Fluff is good after the angst lately. But too much fluff is bad... I think! Lol. Great chapter!

K, so I very much look forward to where this road trip takes us.  Since you gave me a glimpse into what might have been, I'm dying to see where is goes and to find out WHY has bella been puking.  Soooo looking forward to the next update.

Aaahhh...I just love "backbone Bella!" It's so refreshing to see them back together again. But I have to admit, I love that she didn't allow Edward to "dazzle" his way back into her life, without actually working for it and feeling the sting of her wrath.

This is one of my favorite stories! Keep 'em coming!!

;0)

Author's Response:

Your name makes me giggle, Kinkyfangz!  So adorable!

Thanks.  As I've said, book Bella annoyed me.  To me, she was severely depressed.  Her selflessness seemed like low self-esteem to me, not matter what the context.  So, my Bella's typically have more moxy.  Thanks for the nice words and for reading.

I liked it. I like that he had to beg.

Author's Response:

Me too.  I like that my Bella doesn't let him get away with trying to dominate the relationship.  Thanks for reading.  But only 3.5 stars?  I want you to rate me as you want to rate me, but I'm wondering why.  Thanks for reading, Diva.

So I'm wondering what's up with Bella...

Maybe I'm dense, but I'm really concerned with what's going on with her. I mean...throwing up because you're stressed is ok once, but typically it doesn't happen to you alot unless there is something REALLY wrong with the person. I hope she doesn't have cancer or something equally devastating. 

I love that they fought and it was filled with such passion. I could feel it while I was reading. 

This was ANOTHER amazing chapter. I'm not surprised but still, I love it!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for saying what you said about the fight.  I could feel it as I wrote it.  I'm glad it transfered to the reader.

Can't comment on Bella's health right now--sorry.  Thanks for the lovely review and for reading agiismsxx.

Aaah--is Bella sick?  Is that why she gets changed?  Clearly something is wrong.  Thought maybe she forgave him a little too fast, but I'm still happy they're sorta back together

Author's Response:

She's forgiven him, but he has to earn her trust back.

Can't comment on her health--sorry.  Thanks for reading, Laura.

I like the Diggory comment...hehe

 

Great chapter though and I don't think you lose anything without the smut.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I like to add the things in about Rob where I can.  He's such a cutie.  I also love the whole Harry Potter series, so that just worked.

I'm glad you don't think I lose anything.  I'm just not comfortable writing smut, even if I don't think that mine was gratuitous.  Thanks for the comments, AZGal.

you are truely and evil genius lol

Author's Response:

I'm a card-carrying member of the villain society--I even have the fake handle-bar mustache--lol!  Just kidding.  Thanks for the compliment.  It was a compliment, wasn't it?  Thanks for reading berrycute.

I wasn't liking the beginning, but I was loving the ending. So they are defintely back together, right? What's the issue with her vomiting so much? Is that the issue looming over head. Update fast.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Kimberly.  They are sort of back together.  Edward would be happy to pick up where they left off, but Bella isn't ready for that just yet.  Edward's going to have to work to earn her trust again because he broke her heart.

Can't comment on the health issue.  All will be revealed later. 

It might be a few days before the next update.  I condensed some chapters as I went, and I am out of prewritten chapters.  This story has gotten such an overwhelming response that I don't want to rush into anything.  It has to be right--the way I want it.  I should have some writing time Saturday.  Thanks for reading.

Oh good, they're on better terms. Drama drama drama, it was starting to fill me to the brim, anyway, as always, I love your story :)

Author's Response:

Thanks Totoro.

Loved the last two chapters.  Really funny when Edward was voted out of the house and sent to "Outcast Island!"  I also could never understand why the family just let Edward insist that they all move.

Chapter 19 is great.  I love the humor.  The fight Bella and Edward had was very well written. 

Keep it coming, and thanks for the unbelieveably fast updates.  Thanks also to Shabbyapple

Sherri

 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the last two chapters Sherri.  I never understood why the entire Cullen clan moved just for Edward either.

I enjoy my Emmett moments.  He's just so fun to write.  I liked writing their fight too.  My Bella isn't afraid to stand up to Eddie-boy.

Unfortunately, this is the last of my pre-written chapters.  Now I have to make decisions as to what I want to write next, and this story is so important to me and is doing so well that I refuse to write it on the fly.  Got some thinking to do, so it might be a little while--so sorry.

So...what's wrong with Bella? What's everyone hiding?

Author's Response:

Can't say, sorry.

Aw yay! I am glad to see Bella being strong instead of being a pushover. 

But what is up with Bella's puking? I can't wait for the next chapter!