is he really going to do this?update soon

Oh, no. Angsty-New-Moon!Edward ahoy.

God, I love this story! Mike is delusional, and he kind of deserves to get some really scary nightmares where Edward hunts him down. I hope Edward hasn’t made a too drastic decision, and if he decided he was going to leave her, I fold my hands and pray it won’t be for too long.

Again I love the story, and your brilliant writing. Keep up the awesome work, and update soon ;)

~Sizone

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words, Sizone.  Yeah, Mike's a dweeb.  As for Edward making a drastic decision...can't say.  Thanks for reading.

Really good, fun chapter -- nice and long too.  And it keeps pushing the tension lemon free, which I know is important to you.  I don't mind some angst, it works very well with the story.  Otherwise it would be a pure fluff piece. 

I'm really enjoying this -- thank you.

Author's Response:

Thanks Suggieo.  I'm glad you like what I'm doing.  Thanks for reading.

I am ok with your cliff hangers... I really am... You update fast enough where I don't bite my nails and your angst is fun!

I can't wait for more... thank you again!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks Wicked.  Glad you don't mind my cliffies. 

I just love your writing. You know how to keep me coming back for more and your right...you don't need to "Smut" it up to keep me coming back for more;-)

UGH...I just hate that he is more than likely going to break her poor heart but I understand the need for angst...just sucks.

 

Author's Response:

But I hope my angst won't suck and hurt quite as badly as the book.  Thanks for the kind words, Angel.

I gasped so loud and so hard that my dad thought I was choking. 

HOLY CRAP!! I can't believe that. 

I can't believe, that even after Bella and Edward being separated for only a few weeks, that he could think it would be the right thing for them to be apart. 

WHY? Why would he do that? Why would he think it was the right thing to do? URGH!! Stupid Edward. 

I'm definitely kind of waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter =] 

Author's Response:

That's why I did it this way.  I am evil, and I string you along by doing the unexpected--mwuhahaha!  Thanks for reading agiismsxx!

Very realistic.  I like this better than the ones where he has such an easy time with being intimate.  Please, though-no mini-NM, okay?

Author's Response:

Hang in there.  It will be worth it, that's all I can say, whynot.

Of course, we can't have a tale of Edward and Bella without pulling a NM for at least a brief period. Hmm I'll be curious to see how you play this out.

Author's Response:

Brief being the optimim word.  It won't take long in this story, and it's Jacob-free as well!  Thanks for reading, Nashi.

Okay, well you've more than cleared up what didn't happen in the car scene from the previous chapter.  I don't think you need to worry about the smut issue at all because this is very sensual just at the level it is.  I liked the dance scene and that Bella taught the girls the modern dances, and I love that she's such a confidently sexual being.  And, now, you've dropped us right into NM territory?  Aaahh!

Author's Response:

Glad.  I needed to liberate Bella.  I didn't like her very much in the books.  Major self-esteem issues.  Anyway, I'm glad you like how I'm approaching stuff.

My "New Moon" moment is happening early.  She won't fly into Jake's arms--no way will that ever happen in any of my stories.  Thanks for reading, Laura.

Oh no no no no no...

I knew it was too happy to last for long.

Please update again soon!  While I love the angst since it makes for a good story, I love the happy crap that comes after even more!

Couple of comments:  1) write what you want to write--don't be guided by other peoples' expectations of the story; 2) smut or no smut I don't care--I read a fair mix of completely non-sexual stories to ones chocked full of smut.  My qualm with the car scene though is that I think you left a little too much to the imagination.  It seems fairly significant to understanding their relationship to know whether they had sex or not in the car.  I think they probably didn't for a variety of reasons, but it is so vague as to offer the reader no guidance on this at all.  It's possible to be specific without being smutty; 3) I enjoy this story and its variation on Twilight.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments, Laura.  I might have been to vague, but I was comfortable with it.  Thanks for being supportive and for reading.

I'm reagind you're story and up until now it is my favorite one!

Keep going can't wait for the next chapter and thank you for this awesome

fanfiction.

Author's Response:

Thanks Laila.  Happy reading!