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Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Great chapter. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Miss Poison.

Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

i can't wait for edward to reveal what he is!update soon!



Author's Response:

It's only chapter 11, so chapter 12 will have to come before the "big reveal" in chapter 13.  Thanks for reading "reviewgrl".  Are you a superhero?--lol!  Because you review my stories, you are to me.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

*is nervous* I need to know when he tells her.  I have to see that she doesn't run. and that she still loves him!

Great chappie!!

Jace



Author's Response:

Oh Jace!  You must be patient.  I'm sorry you are nervous.  I can't say anything without giving it all away.

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Very sweet and loving chapter.  It's nice to see Bella fitting in.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, FearlessNot.  I like Bella fitting in too.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Wow! This chapter is amazing! Your Edward is so great, it's like SM wrote it herself!

Author's Response:

You are too sweet.  I'm really trying to keep Edward's "essence" in tact, while embellishing a little.  Glad to know that you think I am succeeding.  Thank, dearie!  Love yous!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

The cullen crest! What a wonderful gift.



Author's Response:

I agree.  I thought it was a really cool thing in the movie.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

I'm dreading that the party is going to have the same repercussions as the book (you know, the paper cut).  I hope Edward gets his balls in place and tells Bella soon!  It would kind of suck for Bella to find out what they are because they're trying not to drain her dry at her party. 

Edward pretending to snore - that is a hilarious image.  *grin*



Author's Response:

My kids and I pretend to snore just for fun.  We try to see who can be the loudest and most obnoxious, so that's where that comes from.

I'll tell you what I told another reviewer.  It's the only bit I'm giving up:  THERE IS NO "JASPER PAPERCUT MOMENT".

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Nice fluffy chapter, moving along, yes Edward's freaked and worried, but let's man up here and have the conversation...Well done.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like it.  Next chapter does move things along a bit.  Thanks, Mel.

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Love this story and I get so excited when I get an alert for it.

I'm wondering when Edward is going to tell her and I'm hoping that she won't be all freaked out when the moment arises.  Subconsciencely,  she knows already but needs confirmation that he isn't human. Will you make her freak out and run? No drama please. LOL Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Oh Re-Re.  I just can't make any promises.  I just have to ask you to trust me.  I have a direction, and the chapters are written and certain things are in motion.  This may or may not include drama.  Love ya dear!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

SHE GETS THE CREST!!!!! SWEET!!! I believe you have the upper hand on SM on this one! That's awesome I never even thought of giving her the crest, but I really like it! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I got the movie book, and it had closeup pictures of it and made a big deal about it.  So, I wanted to include it in the story.  Thanks for reading W.B.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

So your last two updates, kind of, sort of, blew me away. 

FANTASTIC!!!!! Bella's a smart girl, she figures things out for herself and the more I read the more I'm sure that she will love Edward regardless. Idk. Maybe your Bella will get freaked out? The idea to give her the family crest was so heart warming. It seems like it really is the ultimate form of acceptance. I loved the last line of last chapter. It made my day. 

I know you have been going through some tough stuff, so I hope that you're doing better.  



Author's Response:

Thank you, agiismsxx.  Today was the funeral.  I even got to say a few words about what he meant to me.  It was a beautiful service, and a fitting good-bye.

I'll answer you like I answered my friend "the shrew".  Bella may or may not in a roundabout way possibly or possibly not freak out when she does or does not find out about Edward being a vampire.  Are you confused enough?  Mwuhahaha!

Thanks for reading and saying such nice things.

Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

ruh roh!  Update soon plz!!!!



Author's Response:

I will try.  I've been neglecting some of my other stories, so I really need to update them as well.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

can't wait 'til he tells her.  good chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks, smisa.  Try my other stories, if you haven't already.  And please, be patient.

Reviewer: Lourdes (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

I think by now you know I completely love this story!

this chapter was great, Carlisle gift is amazing.

 

Thanks for writing

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lourdes.  I'm so glad you are reading my stories. 

I thought the crest was fitting.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Hey I am afraid that she might bolt! Well not so much as Edward is but I am hoping that she will take everything well.  I cant wait to see her reaction when Carlisle gives her the Cullen Crest. Hurry back please.



Author's Response:

I can't say anything about her reaction without giving it all away.  Sorry.  She'll love the crest.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

Well I'm glad to see that Bella's not completely clueless on the otherness of the Cullens.  That will help.  I wonder what kind of theories she's come up with?  I don't think she's had a chance to see their speed yet, if I remember correctly. 

I'll be thinking about you today and wishing you peace with the funeral.

Reviewer: Bear (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

I really love this story and I wish Edward will just tell her he's a vampire. i don't think she'll freak I think she will accept it because she loves him.

 

Good job.



Author's Response:

She does find out, eventually.

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

 

i'm so sorry to hear about you and your friend...

anyway, great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind sentiments and for reading.

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

I like this Edward! I always thought that he should show more of that 17 year old boy. Graet story, please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I'm glad you like him.  Try my other stories, if you haven't already.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

This was a fun and feisty chapter.  Can't wait for more, I liked how Bella turned the tables on him and got him just as flustered.  I'll say a prayer that you'll have peace tomorrow, so sorry for your loss!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mel.  My Bella can match wits with Edward on any level.  She can actually match wits with most of the Cullens in general.  Thanks for the kind words, thoughts, and prayers.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

I hope that you remember all the good times with your friend and none of the sad.  Please know that you are in my thoughts.

 

Your chapter was awesome.  I knew Bella was figuring it out.

Jace



Author's Response:

I do.  He was such an amazing person.  I don't have many bad memories, if any.  Everything about him was a positive point in my life.  He was like a second father.  I adored him, and he had many people who loved him.  He will be missed, but I'm glad he's not suffering.  We are having a memorial service in May, and I get to play a piece in his honor.

Well, Bella is getting around to it...

Thanks for reading, and for the kind words, Jace.

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

An excellent chapter - I love risk-taking Edward.

I'll be thinking about you tomorrow with the funeral - good luck.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

Dayum. I need a personal ice pack! Bejezzus. And his parts reacting and causing a problem on her back! That's some range of movement there ;)

I love that she gets him right back when he tries to play Mr. Macho seducer! Very curious about how she is going to find out the truth....



Author's Response:

Her back is pretty sensitive right now, so...well...you got the picture.  Anywho, my Bella is a flirt.  She's confident.

Okay, everyone is getting all hyped about the big reveal.  I'm going to say one thing--you all are going to have to trust me.  I probably just made a whole lot of you very nervous.

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

Feeding dinner in bed - that's sweet! And pretty tempting. I'm glad Charlie is so easy to get along with.

You are doing an awesome job on the 17 year old Edward!

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet

I'm proud of Edward for not killing Mike! And I really like nice Rose.

Jacob going through the change - that should make things interesting....

Bella staying at the Cullens for the week...o Boy! xD!

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