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Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I loved this CHapter! Their chemistry is unbelievable.
Author's Response: Thanks. Try my other 4 stories if you like this. I'm glad you like them together. I do too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Woot... Finally...OMG, she fainted. You have got to update soon. Please
Author's Response: Update will be to my beta tonight. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Edward did truly start acting like a 17 yr old boy. Except he has a wonderful way wit words.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
Another great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
I love this new spin on the story. I am not adding this as a fav.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Woo hoo! Alice should have specified more privacy tho LOL I guess the point of the game is technically to entertain everybody.
Author's Response: Well, it wasn't 3 Minutes in a Closet (there's already a fantastic all human story about that). It was Truth or Dare. And actually, the kiss worked out pretty well--Mike definitely saw it, as did Lauren and Jessica (maybe it shut them up for a minute or two, at least.) Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Fantastic. Yet another one to add to my favorites! Bella really needs to remember to breathe. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. She does need to remember to breathe, doesn't she? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
So...does this mean that she passed out??? Poor, Silly Bella...if so she will never hear the end of it. Damn hot kiss though :D Hurry back!
Author's Response: Chapter 5 will explain what happened after the kiss. Forums will have teasers. It's under Fanfic Twilight. Yes, she did pass out. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Loved it! The game was great and the kiss was steamy! Hilarious that she passed out from it, though mortifying that she did it in front of the entire high school
Author's Response: Hey L.C.! Great to hear from you.
I liked writing that kissing scene. If you liked the steaminess of it, wait until the next chapter--hehe!
Fainting from a kiss speaks pretty highly of Edwards prowess, don't you think? Thanks for reading, dear.
Reviewer: Kirbs (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
That was sweet, yet quite steamy, i love it. I love this more happy go with the flow Edward. Cant wait for more, sounds like you already have lots of chapters in the bag. Hang in there with the new BETA, sure the chapters will be whizzing back to you in no time.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I just got into your story and I'm loving it! Love the chemistry and action between Bella and Edward. Looking forward to more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll update tonight. I'm glad you like it, and please try out my other 4 stories if you like this one. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
she fainted??? man then she will not take it very well when she finds out Edward is a vampire.
Author's Response: When she finds out, it will be an interesting chapter. I've already written it. It's another favorite of mine. That's all I've giving you right now. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
HOLY CRAP!!! Swoooooon!!!!! Ok, you need to update much faster. This was so sweet I have cavities and I LOVE IT!!! I read way to fast for my own good because it seems that I have just started and I am done. :(
I love this story line and I want more and need more ASAP!
PLEASE! Can I pout like Alice and get it faster????
Can you put more interation, more details just more of everything in there?!?!?
Thank you!!!!
Author's Response: I will be getting the updates out faster now. It wasn't on my end--just a series of unfortunate mishaps, but it's all taken care of. I've written over 20 chapters thus far, so I'm ready to get it out too.
You want more of more? I'll try. Thanks for reading, and try my other 4 stories.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Poor Bella, fainting in front of an audience! But what a kiss! What a way to stake a claim! Surely Mike will have to leave her alone now! Alice is a genius. *grin*
Author's Response: Hey Sheeijan! Nice to hear from you. Bella has never been able to control her responses to Edward very well, and as for Mike--will he ever learn? Not sure about that. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I am enjoying this story SO much! It is so sweet! You blend just the right combination of innocence and sexiness. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Sunfeathers. Try my other 4 stories if you like this one--you'll probably like those too.
That's the way I see Edward. For pete's sake, he's a 104 year-old virgin who has heard everyone's sexual fantasies. It's about time he got to act on some of his own. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Cullen0128 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
OMG i just found this story and i am in love. This is such a cool idea for a story an i loved their first kiss together. Awesome update cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. Try out my other 4 stories too, btw! I'll have it updated by tonight. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
So, I see a new chapter of one of my favourite stories, which is great. Then, I see a dedication to me! Little ole me! Thank honey, this chapter is amazing! Although you're still not following the ten steps, are you?
Author's Response: It's 12 steps, and no I'm not, and I'm not apologizing for it. Some addictions are just worth keeping, and my addiction to nail-biting cliffies is worth it. I'm just more judicial with them now. I'm glad you liked the dedication. You and Holly have always been so kind and supportive, I just wanted to say thanks. Love you!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
How fun! I like your 'lighter' Edward. Most of the vamp Eddies in fanfic are so serious-much more than in SM's story. It's good to see hin have fun in his eternal life for once!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my Edward. He is fun, isn't he? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: aireonna (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Very cute
Author's Response: Thanks. Try my other 4 stories. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Lourdes (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
I´m loving this story!
please update soon
Author's Response: Update is to my beta. This is day 8 of waiting. I have over 20 chapters already written, so I wish my updates were going faster. I have a wonderful beta, but she is new. Perhaps that is why.
Try out my other 4 stories. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Leah (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Genius. Totally Genius. This could be a whole novel by itself. PULEASE keep writing! I'm falling in love with Edward all over again (and I'm a die-hard team Jacob!)
Can't wait for the rest :)
Author's Response: What kind things to say. Thank you. It's a nice way to wake up in the morning. I do hope to someday write a novel, and this is just me getting my feet wet for that eventuality.
I will warn you. I am definitely not team Jacob, and I don't really paint him and his father in the best light in this. Sorry if that offends you, but you don't sound like it will.
Thank you for reading and giving my story a chance.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Geez, Edward's getting a bit cheeky!
Author's Response: My Edward is a bit less inhibited than book Edward. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
A little creepy, but good. I'm going to keep reading.
Author's Response: Curious. I've only ever had one other person think it's creepy. What do you find that's creepy? Just curious.
Reviewer: Titch22 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Finally finished. What a great story. I'm loving it a lot. It's great seeing Edward as a more typical teenage boy for once. It's nice to see that reaction out of him when it comes to Bella. Besides it's always fun to get inside his head. Can't for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Titch. I'm glad that you are liking this. I always find that Edwards actual age and his biological age to be an interesting paradox. I this story, I'm really trying to play into that. He might have seen a lot of history and heard a lot of minds, but this is his only relationship, and he is still seventeen. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Titch22 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Just finished chapter 1. So good so far. It's an intresting take on the 'Twilight' story and no point ever seems creepy. Which I did worry about. You handled it really well I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I never thought the title could lead to creepiness, but I can see your point. Thanks for taking a chance on it and reading it. Try my other 4 stories. They are quite different from this one.
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