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Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I just found this story and I really like it. I knew something bad was coming, but it just hurt my heart to hear her call him a monster. That's just cruel. I'm going to trust you though.
Author's Response: Thanks for the trust, e-chick. Chapter 14 was posted this morning, so all will be better. Try my other stories if you like this one and thanks for reading.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I can't say that I am not disappointed, cause truly I thought that I was going to be reading some bday action. But....as they say no angst, no story? Well I trust you, but damn next time you shouldnt get out hopes up like that. Ha..just kidding. Keep it coming, lovein this!
Author's Response: I kept warning you all that I was nervous. And I was. Thanks for your trust.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Dah! You can't leave us like that!?!?!! I'm so into this story. I love the way Edward is acting, so teenlike and horny:) He should tell her NOW. Can't wait for more. Please update soon!
Author's Response: I take it that this is for chapter 13? She already knows--therein lies the problem. Chapter 14 will explain everything soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
nooooo, poor edward. stupid bella!!
i hope they get everything fixed, sooon:(
Author's Response: Bella's not stupid. She's actually reacting like a normal human for a change. She found out in a horrible way, which is Edward's fault. If he had told her, none of this would have happened.
Bella's still in love with him. Don't worry.
Reviewer: 0nykz 3yez (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I'm so ready to cry right now! I love drama coz its interesting... but stilll...
UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Don't cry. Chapter 14 is already to my beta. It will all be better soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
very very charming ..... you should see the big grin on my face while typing this. I'm in love !!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
yipeeeeeee yaayyy yyyyeeeeyyyyyyyy !!!!
Your the best !! You Rock !!!
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
OK... that is not how it is supposed to be!!! Please make it better in Chapter 14...soon!
Author's Response: Chapter 14 is to my beta, so it will be soon. Hang in there, guccisassy!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Hmmm...definitely bought Edward's freak out, but not sure I buy her going from loving her as intensely as she seemed to to calling him a monster, plus falling into Newton's arms. Do love the story and interested in where it's going...
Author's Response: She's still in love with him. She's just in shock because of the way she found out. You'll understand in Chapter 14. Thanks for sticking with me.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
NO *waves hands around in apology* its not that I was talking to you I was shocked and awed *still awed* no I was so awed I had no words even the word awed seemed to not be able to express my awe. So no I am still and completely talking to you. *wide eyes and trembling lip* forgive me for scaring you? *sniffle*
Jace
Author's Response: Oh Jace. Of course I forgive you. I just didn't know how to take your review.
Chapter 14 will make things all better. It's to my beta already. Love ya' dear!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I trust that this had to happen this way, and to be honest, they do need a bit of angst. I'm hoping that your Edward will never really leave Bella, so this will be the worst thing they face. I hope.
So sweet until she bit him!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you thought it was sweet until the whole biting thing. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
I am so excited for the big reveal, and also really loved the part where Edward tells Bella "you're a Cullen now..."
So awesome.
Author's Response: Well...wait 'til you read it. You might be upset with me. All I can say is trust me.
I like the whole crest thing--I think it was a fitting to include it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I was loving, adoring, drooling over every word, until...."GET AWAY FROM ME…YOU…YOU…MONSTER!”
I can't imagine any universe where Bella would ever say that, let alone think that. I can't wait to see where you go with this. I really hope it gets better in the next chapter, 'cause my heart just broke. BROKE.
Author's Response: Sorry to break your heart. It gets better, next chapter, which is already to my beta.
My motivation was for Bella to have a more "normal" response to finding out. Plus, you will understand why she thinks this when you find out how she found out. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Oh NOOOOOO!!!!!
Author's Response: It'll be better soon.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
yeah, you better clean that up! but i have to say it was a good change to see bella actually fear edward for once, even if it is only temporary. you never see that.
Author's Response: Thanks, smisa. I always like to do little unexpected things. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Wow. I wasn't expecting that. Took me totally surprised. This is the first story that I have read that Bella acted the way she did. Can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: I was going for the unexpected. I'm glad it surprised you. Thanks for reading kimberly.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
OH MY GOD! What the hell was that? I was not expecting that at all. And into Mike's arms of all people. Okay, you have to make this better and soon. I know that she is mad at him for leaving the night before but noooooo, this can't happen to them. He has to tell her and now.
Author's Response: Oh Re-Re. Things had to take this turn. But Chapter 14 makes it all better, and I just submitted it about an hour ago.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
I am so not going to hate you for this...because I'm secretly hoping that she's more pissed off about the night before than what he just did :D lol. I know I would be! ;)
I just loved 12 and 13 but I can't believe Edward didn't at least slightly prepare for that moment when he and Bella got more intimate.
I can't wait for the make up and the serious explaining....Wonderfully done! :D
Author's Response: Remember--he's new to this whole relationship thing, just as Bella is. He thought he could handle it. Thanks for the nice words. As I said, I was really nervous about all of this.
Reviewer: lisa54aa (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Okay.....I have to believe you, i have too, because I am all sorts of sad right now. Please update soon
Author's Response: Sorry lisa, dear. Chapter 14 was just posted, so it will be better soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
ok I really can't wait to see how you make this better!
Author's Response: Chapter 14 was just posted, Wicked! It will be better soon! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Bella had better have a very very good reason for doing that >:(
Author's Response: Fear and shock, plain and simple. Sorry to upset you. Next chapter has been submitted, and it will all be better soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, this is going to end well, this is going to end well, this is going to end well...it HAS to end well!!! But now I have to wait. *pouts*
Author's Response: Chapter 14 was just submitted, so no more pouting, okay? Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Mike Newton?! That's such a low blow to Edward, wow! :)
Author's Response: He was in the right place at the right time--at least for him. Bella would have collapsed into anyone's arms. It was just coincidence that he happened to be here. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Psht, who needs too much direction? I like just reading what's been going on! Yay for the reveal next chapter, which I see is already up!
Author's Response: Just don't throw virtual tomatoes at me when you read chapter 13! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
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Author's Response: Jace? Are you not talking to me? I'm sorry. Chapter 14 was submitted about an hour ago, and it will make everything better.
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