hurry with the next one please!!! I need to know what happens next!!!!

OH the torture!!!!!!! I am enjoying your different scenarios!!! What a cliffie!!! Oh my, what is going to happen?! The wait is unbearable!!!

it was nessasary but well done... I like that Bella stood up for herself.

I cant wait to see the things that happen...

 

SQUEAL!!!!! I can't take it anymore!!!!! Put me out of my misery!!!!

I love that you have Bella standing her ground!!!! She shouldn't lt Edward get away so easily! I am nervous on the issue looming...., hurry, I so curious!!!

You did...,I'm so sad :(. How are they going to mend it this time....., too many times and you figure it is just going to happen again!! Stop the hurt!

I love it, Fangs!  RL sucks for keeping me from your lovely story!  On spring break now, so I get to catch up!  Woo-hoo! 

They are sooo adorable together.  I cannot wait to read what you have planned for Lauren. 

It's a GREAT cliffhanger.  You write them SO well.  I think this is a great twist and "what if" scenario to study.

I think my fav part was Edward wanting to taste her again, so they work out a system that works for them.  Genius!  What can I say?  I am a dirty girl that LOVES their physical relationship as much as their emotional one! :D

Author's Response:

So good to hear from you, Ms. Shrew.  I thought school might be weighing you down.  Happy spring break!  Ours was week before last.  Glad that you like what I'm doing.  Can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter.  Miss youz!

I totally understood what you were doing with Bella not seeming too upset about the Charlie situation. Of course though I have to admit that I am excellent at distracting myself from unpleasant things and well if the girl's got Edward Cullen distracting her, who could blame her? Hornyward in the beginning was great! I love it when he gets all carried away by the teenage lusty side of himself. And then the family had to interrupt, lol. That phone conversation was too funny! The meeting with the wolves went how I hoped it would. Almost made me feel sorry for Jake. You did a good job of keeping him in cannon...his feelings from the book. Even his leap before you look attitude....him telling Charlie cause he thought it was the right thing made me think about when he ratted Bella out about the motorcycles in the book. The other wolves teasing Jake about his infatuation with Bella was cute. And Jealous Edward! MMMMMM!!! Love him being jealous and Jasper making fun of him and declaring it! And Charlie called her! YAY! So happy he called at least. That line about Edward thinking Renee would take Bella on Oprah if she found out was hilarious. It seems like certain things are started to wrap themselves up though so I was wondering how much longer you plan on the story being? Or will there be another twist that keeps us going even longer? Well, anyways....loved this chapter as always!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, TJ.  Always good to hear from you.

I'm glad that you understand where I'm going with this and you like it. 

As far as the length of the story, I don't know.  I've already had NM moment.  He's not leaving her again, and there will be no Reneesme in my story--ever.  So, I'm not sure what's going to go on with this.  I'm not sure I can, unless I retell the story from Bella's POV.  Thanks for reading.

HAHAHAHA!!! I got a kick out of the Harry Potter refrences!!!!!

NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will not be content until the next chapter or whichever fixes this!!!

Oh the anticipation!!!!! Your torturing me!!!

I love the conversation between Edward, Jasper, and Emmett! To funny!!! It's great!!