I understand what is happening, but good grief, you can't leave us on that cliff for long!!!  Things were just reconnecting between those two and we were getting all squee.  It is a great story, BTW.

Finally ingested a bit to much venom...

No, I don't understand. By french kissing she got venom? He kissed her before like that and this didn't happened. Is she still sick? The past couple chapters she hasn't throwing up. Gosh, so many questions and no answers. I'm dieing here. Can you help me?

Author's Response:

Next chapter clears everything up.  His family answers some questions.  I always wanted to explore this issue of passing venom through kissing because Edward made such a big deal about it in the books.  Thanks for reading.

What's happening? Oh man, is she changing? I'm happy about that, but how? Was the kiss too deep. Did she swallow some venom? Cant wait for more!!

That cliffy was very evil...  Evil I say!   I am really enjoying this story..  I can't wait to read more.

 

Emmett's stick comment almost caused me to spit Vitamin Water all over my laptop.   Great!!!

 

 

Keep the great work coming.

 

-De Anna

 

DeAnnaMBell@gmail.com

 

 

 

Hmmm...slow trickle of venom from the kiss, perhaps a cut in her mouth or her lip from biting it so much....Oh boy, here we go!!! he better not leave again...he promised!

OHHHHH i LOVE this story!!!! please write more, i am dieing to know whats wrong with bella, keep it up ur doing a great job!!!

 

Aww I love it! Bella's first snow (:
But, I wanna know what's going on with her!
So far one of  favourite fanfics I've read.

Author's Response:

Thank you, lionslamb.  I'm glad you like what I am doing.

Such a great story. I have enjoy it a lot. Some of my favrioute parts.

[QUOTE]'Making out with Bella made me feel masculine, powerful, sexy, and very pleased with myself. '[/QUOTE]

Made me laugh out Loud.

 

 

[QUOTE]My mind started thinking that maybe I could relieve my mom of some of her duties, like bathing Bella, or tucking her in at night…[/QUOTE]

So typically male and yet he didn't feel the need to sensor himself or feel bad for thinking that. I love moments like that with Edward. He usually feels so guilty for anything he feels in not gentlmanly so it's a nice change.

 

 

[QUOTE]"You make me feel young,"[/QUOTE]

And that I think is key. It's part if the reason why she is the perfect one for him.

 

 

[QUOTE]Just then we were very rudely interrupted. "Mr. Cullen, you need to put some distance between yourself and Ms. Swan, please," Mr. Varner scolded.[/QUOTE]

How is awesome is it to see the be busted for something so noramally teenage. Again it's a nice change.

I'm glad the Cullens stuck with Bella through her break up with Edward. It always annoyed me that in New Moon they all left as soon as Edward said so. Alice especially owed her more than that. I'm so glad that you didn't go the same way. It puts more meaning behind all the things they said to her about her being a part of the family. And I like that she is acknowledging that by keeping her locket of the family crest.

I am happy they are back together but  I am glad that she is not immediatley letting him off the hook. He really hurt her and I can imagine she is going to have issues with that for sometime. Much like in Eclispse.

I'm curious why she keeps throwing up. I hope she is not seriously sick or anything. But the fact that she confinded in Carlise makes me think she might be. I can't wait to find out.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that there were so many moments that you liked.  Thanks for really reviewing the story.

I hated all the Cullens dumping Bella too.  It was horrible.  Edward wasn't the head of the house--why follow his orders?

Thanks for the kind words and for reading.

So she's really not preggers?  I have a hard time believing that.  My only other guess is that she is slowly going through the transformation somehow?  I love how you can always keep me guessing!  :D

Loved Rose's comment, “Stop being an Assmett,”

as well as the exchange between Alice and Edward.

 

 

“So to what do we owe the displeasure of your intrusion this morning, dear sister?” I asked.

 

***

 

“Ahem.  I’m still here.”

 

“Don’t care,” I admitted.

 

In a split-second, I was pulled away from Bella and pinned to the mattress.  “Let her go, Edward.”

 

 I flipped us so that she was the one who was pinned.  “I would have let her go, if you would have given us a moment, pixie.”

 

That is such a sibling moment.  Perfect! :D

 

I am glad to be all caught up with your stories again!  As always, I look forward to more of your fabulous stories, Fangs!  They always make me smile.  Even with the angsty bits and cliffies. ;)

Author's Response:

No preggers Bella, Ms. Shrew.  Thanks for all your comments.  I don't have time to respond to all of them anymore, so I'm just kind of hit and missing with them.  Glad you like my sibling interactions.  I love writing them.

I love the various names that Emmett called Edward.  I also loved how you had them mirror each other with trying to hold themselves together -- Bella with her arms around her chest, and Edward with holding the pillow against his.  Very well done there!

I really thought he was going to go back to her at the 29th step.  You did a good job of making Edward frustrating in his staunch position to stay away from Bella for her protection, but I still feel sympathy for him and his decision.  :D

well, I am sorry I missed the smut, but this is lovely too.  I hate being behind in stories, but college is kicking my ass at the moment.  Everytime i think i can breathe, it goes again.   as it is, i am trying to eat and type at the same time.  lame.  the chapter was great.  i like how bella stands firm in her feelings, and how emmett knows they will take the volvo because of the back seat.  adorable! :)