explain bellas powers and their 3rd power as cupple and bond please countinue saga i cried it was so lovely i cant wait for more im so excited about this ending but sad so please make a saga to it :P

Reviewer: Robs_Muse (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Simply fantastic! ! ! I love yor writing style. I also love how you worked the Bellagio in. I was there about 3 weeks ago (work related unfortunately) and when I got home my husband asked me to marry him again (we never had a traditional ceremony) and to do it in Vegas. What I found funny is that the ceremony you wrote of is what we were thinking of doing! *sigh* Now it'll never measure up! Hahahaha. That's ok though. I digress.

Anyway, thank you so much. You write beautifully and look forward to your next venture. Please let me know if you need a complete stranger to bounce ideas off of or just need anything! - Heather.

Author's Response:

Wow--I hope you get your dream Bellagio wedding in Vegas.  My hubby went to the Bellagio for a conference (sadly I didn't get to go with him), and when I looked it up on the net, I was completely inspired.  I looked and looked through the song list, but I just couldn't find anything that I really thought was appropriate for my story.  Then I thought, "Eh, Edward's mega rich, so why not have him arrange to have Bella's lullaby played?"  So, that's what I did. 

Best wishes--your hubby seems like a real romantic.

Glad you liked my story and that you read it.  I do need someone to bounce something off of, so I might send you something to look at, if you don't mind.  Thanks.

 

Reviewer: original audience (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Wow.  I wish I had you around to plan my wedding!  This was a really great story.  I'm glad you wrote it, and I look forward to seeing whether or not you write the sequel.  Thanks again for writing!

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 37: Trips

O.O OOOOOOOOOh whats next!!!

Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

OMG this is sheer and utter perfection!! THANKYOU!!!!

Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Outstanding!!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

I can't believe it's over, I LOVE this story! I am going to go back and reread it now since it's complete. Thank you so much for sharing, it has been one of my favorites ever! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I'm so pleased you like it.

Reviewer: Nichola (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

That was amazing !! that made me cry you ar so so

 good! you MUST write another one you kust HAVE

to !!

Reviewer: whyamidoingthis (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

ahhh i'm so sad it's over! lol this was an amazing story. i loved it.  the way you brought it to an end was amazing. please please please write the sequel!! great job

Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Congratulations!  I really love this story, but I stopped reading after the trip to the ski lodge because I was following too many episodic stories.  Now, I am going to reread from the beginning and then review.

Thanks for a really great story.

Sherri



Author's Response:

Hey, life gets in the way.  I've had to do the same thing--let some stories go until I have time to read them.  Welcome back!

Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

That was a wonderful ending to the story! I think that Alice needs a taste of her own medicine. Is there a way that Jasper can make her feel what Edward and Bella feel when they are separated? It seems that she does not really respect that at all. Other than that, I am looking forward to the sequel! :)



Author's Response:

Oooo!  I love your suggestion.  I'll put that in my head for the possible sequel.  Thanks, BW, for reading.

Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

This was a wonderful story.  I loved it.  I really hope that you attempt a sequel.  I'd love to see how their relationship develops and how their bond gets stronger.  What's the third power?  I'd love to know!

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

wow I loved reading this last vhapter you did an amazing job on it. all of this story was really great

Reviewer: nox76 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

I'm sad to see the end of this fic too. I've really enjoyed your work, it was very worthy of the 2500+ reviews. I've added you to my favs list so I'll be waiting eagerly for the sequal.

Ninaxxx

Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Cullen is a very lucky guy. Bella is so beautiful. At least Rob Pattinson's thoughts were classy. 

 

 

^^^ Hilarious. I wish you would've said something about Kristen Stewart being his date, though. *snickers*

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

I'm sorry for your loss. :(

Reviewer: Tabby917 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Hmmm does he possibly take her, and hurt her? Hmmm

Reviewer: Queen of Jacob Black (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait

Beautiful ending. I'm hoping that the sequel will happen. You'll definetly have me reading it every step of the way!!!

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