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Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
"Well, yours is a body worth snatching,"
Um... yes and yes and heck yeah! lol
So, I was right about the venom from the kissing causing her to change, but wow... she's been going through this for a while now? That was a shocker.
Two updates in one day. You spoil us, woman. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, everwondering. I'm awaiting an update to your story--hurry please--lol! I know you have a life outside of fanfic, so take your time.
Yeah--with Edward, I'd snatch his bod in a second--lol!
I write, and my awesome beta, shabbyapple, had "instant validating" as a super power.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Whoo-hoo! I thought that might be the issue! And if Edward thought it was hard to behave before, it'll be nearly impossible now. And I'm anxious to see how they hide the changes in Bella when they get back.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Wow...That was explained very well, so they don't know where the venom was being stored? So she is lacking the coldness, nonbeating heart, strength or speed right? Will that come eventually or what? Thank you so much for updating twice today, I hope there is one tomorrow.
Author's Response: Her insides are still very human, and she doesn't have speed or strength. She's about 1/3 the way through the change.
My beta deserves the credit for the quick update. Shabbyapple is the best! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love this story more and more!
Reviewer: Mayfair1285 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love it! My favorite story is back! Yaaay!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Well, I didn't have to wait long to find the answers. I think you've crafted a very plausible scenerio. It makes sense to me. I didn't see the whole "slow change into a vampire" coming at all, so good job at dropping hints but giving nothing away. Can't wait to see where you take things from here.
Author's Response: Thanks. I like to foreshadow things by making very subtle hints. Like in chapter 4 or 5, Edward talks about not denying either of them the pleasure of "kissing in this way" because he knew he could do it safely. That was hint number one. It couldn't be done safely, at least not in my story. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Nice twist.
Reviewer: JeannieRoss (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I loved it! And I totally beleive it. I kept wondering what was going on with her. I cant wait for more.
Reviewer: Helens_Love (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazingly yummy I just want more! please please please!
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
WOW! That made total sense. I really liked the explanation. I wonder how much more venom it will take. I like the gradual process. Excellent!
Reviewer: michelleaz (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I totally thought it was believable, I'm so excited to get to read more.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Wow, you are one super-fast updater! Great chapter, and I like the way you've decided to have Bella change. Hopefully Edward will completely come to his senses and finish the job so Bella will fully be a vampire!
Reviewer: Sparkle-lvr (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
OH MY GOSH! I'm completely addicted to this story! Thanks for updating so quick! It's so amazing!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Awesome! WOW, we didn't have to wait too long for an explanation. Thanks for updating so quickly. I think the explanation is totally believable, and exciting really. I just wonder if people will start to notice. How could they not? Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah--it's slightly noticeable. Wait until you hear Lauren's reaction! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
makes total sense to change slowly like that - like a venom drip - ya good
Reviewer: Cat28 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love the story and very much look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I liked it a lot!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Ahhhh, ok, so it was the kissing! Makes sense, right? Thanks for being smart enough to think of that, cause, come on, it makes sense!!!
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Interesting, but when bitten, the venom just takes over, it doesn't take much at all... So I don't know; but still a cool idea.
Author's Response: In my head, kissing would release even less venom than a bite. And in the books, he bit her ankles, wrists, and injected venom into her heart, right? To me, that's quite a bit of venom, but I could be wrong. Anyway, just a fictional story based on a fictional story--all in fun. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: IndecisiveMe (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Interesting twist!
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
OK. I liked it...but how long will the change take...and just a small bite is enough so, what's taking so long????
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
The explanation is believable. But hey, it's your story...But I like that idea! It's very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter...Please update soon?
Author's Response: Confused...did you mean to say it wasn't believable? Well, either way, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: emarroquin (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
You did a wonderful job with this chapter.
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Love this chapter the most! Super isea of the venom working over time! Never saw it coming! Great job!
Reviewer: sizzlinghotcat (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
Loved it what a nice twist!
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