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Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
Oh my God. Charlie knows wow that's gonna be interesting how will he react? What will the Cullens do about the Quileutes? I just can't wait for the next chapter to get the answers for the questions. I think i said that before but i simply love you're story. The what if's are great. You an amazing writer. And let me tell you this you're crazy brain thinks up awesome stuff.
Thanks for posting.
You're fan Laila.
Author's Response: Thanks, Laila, for all the kind words. I appreciate your review.
I always wondered what would happen if Charlie actually knew. The whole Cullen/Quileute thing will be fun to write. It'll be pretty tense and intense for a minute or two, at least.
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
I love the ending of this chapter! I have now added Sentimental Reasons to my ipod!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. I love that song. It's my favorite. If I ever eventually have a big party for a milestone anniversary, I want it to be played while I dance with my hubby. It's so incredibly romantic, and it sums up the feeling of truly being in love with someone so well. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you like the song.
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love this chapter!!! This is the best ever!!
A gradual change!! The family knew and were so supportive!!! I love this!!!
I cannot wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps
I love that his family chose to stick with Bella!!!!
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Just enough to keep me coming back for more.
This is really good.
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Your story gets better by the minute.. or should I say
Chapter...
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
This was great... ever since I read about Jacob
enprinting on Nessie. I pictured Edward loving Bella
since the day she was born :)
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
Ah, the saccharine feeling LOL, seriously I love your story, keep writing!
You have a great writing skill, use it more.
Now I will need an update soon :)
Author's Response: I have four other stories, all quite different from this one, so you might check them out. I have writer's block on most of them right now, and very little time to work on anything but this one. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you stuck with it.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I liked your twist on the story, somehow it clicks!
I could´t help myself and was singing the son: Ch, ch, ch, changes (Queen I believe?). Ha, ha, ha.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
WTF I don´t understand I´m slow!!! Have to read.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel
Very good, indeed!
By the way i love Colorado snow.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'
She gave in too soon; Wait, what am I saying It´s edward for crying out loud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps
Ha, Ha, Ha, I know it´s supposed to be sad but I can´t stop laughing at Emmett´s name calling:"Bastward", "Assward", "Jerkward"
i can´t stop laughing!!!! Your sense of humor is great.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within
Oh, No, !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What the HELL!!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
Ha,Ha,Ha the Harry Potter bit, that was too much, I was laughing so hard my daughter looked funny at me, LOL.
Great chapter, HOT too!!!
Reviewer: twilightlover234 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
i really like this(: i can't wait to read more of the chapters :D
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty
"Damn, that´s old" LMAO That´s all folks.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
You are cruel and bad. I hate you, no I love you!!! LOL
Seriously This chapter is amazing, such eloquent, masterful and mesmerizing author you are. Awww"
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Noooooooooo!! What have you done !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Can´t wait to read it!!!! XXXOOO
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
Love it, Love it, Love it.
It´s interesting how the story is the same, yet totally different.
Your writing is superb.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits
Now I need a cold shower, damn and a bucket of ice.LOL
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
Hot, Hot, Hot. I like horny Teenward. LOL
Reviewer: mindadoration (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions
I signed up here just to continue reading your story. I love it so much I can barely handle it! I like it better than the Twilight saga itself I think... and I love those books a whole lot, trust me!
Thanks for this amazing story, please continue! 10/10!
Author's Response: What truly kind words. I'm so honored that you think so highly of my story. It means a lot. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
Nurse Edward LOL . I would give my firsborn for that!!!! ( Not really, maybe)
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