Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
Whoa!!!!! don't stop there!!!!!! AAARRRGGGHHH!!!!!!!!! OME...Jacob just broke the treaty!
And Charlie!!! LOTS of stuff about to happen!
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, so it will explain a lot. I tried not to keep you hanging for long. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Wow, I'm totally stunned at how incredible this chapter is. I love it. I've seen the title around for a few months, I'm not sure why I waited to read it, but I'm glad I decided to do it today. What a fantastic story idea, really original and well written. Thanks for sharing your story, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you, Clancy. What a kind thing to say. I'm glad you weren't creeped out by Chapter 1. Some readers have been, thinking that Edward was "stalkerish". That is not how I perceived my Edward nor did I wish to portray him in that manner. I'm so happy it clicked with you. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: twimomgina (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
what a fantastic way to change!!! you hit the nail on the head with this chapter.
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Ok this was just awsome... I am so enraptured in your writing... I always get caught up in the story...
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm working on my first novel, and I only have the tiniest bit of it done. I hope people respond to it as well as they do my fanfic. You all are so kind to me! Thanks Wicked One.
Reviewer: twimomgina (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
beautiful andmoving
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!braaaaaaaaaaavvvvvvvvvvvvvooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am crying over Charlie but Lauren needed that and more!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
wow, what a tangled aray of ups and downs with wonderful outbursts! Love it!
Reviewer: NicoleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
mean!!! that cliffhanger is so not cool! ;). I cant wait to see how poor charlie handles all the details...we all know how much he loves those!!
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Go Edward! Too bad we can't see him deliver that speech in a movie. I like the idea of Billy and Jacob exposing the Cullens-it seems more believable. Great job.
Reviewer: rhiannon113 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Perhaps Kleenex should add a new warning to their packaging: Warning! Tissues not intended for consumption! LOL
I LOVE this!!!
Author's Response: Hahaha! Hilarious. Thanks for making me smile today.
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
I really hope Edward gets over his self-loathing soon. Sometimes it's a bit too much! My goodness! I hope he gets over it soon.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Burn! I loved that speech! Great update. can't wait to see how the rest of the "change" happens. I have a feeling it's going to be..interesting!
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Go Edward. It was awesome how Edward told Lauren off. I like you're Edward more than the book Edward because unlike the book Edward your Edward is growing as a person and overcoming his problems. Your Edward is more forward and he isn't running away from his peoblems that's great. I'm sorry for Bella and what Billy and Sam did to her i hope Charlie can accept Bella as she is now.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Wow Laila. Thank you. I guess in my stories, I try to fix what I didn't like about the characters in the books. I love the idea of the Twilight saga, but I guess that I wanted more character development. As always, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Are you kidding???? That was great!!!!!!! Edward finally got BALLS!!!!! Yea!!!!! And with that fact alone he might say baby for emphasis!!
Lauren is a rotten dirty skanky bitch!!!! She deserves more torment and abuse, I sincerely hope you condsider that for future chapters....I am really enjoying this story. Thank you so much for writing!!!!!!!!!
I also have to add that it is extremely refreshing that Rose has a heart!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like what I am doing with the borrowed characters.
The situation with Lauren will be resolved in a way that none of you expect.
One of my pet peeves was how awful Rose was in the books. I hated reading about her. She was so cold, and since I'm sort of a warm and fuzzy type of person, I have a tendency to write her with less iciness.
Thanks for reading, goldeneyedgirl.
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
I don't know how I missed this chapter, but I finally read it and I am moving on to the next. Thanks for writing, I am truly enjoying this story.
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
I love the turn this is taking...I am anticipating what Charlie is going to do. Awesome!!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
I'm so glad Bella is helping Edward because they do belong together. Maybe Charlie needs to be saved by the vampires including Bella so he understands how good they are.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Wow. The first half of this one was incredibly difficult. The whole thing with Charlie....wow. That's so tough. Poor Bella. But the last part totally rocked! That part where Edward told Lauren off and then the rest of the Cullens backed him up was FABULOUS! I really loved Rosalie's line! Just so awesome! Totally loved it and I'm sooo excited to see what other surprises you have in store for us and how things work out with Charlie and the wolves!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, TJ. I plan to resolve things with Charlie in the next chapter. And there will be some sort of meeting with the wolves. I enjoyed writing the whole "Lauren gets told off" speech. I'm glad you like what I'm doing. I hope I can keep surprising you.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Awwww, man. Edward's speech to Lauren was hilarious. And a good way to bring Bella back from the way he totally put his foot in his mouth earlier.
Author's Response: I almost--almost had a really big blow up between them, but they've had enough big-time angst to last them for a long time, so I opted for a more quiet resolution. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
bwahaha! Loved the telling off of Lauren. Perfect.
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
LMAO!!!!!
"If anyone needs to see a surgeon, it’s you, Lauren. You need one to give you a heart and another to give you a brain."
Love it!!
Author's Response: I had way too much fun writing that speech. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
I love you Kristi! Great chapter, and I saw where you put me... I'm such a gossip, eh?
Author's Response: I don't know if you're a gossip or not. I just think that you're awesome, so I put you in, dear. Glad you liked the chapter.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
I loved the speech, too!!!!!! Awesome. Keep going!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
GO EDWARD!
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
“Believe it, baby.”
That was classic.
Author's Response: It just seemed to fit the moment. Either that, or the super sexy vamps in Sherrilyn Kenyon's Dark-Hunter novels are starting to infiltrate my brain! That sounded like something one of the hunters would say. And I LOVE her books, btw. Oh well, I did think it fit and I'm glad you agreed.
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
