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Reviewer: MoonSpinner (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Did you HAVE to end it there? Seriously, he pops the question then I see
'Chapter End Notes'
GAH. Oh well, she had better say yes this time, if she doesnt ... I might have a coronary. Annnnyway, great chapter! I loved Edward taking her to see her father, that was so sweet! And the poker! Great idea haha, I can see Emmett going all nuts gambling haha. Can't wait (literally) for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes. I had to end it there. You have to admit it had impact. And now venom is pooling in your mouth over the next chapter--lol! Just teasing. Don't have a coronary, okay? Thanks MoonSpinner.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
cruel??? Naaaahhh....evil??? HELL YES!!!!!!
Thats okay we know that you will be back! :P Soon right?
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Are you cruel? Yes. Are you evil? YES!! Seriously, that was such a cruel cliffy. You love me, don't you? Wanna tell me how the next chapter starts?
Author's Response: Sweet one, I don't even know how the next chapter starts. I haven't started it. I've got a little research to do. Thanks for reading, C.
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Yes, you are completely cruel and evil for leaving us just hanging there like that, but since you also gifted us with a nice long chapter...not to mention a recent SAV II update, I forgive you...lol. Thanks for the frequent posts on this story. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the forgiveness, DebBee. I appreciate your readership.
Reviewer: seethesky (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
In answer to your question - yes! you are cruel for leaving us there! Fun story, I'm always looking for the updates. Thanks for the good read
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Several nice gestures here. I knew she was going to end up being a shark--loved that. I wish Charlie would come around so that they could be spending this time while she's still human together. Looking forward to Bella's reaction. By the way, I'm not seeing a lot of typos or other writing mistakes--don't know if someone was giving you a hard time about that or something, but your writing is very clean to me.
Author's Response: Thank you, Laura. I honestly try to get my typos and grammatical mistakes, but I miss them sometimes. My computer sometimes can't keep up with the rate of my typing, and it omits letters. Unless I'm really careful, I'll miss it. Thanks for saying my writings clean. I strive for that.
I'm glad you liked all the little details in this chapter. Charlie will come around soon. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
E-Vil! Update soon, I'm dying for the next chapter!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
I freaking love this story... even the cliff hangers...
I love your writing style and how everything just seems to work perfectly!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
OH NO!!!! How dare you leave on a note like that!!!! Although, if they don't end up together ! will be so upset!!!! Anyway! Good chapter!!!!
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
weee!! i hope she says yes:)
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
big cliffhanger!!
Reviewer: freya_ella (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
Don't be bullied by your reviewers.
They should be thanking you for writing anything, you're doing all the hard work and they're just enjoying the fruit of it.
Writing stories is an intensely personal thing and it’s a big step to post it online for any Tom, Dick or Harry to pick holes in. Negative reviews are pointless and counter productive, constructive criticism is totally different. The content, plot and direction of the story is totally up to you, reviewers only role should be to support. If you don't like it then stop reading, there's no need to throw a hissy fit.
Ignore them, write for yourself.
I'm really enjoying your story so far :)
Thanks so much
xxx
p.s. sorry for the rant, it just got me all riled up.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
OMG! You're totally cruel, and evi, and just plain old wrong! Horrible, horrible cliffy! But it was a totally great, long chapter! Sweetward totally brought a tear to my eye! I heart Sweetward, lol. Him giving her the gift of knowing Charlie's thoughts was so sweet and planning to take her to visit her mom and baby brother-aww! Loved that Emmett has a gambling problem and Bella is a card shark in disguise. Should have known they were all playing for keeps with the money. I really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really hope you update again soon so we can find out her answer! Oh, I hope she says yes, but I'm really concerned she won't. I can't wait to find out! Terrific chapter! And what a way to leave us hanging!
Author's Response: Thanks TJ. Sorry to leave you hanging. I'm glad you love Sweetward. He's awesome. Now, as for Bella saying yes or no...not even giving ya'll a sniff. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
I seem to recall hearing something about a 12 step program called Cliffhangers Anonymous... I'm sure I could ask around and come up with someone who would be willing to sponsor you....
Author's Response: Sorry. I flunked out of the program--lol! Thanks for reading, RaCullen.
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
I so loved the chapter.even thou you are evil and left it as cliffy. Updated soon please;Q
Reviewer: brookie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
ohhh you suck! i hate cliffies. this story is great your a good writer.
Author's Response: I don't suck...I'm just eccentric--lol! Thanks brookie.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
awwww! XD
Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Love it Great Story Keep it up cant Wait for more.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Will she say yes? LOL. I didn't know she had a choice. =P
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Yes, you are evil!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Awe! Great proposal. I'm sure he's going to have to talk her into it.
Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
*sigh* I am enjoying this so much..
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Will she say yes? Will she say no? Am I cruel for leaving you there? Am I evil?
Cruel. Yes. Evil? No. She'd better say yes.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
LOVE IT!
My favorite chapter yet!
Don't make her say no...... have her say not yet, ask me after graduation.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
ARGH!!! She BETTER say yes!! Enough with the drama queen...
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