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Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Awwww, man. Edward's speech to Lauren was hilarious. And a good way to bring Bella back from the way he totally put his foot in his mouth earlier.

Author's Response:

I almost--almost had a really big blow up between them, but they've had enough big-time angst to last them for a long time, so I opted for a more quiet resolution.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

bwahaha! Loved the telling off of Lauren. Perfect.

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling


"If anyone needs to see a surgeon, it’s you, Lauren.  You need one to give you a heart and another to give you a brain."

Love it!!

Author's Response:

I had way too much fun writing that speech.  Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

I love you Kristi! Great chapter, and I saw where you put me... I'm such a gossip, eh?

Author's Response:

I don't know if you're a gossip or not.  I just think that you're awesome, so I put you in, dear.  Glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

I loved the speech, too!!!!!! Awesome. Keep going!

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling


Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

“Believe it, baby.”


That was classic.

Author's Response:

It just seemed to fit the moment.  Either that, or the super sexy vamps in Sherrilyn Kenyon's Dark-Hunter novels are starting to infiltrate my brain!  That sounded like something one of the hunters would say.  And I LOVE her books, btw.  Oh well, I did think it fit and I'm glad you agreed.

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

I really enjoyed the last two chapters.  I love how you are developing Edward.  I'm glad he's trying to work through his insecurities and self-loathing and not trying to run anymore.  

I totally did not see you going there with Charlie finding out about vampires and werewolves from Billy.  That was a very good twist.  I hope he comes around soon, and because he knows already, Bella can keep him in her life after she is fully changed. 

Oh, and the bedroom scene was hot.  So, will Bella have another change moment soon because of it?

Author's Response:

Thanks chick!  I like to see Edward grow and learn.  He seemed so static at times in the books.

I like to surprise my readers, thus the Charlie thing.  And that is the plan--I want Bella to continue to at least be able to maintain contact with one parent.

Bella will not be having a change moment as they did not do the actual deed and they did not kiss deeply.  Both of them are extremely conscious of what will happen if she "drinks" more venom, so that's not happening right now.

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

woot go cullens lol glad edward came to his senses

Reviewer: wetdogs (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike

very cute!

Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Edward telling Lauren off...that was amaing...i was kind of hoping that someone would have actually done that in the Twilight series...but alas...our Ms Meyers is too kindhearted by half...but heck, thats why we have Twilighted and FF right people?

Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

and we loved -- LOVED reading him telling Lauren off...usually Lauren & Jessica didnt get enough ....that i keep dreaming up scenario where the Volturri comes & make lunch out of them...

i really enjoy Bella & Edward's finally he accept more regrets...trully? well if he ever got any more regrets i think bella can give him a kick or that she is slowly becoming a vampire.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Anya.  I had way too much fun with that speech.  She's way overdue for a "telling off". 

Edward still had bouts of self-loathing, and I don't know if I'm through with that yet.  The main difference is that he actually listens to my Bella.  They work out their relationships like a normal couple even though they aren't.

Reviewer: dexodus (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Great Job I love your chapters they are so long but they keep me wanting more! Update Quickly but please do not feel rushed :)



Amazing Story - Now Charlie needs to kick some werewolf butts =p

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

That speech to Lauren was AWESOME!!!! So happy with Rose's threat too... I bet Rose would be pretty terrifying.  I was so excited to see the update for this chapter in my inbox.  You made my evening! :-D

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:

Nice to hear from you Sarah.  So glad you liked the speech.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling


Author's Response:

It was kinda' hot, wasn't it?  I just couldn't resist.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

YEAH!! An update!!


I love this story!! I hope they get to tell that bitch Lauren off some more. Now that Charlie knows, can Edward just bite her already? They need to get to loving and all that. ;0


Author's Response:

Hey littlebit!  Nice to hear from you.  Glad you liked the tell-off, but I think Lauren's going to keep pretty quiet from now on.  I do have plans for her later, and it will be a huge surprise to everyone. 

I feel that way too sometimes--Edward should just bite her and get it over with.  Well, sorry, but not for a while.  We still have other vampires to see yet before that can happen. 

Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Love this story,

i think edward should have a major chat to charlie to make him see reason, maybe without bella, 

just so he can explain himself and the vampire world a bit maybe urge him to call her or something,

i miss charlie!



x x Cassie

Author's Response:

Cassie, it's good to hear from you.  Next chapter will get everything talked out.  Don't give up on Charlie just yet.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

That was classic! Please update soon?

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

OMG! Great chapter, I'm not sure how I missed this update. 

Reviewer: na-is-fba (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Girl, the wolves need to butt out! They are such busybodies!!!

They remind me of my aunts who always stick their noses in my business.

Author's Response:

Good.  Glad that made you feel that way.  That is exactly what I am going after.  I want them to seem like nosy jerks.  Thanks for confirming that I got it right.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

haha, edward's livin the moment alright :P

Reviewer: twimomgina (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'

GREAT     The thing with emmett is hilarious

Reviewer: brownxeyedxgirl (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

Ohhhh snap!!!!

Hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: Titch22 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

The last few chapters were amazing and I did have every intention of writing a huge review. But after that cliffhanger I can't of a think to say. I'm speechless. Seiously when I read it I was so shocked a literally swore out loud. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Glad that I surpised you.  I love doing that.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I really like this "what if". It's sooooooo amazing, and I can't wait for more chapters! Really, this is maybe my favourite fic in here :D

Author's Response:

Awww shucks.  Thanks for the sweet comments.  I appreciate you reading my story.

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