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Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Thanks for the update! Poor Edward (hehheheeee) he thought Bella was so sweet and innocent.

God thing no one cares if he uses all the cold water.

Author's Response:

Yeah--cold is room temp to them anyway.  He can use all the cold he wants.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Well, all I've got to say is bring on the fluff and the horny Teenward any day.  This chapter was so enjoyable and soo cute. I loved the sweet and steamy scenes between Edward and Bella....and the sibling stuff, especially the conversation between the brothers at the end there. Mmmmm, I do wonder what Rose and Alice had to talk to Bella about though. You've got me wondering about the foreshadowing in the chapter now.....I can't wait to find out if any of my thoughts will be right on that. Great chapter here!

Author's Response:

Oh T.J.!  Come to forums and tell me what your thinking of the foreshadowing.  I'm dying to know!  We are in the Twilight section of fanfic.  Glad you like my little bits o' fluff.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

damn wonderful chapter..can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks dear.  Chapter 10 was just submitted to my beta.

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

heheh *bounce* More please


Author's Response:

Should I call you Tigger or Alice?--lol!  Thanks for reading, Wicked.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

That was pretty freaking hilarious Teenward is a hoot!  *squishes him* I will take him with a side of Emmett and Jasper Yes?

Great chappie, I can't wait to read more.  I do hope Bella finds out soon.  Or she already knows or something and when he does come clean she's all like "So? I knew that all ready. Duh." *laughs*

Can't wait for more!!


Author's Response:

Interesting theories Jace.  But when Bella finds out, it will be very unusual.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In


emmett and jasper are cute!

more of them please!

x x Cassie

Author's Response:

I'll see what I can do.  Thanks for reading, Cassie.  xx

Reviewer: berrycute105 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

this was hilarious, i love emmet he is such a tease

Author's Response:

Yeah--he's a fav for me too.  He's always based on my hubby, who is very Emmett-like, minus the bulking muscles.  But he does have brown hair, a baby face, dimples, and is so ornery!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Swoon.   More and faster plz.

Also sorry about your loss.  I read on my Ipod and PC, but i can only review with my PC so sorry there is not more, but I love your other works too and this one and am spoiled rotten by all this wonderful stuff.  More of everything plz

Author's Response:

Thanks, Autumnmissa.  I know what you mean--my phone is so hard to read on.  Scrolling is a pain!  Anyway, thanks for the kind words and sympathy.

Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

loving.i read it with a smile! update soon

Author's Response:

Glad you like.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Hmmm, I'm wondering what foreshadowing was going on now! Great chapter, as always!

Author's Response:

Good.  If you're guessing, it means I'm being subtle enough.  Don't want to give everything away.  Thanks, C!  Love ya' dear.

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Aww. The I love yous. Sigh. That was really sweet. haha Loved Coldshowerward.

Author's Response:

"Coldshowerward!"  Hahahahaha!  That's awesome!  I love yous toos, everwondering.

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

hahaha- I love it! I can't wait to get more chapters on this story- this is my favorite- I think its because of all the fluff :)  I would give it a 20 if I was able too!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, Lynnlin.

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Can't wait until the next chapter comes out!!!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  I've got some kinks to work out in the next chapter, but I'll post as soon as I'm happy with it.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

For the first time in my life, I was jealous of water.

Did you know that she grabbed my ass the other day?


Hhaahaaa poor Eddie just doesnt know what to do with himself. I have to admit that this is one awesome story! I love the way he lusts over her without going all guilty and self loathing.


You have got to hurry back, I cant wait to see what Bella tries to pull when her back feels better. Oooh what Bella will do in her sleep....that will probably kill him. :P

Author's Response:

I'm glad to make you laugh.  He is pretty beside himself.  I'm sure he'll go bald running his fingers through his hair--lol!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Another amazing chapter. As always, can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Re-Re.

Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Great chapter!  Thanks for updating, I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Try my other stories, if you haven't already.  Thank you for the kind words.

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Hehe, flirting Bella, I figured it was all her. Eager for more.

Author's Response:

Edward had this idea that Bella was this sweet little innocent girl.  It's because he watched her grow up.  But she is quite the temptress.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

lol....I think this is my favorite chapter so far!

Author's Response:

Really?  Huh.  I liked this chapter, but it was't my favorite, but I'm pretty self-critical.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Lourdes (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In


man I love this!!

Edward is sweet and hilarious!

and Bella is so devious. I love everyone behaviour towards her.


thanks a lot for updating.

Author's Response:

My Bella is a bit more flirty and confident and my Edward is more of a 17 year-old.  And the relationship between Bella and the rest of the Cullens is very strong.  Happy you like it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Excellent chapter!  I love how we got glimpses into what Edward was thinking in terms of his relationship and possible change in Bella.  Love the playfulness in see between Edward and his brothers as well.  Can't wait for more :)

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad that you liked my little glimpse into what Edward is thinking in terms of changing Bella.  He's going to seem a little indecisive for a while. 

I like writing the Cullens more as a family unit.  It's fun.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Fantastic  Chapter! Very well written.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

So cute.  I love foreshadowing, can't wait to find out what's going to happen...Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

Oh Mel!  Thanks for the comment!  That means I am being subtle enough!  Yeah!  I want to hint at things, but not be so obvious that everyone thinks they know what will happen.  Glad you like my story, and I love yours too!  Blood Crystal so rocks!  Everyone should read it.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Loved it as usual. Great chapter. What did you mean in the An at the bottom? Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks kimberly.  I guess you are talking about the end notes?  Well, just that I'm saying some stuff that might happen or that the opposite might happen in the future.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Well...I am concerned that Charlie told him to NEVER hurt her...hmmmm iso I would say pain is on the horizon. I was hoping this wouldn't be completely canon bc it is so different, but if he ends up getting all angsty and leaving her, there will be hell to pay. THIS Bella seems more secure than the B of the books (thank god for THAT!) so who knows if she will forgive him...

Of course, I am ALWAYS wrong with these fanfic things. Can't figure them out for shit!


Nice chapter - loved the bubbles and poor eddie needing a cold shower (well now he knows how we all felt reading the books with that "cut to black" stuff during the honeymoon! LOL)


Author's Response:

Thanks, dear.  Hmmmm...angst on the horizon.  Well, maybe yes and maybe no.  Don't want to give anything away.  Yes, my Bella is much more confident and not quite so self-loathing.  Thanks for reading.  Oh--I think Edward needed a lot of cold showers, btw.

Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 7: Making Out 101

I am loving this story.  I loved the truth or dare game/kiss.  Can't wait to see how Bella finds out they are vampires.  Great story!  Thank you.

Author's Response:

It's coming.  She will find out soon.  I've got some changes to make in the next chapter.  I'm just not thrilled with it, so I've got to rework it.  Might take a while.

Glad you like it and thanks for reading.

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