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Reviewer: mrsjwright (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
Gotta go to bed even though I would love to read more. This story is awesome!!
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Do you know when you will be starting your sequel? I have so enjoyed reading your story and cannot wait to read the continuation!
Sarah
Author's Response: I've started it. The first chapter is almost done, but I want to have quite a bit written before posting. Thanks for being patient.
Reviewer: jenjen519 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Thank you! I really enjoyed this story...I'm adding you as one of my favorite authors...can't wait to see what next!
Reviewer: Spysgirl (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
This seems like it is going to be fun. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: jenjen519 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I'm at my desk and I'm supposed to be working, but I cannot stop reading this!! I'm loving your take on Edward's POV.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
i was jealous of water. that's freakin classic. so edward...i love it.
Reviewer: Strawberry Fields Forever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
0.0 my theory was right! yes! I just pwned that mystery
Reviewer: Strawberry Fields Forever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
hmm so i think that either Bella has some sorta cancer OR she is slowly becoming a vamp bacause of all those make out sessions. mostly likely those have nothing to do with whats actually happening, but i had to say them anyway. :) i love this story
Reviewer: laceys (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
*sigh* beautiful. I really enjoyed your story.
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT IS SO SWEET AND THE BEST WAY TO END THIS AWESOME STORY!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
aaww "the children i would never have"
interesting premise, i am intrigued.
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
If only some of us could wake up to that....
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA PINK BATHROBE!!! EMMETT....JASPER....NUFF SAID!
Reviewer: lindseylou0087 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
aaawwww i didnt think he was a creepy edward. I was actually jealous. I wish i could find someone to love and admire me the way your edward adores bella. vampires have ruined men for me! lol
Reviewer: megzyk (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
I dont know why but im addicted to this story
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: TwilightGirl545 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
He he... They all like Cedric Diggory. That's halarious! I like watching the part where he dies!because honestly, 1) I'm a devil in training, 2) I hate Rob Patz guts!! Nice story too!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'
Okay, why does she keep getting sick? Spill. hehe I don't remember them having sex, did I just black that out? What else could it be? Hmm.....
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
that was definitely one of my favorite chapters! It started out HOT! and the family teasing was really funny (and totally justified!), and yay for no human bloodlust! then Charlie was so supportive-I think that's just wonderful. He loves his daughter and all that matters is that she's safe and happy. Awesome. And the Edward & Bella banter was fantastic. I'm so excited to hear about a sequel! and Bella's potential gifts!
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 30: Man vs. Monster
That was lovely! Very tastefully done, I'm so glad you included it! The ability that you have to express what the characters are feeling when they're just making out is just incredible, I'm sorry you've gotten negative feedback in the past - I would love to read a love scene with that same attention to detail, but I understand your reluctance. This chapter really showed them loving each other and it was wonderful!
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
LOL I love that you put Rob Pattinson in there! That was hilarious! I read that part over twice cause I thought it was really funny! He is so sweet!
Mmmm and just picturing Edward in a red silk shirt is just too good! I am LOVING this story!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
‘Leave it to my daughter to find the weirdest boyfriend imaginable.’”
I love that line - it is such a dad thought :)
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
This was a good read. I really enjoyed the whole truth and dare aspect of the story.
Reviewer: beraroma (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Great story! I enjoyed your version very much! I'm really looking forward to a sequel. You barely scratched the surface of their triple bond and I would like to know what their combined power is. I thought that was the most interesting and unique aspect of your story, so I am really looking forward to seeing that concept expanded into a storyline!
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
that is one heck of a kiss... totally felt like that the first time I kissed my now husband. :)
Author's Response: Me too! We've been married for over 15 years and we're still going strong. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
AHAHAHA I can sooo see the Cullens just walking up to someone and telling them off looking all scary! I love that! Edward can say w/e he wants to cus its gonna be sexy either way! :)
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