Nice make-up chapter!  Now it's time for Cullens vs that-other-lunch-table (i.e. Mike, Lauren & Jessica).  Now THAT will be fun.  And I wonder what would happen if Lauren or Angela or someone noticed and commented on Bella's crest necklace?

Author's Response:

I'm sure they'll let that table have it eventually.  Thanks for reading.

LOL...this chapter was awesome! you rock!!

I'm in love with this story. 

 

The way that you've cultivated their relationship, their interactions,and Edward's internal dialogue is just wonderful.  You've written this story in such a way that it just makes sense, and in a whole lotta ways, I dig this more than Twilight.

 

Especially when Alice & the fam. continuously rein Edward in when he's got some terrible idea... I was always screaming at the pages of Twilight, like "Hey why doesn't someone stop him?!"

 

I'm so thrilled that you've shared it with us, please don't change a thing. 

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Thanks, verlore.

Now I'm even more perplexed.  I've got to sleep on this.  Thanks for reading.

I'm always ready for less angst... I'm so glad that Bella and Edward are finally talking all of this through.  I'm very interested in the conversation(s) that will inevitably come about her change.

Although, to be honest, if you get super angsty, I'll still stick with you - this is one of my favorites :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your "vote" about the angst issue. 

The subject of the change...hmmm...it's another curve ball that will bring about her transformation.

I'm reworking the next several chapters so that there will be less angst.  Thanks for reading.

i wish 4 a pony! o and more chapters.

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Sorry--no pony, but I just put in Chapter 16.

I think you should go with whatever your imagination tells you.  Obviously people are reading it and they like it.  I know I do...and it is your story.  I think there has been the right amount of fluff and angst to balance each other out so far.  Go with your gut...dont worry about us.  I think its safe to say a lot of us are sucked in whatever you decide.

I like some angst to a story! Not too much but just enough to keep me happy! Loved the chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your vote, k8!

This chapter was a lot of fun!  I like how you had Edward share so much information with Bella in such a most light-hearted way, and that she largely took it all so much in stride.  I also liked Edward's jealousy of Mike.  More generally, I really love this fic--and for me, less angst=good, but this is your fic, so you have to do what you think is best. 

Author's Response:

Thank you, my1edward.  I appreciate the comments and compliments.

Angsty is okay as long as its not them breaking up.  I really love the story. I think its an interesting twist.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, littlebit, and thanks for reading.

Bella took the whole waiting for to you to grow up to make my move issue pretty well. I personally would have been slightly creeped out. If you think about it she doesn't really have any option but to be in love with him. Hedid everything right to make her fall in love with him. Maybe you could play off that and she starts to rebel slightly. I do like what you have written so far.

Author's Response:

I don't know if she'll rebel about that, but she will stand up to him.  My Bella isn't afraid to say what she wants or believes. 

You know, the whole imprinting on children thing grossed me out to no end, and this isn't much different, except for the fact that Edward stayed away until she was older.  She did take it well, just like Bella took him being a vampire well right off the bat.  I guess that was my "parallel".  I might make it an issue and I might not.

Thanks for your comments.  I really like it when people tell me what they think.  It improves my writing.  Thanks for reading, Shamatt!

*bites lip* Hell, I'm all for the less angsty version.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment.  I am working on less angst.

Yeah, I hate angst...Sometimes a little drama, but not angst. I like the good. I can't wait for their first time. Come one.   I don't know what other people's comments were, I'm afraid to ask. Will she be changed because Edward didn't have a choice. Update soon.

Author's Response:

Haven't written her change yet, but there will be a reason that she will be changed, don't worry.

Rewriting.  There will be drama--no angst.

awww,
its good he's fessing up.
update soon!
x x Cassie

Author's Response:

Thanks Cassie.  I'm rehashing the next two chapters, so it might be a while.