I hate cliffys!!!!!!!!!!!! It´s a good thing I´m reading all the chapters at once, ha, ha, ha,

It´s official I love your story, I particularly liked the end monologue too!

I like your pace, it´s fast and even though I´m slowly liking the story, your writing it´s what keeps me reading.

I must admit I didn´t know what to feel when i read it but,I´ll keep on reading

I am intrigued nonetheless!!

Author's Response:

I hope you didn't find him stalkerish.  A few people do, but if you look at it, he's not.  He never does anything to hurt her, and he only travels to see her once twice a year.  When he crawls in bed with her and whispers, it's only for a short amount of time--he doesn't spend the night with her.  In the book, Edward climbed in Bella's window and watched her sleep all night.  It didn't creep me out to read that about him, but to me, it shows much more stalkerish tendencies than my story does. 

I'm glad that you are reading the story and I hope you continue to give it a chance. 

This is a wonderful twist on twilight and I love that you incorperated lots of jazz in the last couple charpters. It's my kind of music :)
Well anyways, great work and keep it up.

-Mazzakenzie

Author's Response:

Nice to "meet" another jazz lover.  Music is my career, and I dabble in jazz.  LOVE IT!  I wish I had been born with a good set of pipes because I would have loved to be a jazz singer.  I envy people who can. 

Thanks for the review.  I might include a few more jazz pieces, if I think they fit.

That was sooo cute!

No tomatoes from over here while I would have thought Alice would have thrown one crazy New Year's Eve party being Alice and all.  I love this story line and I really enjoyed this last chapter.  The last portion was beautiful and it lovely the way Edward finally embraced their future/fate :) YAY!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words and for not throwing virtual fruit--lol!  Anyway, I thought about a wild Alice party, but not this year.  I just didn't want that.  My thoughts were that the family wanted Bella and Edward to get back together, and they didn't want to add any stress to the mix, so they played everything down for this holiday.

Thanks for reading, redvampee.

Awww i got a mention YAY!

good chapter i am glad you adressed those issues and took on my advice,

Anther suggestion: The revelation he has about their minds and how they can block him so easily, might perhaps create some insecurities or a lack of trust simply because he perhaps realises he can be deceived by his own family and Edward seems kind of withdrawn and seeks reassurance from the thoughts of others rather then affection, or mushy gushy fluff. If i was him i m would probably question if my family was honest with me as irrational as it sounds. I would probably try to dig deeper into their minds, search every nook and cranny so to speak. 

and i am happy to sea esme and Carlisle actually having some sexy time hahaha most stories they're like an old couple, more of a prude then edward.

Nah new year doesn't always have to start with a bang, what's left for the year if everything happens at one?

 

The comment Bella makes on how normal they are is a good one, because so rarely do the  normal everyday human things like watch a movie as a family etc. 

 

I liked that sit back and enjoy it comment, it almost makes Jaspers gift sound like a bit of a drug in a weird  way because he can amplify such euphoria lust etc. 

I do Love this story and I hope you update :)

 

x x Cassie

Author's Response:

Thanks Cassie.  I'm glad you liked the dedication.

I dont' feel that Edward is going to be insecure about whether or not he can trust his family.  They don't always block him.  It was just this one major issue and it was at Bella's request, which he thoroughly understands.  I don't want him to start digging around in his family's minds.  With Emmett's thoughts Rosalie and their adventerous sex life, would he really want to?--lol!  Anyway, I don't want to go that direction, but thanks for the suggestion and for reading. 

Wow I have really enjoyed reading this story. I love that you explored venom and oral exposure, it was a fact that had bothered me before. I hope you continue with this story, it is very good! Sorry, I can't add any constructive criticism at this point, I am just too engrossed by the story at this point.

Author's Response:

Thank you, rengisol.  I really wanted to explore that issue in this story because I found it so interesting.  The book always left me asking "but what if this" or "what if that".  I'm using this story to sort of explore some of those issues.  Thanks for reading.

The ONLY thing I saw wrong with this entire story was a few typo's but I get that from my job it's kind of an occupational hazard! But  I think you are a fabulous writter! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I found one or two, and I reworded a few of the sentences differently--I just edited it again.  The thing with me is that I find that as I am reading, I sometimes see the sentence the way I want it to read, but it doesn't come out typed that way.  Does that make sense.  Plus, I usually only have late nights to work on it, and bleary eyes and a foggy brain sometimes make for unclear writing and mistakes.  Thanks for reading.  Hopefully I'll earn a higher rating from you eventually.

Virtual tomatoes? Why on earth would anyone throw that at you after handing us all this magnificent chapters? Who needs New Years celebrated with a bang, when you can have the most romantic moment between Bella and Edward so far? I love it when they share these special moments.

I'm beginning to feel like I'm repeating myself in my reviews by now, but really there's nothing more to say other than that you are in fact a brilliant writer and the story is amazing.

Keep up all the great work, update soon and please forgive my lack of new things to say as encouragement…

 

~Sizone

Author's Response:

Sizone, you are just so incredibly sweet.  Thank you for the encouragement.  I really appreciate it.

bwahahahaha Carlisle and Esme... I'd say more, but I'm still laughing over them

Such a romantic ending.  Loved it.  Thanks !