Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I actually loved it- I'm in shock and aww...I feel I need to hold my breath to know what exactly happens! :) 20
Author's Response: Thanks Lynnlin. Can you hold your breath another day? I just posted Chapter 14. Thanks for reading, sweetie.
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
What the FRICK AND FRACK!!! UGH!!!
Author's Response: I wanted to stun everyone, and I think I've done it. Chapter 14 will bandage everything back together, so hang in there and thanks for reading. Try out my other stories if you haven't already.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Oh no!!! I mean this chapter was lovley up to the part where Bella yells at Edward to get away because he is a monster and than goes to Mike!! But you said this will be sorted out in the next chapter and i believe you but please update soon i dont like when Bella and Edward are apart!
Author's Response: Oh SML! It will get better. I'll update soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: ACW93 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I love it up until the end then you make me speechless. But i am oing to turst you on this, i hope you make things better between bella and edward. because i don't think i could stand a mike and bella story. other than that great job!
Author's Response: A Mike and Bella story--no way! Chapter 14 will make things all better. I'm glad I made you speechless. I wanted to shock everyone and do something no one expected. Thanks for reading and try my other stories if you haven't already.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I love it! The fool waited to long and now she thinks the worst. I wouldn't be surprized if she knows now from the wolves. Now he's going to have to win her back, after picking up the pieces of his broken self. Edward always has a way of making his fears a reality...
Author's Response: Thanks Nashi! I'm glad you understand the angst. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I know you told me, but still! This hurts, a lot *heart breaks* great chapter, but oh, ze angst is painful!
Author's Response: Sorry sweetie. But chapter 14 will make things better. I'll post it very soon.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Wow! Okay, you have completely surprised me here. I never saw this coming. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Yay! That's what I wanted to do--something completely unexpected. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
*jaw drops*
OH
MY
GOD!
Author's Response: Bellagirl! That's the reaction I wanted! So glad! Chapter 14 will make it all better. Thanks for reading, and you might want to shut your mouth before you swallow a fly--lol!
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Well, it certainly is strange to see Bella have a normal, human reaction for once.
Author's Response: I agree. She's a little freaked right now. I would be too. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: edy12345 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
i still love the story though....dont get me wrong haha i was just so suprised! such a distraction from studying cardio right now.
way better!
Author's Response: Thanks, edy. I'm glad that you are okay with things. xoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I LOVE this story!! But the end of this chapter kind of upset me, but I put my trust in you, that things will get better between Edward and Bella. I really hope that they do. I hope things better!!!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your trust, Bells! I appreciate it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: edy12345 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
what?! whyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Author's Response: It has to be this way--trust me. Chapter 14 will be posted very soon. Stick with me, and thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Oh I am so excited! Love every thing you've done with inso far, I can't wait to see where it's going. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Nashi. Try my other stories if you like this one. Thanks for reading. I just hope and pray that everyone is okay with Chapter 13.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Great chapter. I am so excited for the reveal but i hope that you dont be make bella run away please they need to be togeter!
Author's Response: All I can say is trust me--please. Thanks for reading SML.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Very sweet and romantic.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks for reading FearlessNot.
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Oy Vey! I have a toothache this was such a sweet chapter. I'll probably need dentures if the next one is any sweeter than that one. Can't wait for it!
Author's Response: Glad that you like my sugary sweetness. Good thing is that my stories are calorie free--lol! Thanks for reading, Mel.
Reviewer: edy12345 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
loveees it!
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
i totally love this story! update soon
Author's Response: Thanks, reviewgrl. Chapter 13 is up.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Once again, another amazing chapter in one of my favorite stories.
I can't wait for the big reveal and I'm sure that its going to be a good one. Don't get yourself nuts over it but you're probably your own worse critic. I know we'll love it, so post it soon. I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks for your kindness, Re-Re.
I'm not worried about the chapter being bad. I actually am very pleased with it. However, I am concerned about how you all will react. Just trust me--it will be worth it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
I'M SO EXCITED!!! I'm ready to read your next chapter!
I'm glad that you were able to get closure, and I hope you have a good night :)
Author's Response: Thanks Lynnlin. I slept more peacefully last night than I have in several nights. Thanks for all the kind words and sympathy.
Chapter 13 is up. I'm really nervous about this one. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
ROCK!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. Let's just hope you think the same on chapter 13. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
I loved how Esme and Carlisle gave her the Cullen crest and phone. Very them!
Ooooh I am so excited! I cant wait, you arent going to make us wait long right? I am bouncing up and down in my seat. I love your Edward and Bella so much! :D
Author's Response: I thought giving her a crest was like the ultimate way of saying she was a part of the family.
Chapter 13 just posted. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
*laughs* Poor Edward always the center of his siblings teasing. Now I just hope that Bella won't freak and tell Edward to stay away when he tells her the WHOLE truth.
Author's Response: Yeah. Edward gets picked on. I think he's actually enjoying it somewhat enjoying it now. Thanks for reading. Chapter 13 is posted.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Great chapter, but I'm worried about the next chapter. I hope Bella doesn't run. She didn't in the books.
Author's Response: I can't say anything. Just trust me, please. I sincerely appreciate your reading.
Reviewer: Lourdes (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
great chapter!
and the night isn't over yet :)
Author's Response: Nope. It isn't. I just hope you like chapter 13. Thanks, Lourdes.
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