Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Another great chapter. So glad that Edward has finally accepted that she is changing and not feeling guilty over it.
As always, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
..... i might have to hurt you grrrrrrrr
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
i love this story and how it just works! It seems effortless on your part!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
How lovely!
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
i have to agree, Edward's ending monologue=perfection!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Nox. I really enjoyed writing that.
Reviewer: NicoleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Loved this chapter. I feel like bella and edward are reallyyyy back on track after the break-up, and moving forward again. and I think your new years celebration made sense...after all, if your over a century old, new years must loose a little bit of its meaning ;)
Author's Response: My hubby and I just sleep through New Year's Eve most of the time. Sad, isn't it? Anyway, they are back on track. Over the course of the week in Aspen, he was able to persuade her that he wasn't going anywhere.
I don't want to be cliche when they finally decide to do the deed. It will be really special when it happens. Thanks for reading, Nicole.
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
So sweet...I loved it. I love that they're not jumping on each other. I love that they're just enjoying each other and getting to know each other. It was a fun chapter to read. I love this story. It's one of my favorites.
Author's Response: They should get to know each other. I wanted my story to explore their relationship more as if it were more normal and equal. I felt like in the books, Edward ruled the roost and Bella just submitted to what he said, hating herself in the process. Don't get me wrong--Edward is still the man, but he is flawed. Thanks for reading, lifebliss.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Awwww...I thought New Years Eve was sweet! I'm really looking forward to how they mask the changes in Bella when they get back....with Charlie, at school, etc.
Update soon!
Author's Response: Returning home and to school will be interesting, to say the least. They can't really hide the inhuman beauty. It's fairly obvious. She was pretty before, but she's like a supermodel now (minus being tall and having no chest). Lauren's going to have a field day with this one.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
I like the ending no big bang but sweet. :)
To Bellas change how much time has she left until she will be a Vampire?
I hope they know it and how will her "death" be set up have they already talked about it?
The change comes in with a lot of pain is Bella spared form that pain because she didn't got bitten but swallowed the venom?
And will there be a wedding before Bella is a Vampire like Edward originally wanted?
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Great questions, Laila. I'll try to answer them.
No one knows how long her change will take. I don't even know--lol! Carlisle is scratching his head on this one, because this is completely unchartered territory for vampire kind.
Since the change is coming so slowly, they haven't discussed her death yet.
Bella is experiencing small bouts of intense pain. But, because her skin is still very human, Carlisle can still administer morphine. It helps.
Haven't decided about they whole wedding thing. Remember, she is still only legally seventeen in my story. She's a junior--not a senior. She will probably have to be changed by then.
Thanks for all the questions and for reading.
Reviewer: lifesbliss (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I loved it! You are a great writer. I really like the way you are going with her change. Very interesting....and two chapters!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Even though they decided not to do the deed this was still a very good chapter. Edward finally being at peace and the both of them being qh so romantic with each other.
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Watching Buffy with the Cullens would be beyond hillarious.. Imagine watching the uber cheesy movie. Alice would die from complaining about the clothing. Keep up with the great writing! Don't worry, I am not tossing tomatoes your way... I liked how you played New Years out.. The dancing was way more romantic rather than a lust fueled romp with a bunch of vampires teasing...
Author's Response: I imagined a little scene with them watching Buffy in my head. I could have done more, but I didn't want to drag the chapter out much more. I wanted them to have a romantic New Year's Eve celebration rather than a lust filled one. Thanks for reading, Nannabell.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
This chapter was sweet. I think the way they celebrated the New Year was perfect for them!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love the way you are having her change come about this is very believable.
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
eeeeewwww! mushy!
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
So Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
You know it's bad when even JASPER thinks they should just get it on already! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
LOL
I missed this chapter! For some reason I didn't get an alert - but I got an alert on the NEXT one...so I read that first and thought I had had a stroke! LOL
This was a good explanation - don't bother responding to my review of the next chapter I sound like a complete idiot!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Great chapter. Love the banter between the Cullen's. Love it that Edward has decided he wants her to change. I even like it that he doesn't have a choice. No bang?? Ah, but I see it coming. Sorry for my pun!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Nice
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
I love fluff! Beautiful. I love the exploration of Edward's feelings. Any chance we might get a peek at Bella's? I just wonder how she's taking the physical changes and what they must feel like. I know you've pretty much kept this EPOV, but maybe you can have him ask her how she's feelings just so we know. Awesome story!
Author's Response: Nope. Unless I pull a Midnight Sun and write the whole story from Bella's perspective, we won't hear her thoughts on anything. The thought has crossed my mind. It would be a great writing exercise. Thanks for reading and for the review, twogoods.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Bang was kinda expected but I will give it to ya....It was still a great update. Esme and Carlisle getting it on and the other two couples almost screwing while watching Buffy. I guess that we will just have to wait for our Edward and Bella bang alittle longer. :P Hurry every chance you get :P
Author's Response: Yeah, we have to wait a little longer. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Ok...I must be very very dense.
Has she already changed? BC she wouldn't be eating food...or she is changing SLOWLY? Which I don't understand...I got the contacts, but why was she vomitting? She was slowling being changed? I don't think you will "tell" but when someone slowly changes...does it take weeks? Months?
Off to read reveiws...I am sure most are smarter about these things than I am...
Author's Response: Sorry you're confused, but she is changing slowly. I thought that was clear in the Changes chapter. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
this story is awesome! i cannot wait to see how bellas control turns out! please, please post fast!
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Loved it. Definitely cute and fluffy and a nice insight into Edward's mind.
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws. Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|