hmmm...i wonder how he is going to make it right...update soon

Okay, I'm off to raid the ice cream because after all that angst I need my buddies "Ben & Jerry".

As always you did a wonderful job of making your audience feel what the characters are feeling...great job. Also, tyvm for not drawing this off for months on end...love that you had the rest of the family stand their ground and kick him out. Seriously that's what they should have done in SM's version;-)

 

 

Author's Response:

You are most welcome.  I did not like all the angst in NM.  I hated where Edward left and all we got is Jacob (ick!) for months on end.  I wanted to do something different.  Thanks for reading, and save a scoop for me!  What flavor, btw?

Thank goodness his exile seems only to last for this and maybe a couple more chapters - I can't take it.  I'm so proud of the rest of the Cullens for standing up to assward.

Author's Response:

The way I see it, in this story, it was a family effort to get Bella and Edward together, and they are really pissed that he would just throw that effort away.  Plus, all of them are attached to Bella.

Chapter 19 is where things start to turn around, so just hang in there.  Thanks for sticking with me.

OMG! that was great! I can't wait for an update!

Great chapter! Of course, I know not to expect anything less from you :) Very well done. I don hope Edward doesn't LEAVE her, though. No leaving is allowed :Dlol.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Please do not let him be an IDOT this next chapter. If he has to be please solve it in the same chapter!! I don't know if I can handle Edward being stupid again for a few chapters!

This is so good!  I have a feeling he is going to try and leave and I hope that doesn't happen.

Here we go again. 2 chapters ago she left him, now he's gonna leave her?  Can I ask how many chapters this NM style break up will last?  I ask because I think I will let the chapters build up before I read so I don't have to wait for resolution.  Or is this basically the direction the rest of the story will go, so I should just wait 'til it's completed?  I really like this story, and I WILL read it through to completion, but I'd rather the getting back together portion be posted before I continue on.  Any hints would be appreciated. This is not a slam against your story or your writing, just my personal preference.  I understand if you can't answer.  I'll just read reviews after each chap is posted, and that will usually give me clues as to the chap. content.

On another note, the Mike Newton/Edward interaction is great.  Couldn't Edward have lost control by attacking Mike?  I would have appreciated that better.

Author's Response:

I bring things around in Chapter 19, so don't worry--I don't prolong this "NM episode thingy" too much.

Glad you like the Edward vs. Mike thing.  But Edward won't risk his family's exposure to snap Mike's neck, no matter how tempting.  Thanks for reading.

oh my god!  its awesome..  and you are really good at updated fast! i love it!

U BTTR HURRY!... or else.... and by "or else" I mean i'll provoke the Volturi and blame u.

ruh-roh!  Updated soon please....I am hoping they will just make up instead of having a New Moon moment.

New Moon made me bawl like a baby.  Tears streaming down my cheeks.  If we're gonna need kleenex, give us a warning at the top!  Can't wait to see how this is going to resolve!

I know I asked for angst, but...ugh. It's so good, but so bad at the same time. I love it though! Great chapter.