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Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

AWWWWW!!!!!  More please!!!  I love this idea and will pout and fuss like Alice if I can't enjoy more ASAP!



Author's Response:

Chapter 3 has been submitted, and I have been waiting for approximately 10 days for validation.  I am not sure what the hold up is, other than I know that my beta has a busy life outside of Twilighted.  But I have over 20 chapters already written, and I'm dying to post them.  Ugh!  It's killing me.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I'm looking forward to reading more of this! I really like the whole concept...awesome job! When do we get more? :D lol



Author's Response:

I have had my third chapter submitted for approximately 10 days.  It is in my beta's hands.  I have over twenty chapters already written, so trust me, it's making me a little insane too.  I especially want to get chapters 4 and 5 out.  They are really cool.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I just read this story and like it already. I'm interested to see what challanges face Edward and Bella in the future. Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Ms. Nissa.  Chapter 3 is just waiting to be validated.   Thanks for reading.  I'm glad you like the story.  Please check out some of my other ones.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

UPDATE!!!!!!!!

I want to read what happens..... I also want to read Bella's reaction when she finds out about the Cullens and about them pretty much "stalking" her. Though knowing Bella and how she reacts to all things Cullen related, she'll take it in stride.

Am I right to guess that the whole thing with James is going to be a little worse than in the book?

Author's Response:

Okay.  I've had my chapter 3 to my beta for several days (over a week), and she has assured me that she has been extremely busy.  I know that betas have lives outside of Twilighted.  I'm dying to get chapter 4 up, but chapter 3 must come first.  It's out of my hands.

I'm not sure about the whole James thing.  It will be completely different than the book, so be prepared.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

This chapter is funny! Edward vs. Mike Newton, lol



Author's Response:

They have quite a nasty rivalry in this story.  I thought the idea was funny.  Edward acts very human in his responses to Mike.  Thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

Edward throwing popcorn! Lol



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  I can just imagine all of them hiding in the theater, throwing popcorn boxes at him everytime he touched Bella.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

cant' wait for the rest

 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm waiting on my beta for chapter 3.  I already have over 20 chapters of this story written, so it's just a matter of validating them.  But I can't post one until the previous one is posted.  Those are the rules.  Thank you for reading.  Check out my other stories.  They are different than this--a little more humor filled.

Reviewer: BellaLuna (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

WOW !!!!I think this is better than the original version of Twilight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm humbled--truly.  But there is no way I'm doing better with SM's characters than she did.  They are her brain children.  But I am thrilled that you like this so much.

I hope to write books someday, and I'm getting my feet wet doing fanfic.  I just hope I can come up with something creative and original enough that people will want to read it.  Thank you for the kind words and for reading my story.

Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

I really like it.  Can't wait to read more.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'll have Chapter 3 to my beta already.  Hopefully the update will be up soon.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Oh, I'm enjoying this so much!  Poor Edward--he's tormented by Mike right off the bat--let's hope he doesn't screw things up by being too possessive.  But how could Bella not fall for him right away--especially since he and his family are being so welcoming to her?  Can't wait for future chapters!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I really like that his family is in on it too.  And Bella does like him, but her POV isn't represented here, so you can't hear her thoughts (kind of like Edward?).  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Check out some of my other stories--they are all from differing POV's, and stray a lot more from the original Twilight plot lines.

Reviewer: Mommyswanson (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I'm enjoying this.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I've submitted chapter 3.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Update soon!!

I really like the idea that you have going here-Edward KNEW Bella was his soulmate. It's interesting to see how that changes him and his reactions, mainly because, to him, Bella has ALWAYS been his. 

This is quite the unique idea. I hope you continue with it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you like it.  It's not only Edward's reactions, it's his family's as well.  They've all been waiting for her, and to all of them, she has always been meant for Edward.  Thanks for the kind words and taking time to review.

Reviewer: sonyabrady1971 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Awesome story....this is a new kind of twist I have ever read in fanfic stories. can't wait for the next chapter...update as soon as you can!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I wanted to do something completely original that still had elements of the original plot.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

this is great i need more



Author's Response:

Chapter 3 has been submitted.  I've been writing this for quite some time, so I have quite a few chapters ready to submit.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

i love it and the movie theatre that was hilarious



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I liked the movie theater part too, but it traumatizes poor Bella!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Yeah, I like this. I hope you post again soon. I'm excited to read more.

I love that the whole family is involved in getting them together.



Author's Response:

That's the plan--everyone involved in finally seeing Edward happy.  Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

Wow! That was really good with such an interesting twist. I'm really excited to read more.

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Oh, God! New favorite story! I hope you update soon! I like this version of Edward! And how sweet that he new about her from birth! (girlie cooing)



Author's Response:

Aw shucks.  That is such a sweet thing to say.  Thanks.

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

So goooood! DAMN!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

 

I am loving this story so much! I have pretty high standards for the stories and authors I add to my favorites and I've just added you as one of them! This story seems to be accurate and entertaining at the same time, which if a definite plus! Keep up the brilliant writing!

Please update this soon! I can't wait for the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm honored to be put in your favorites.  Thank you.  It's definitely different from my other stories.  I've never written one from a single POV.  Thanks for reading.  Chapter 3 is to my Beta already.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

wow wonderful chapter. can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Next one is to my beta.

Reviewer: hus8 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I can't wait to read what happens next.  You stayed very true to the original characters' personalities and easily wove your own storyline into the Twilight world.  Thank you for your work; I really enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

One of the best compliments I've ever received.  I really wanted to stay true to the characters, although I think my Bella won't be so full of self-loathing.  In this story, that's Edward's department.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I absolutely love the rivalry between Edward and Mike, so this is great!  And I like how the whole family has managed to get at least one class with her throughout the day.

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I really wanted the Cullens to be "accomplices" to getting Bella and Edward together.  Since they watched her grow up, all of them are anxious to get to know her and make her one of the famoly.

The rivalry is so much fun to write.

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Fabulous chapter. I can't wait to read more of this story. =) 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Beta has chapter 3.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: MissLucy (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

Cute story, I really like it so far.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Check out my other stories--this one is really different from all of them.  Update is to the beta already.

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