So good.

PLease hurry and finish some more chapters I want Bella back with The Cullens and happy.

I LOVED that chapter!!!!! Though go figure Charlie would come for her when the other vampires are coming as well!!!!! I am nervous because the thought just bhit me, I hope this story ends happily! I cannot wait for the next, please hurry!!!!! Hanging by a thread to know what is next!!!

Even though there is no smutty action {darn}, this is still an awesome story.  I still think though on their honeymoon (unless nothing happens), you should be a little descriptive.  I mean afterall it's a tender moment.  We already missed the moment when both of them lost their viriginity to one another, which was an opportunity to really show the depth of their love for one another.  It's almost like the SM version (which was rated G), yet your version is more PG-13, especially since you rated your story NC-17.  It may put some people off.  I understand writing sex scenes especially when it involves teenagers maybe bothersome for some folks, but its a fact of life. 

Author's Response:

I'm not one for graphic sex.  I might be a little more descriptive.  But I also don't write a sex scene in every chapter.  I don't want my story to be a porn (no plot and all sex).  I rated it NC-17 to warn teens that I do deal with sex in this story, and in case I get a little graphic, I want to cover my bases.  Thanks for reading it anyway.

No I definitely loved that she said yes so quickly and with only that one exception cause I really don't blame her for wanting to hold off on telling everyone, of course though I knew that it wouldn't be kept secret from the Cullens.

And Alice's reaction to their idea of eloping was fantastic. So very Alice.

Jasper was terrific in this chapter too, loved the teasing. He was acting very Emmettish, lol.

Alice's vision....wow. I really felt bad for Edward and I was thrilled when Em and Jazz followed to cheer him up. But then I felt like punching him (even though it would probably result in a broken hand for me) when he made it clear that he didn't want Bella to know about the coming threat. Jasper was so right that Bella should have a say in what happens and I'm sure she'll see it that way too. One of the most annoying things about Edward is that tendency to keep things from Bella. I have a feeling he'll pay for that decision.

Loved all the lovey-dovey stuff and Edward's plans to lose his v-card, lol! And Charlie came for Bella-yay! But that means she has to leave Edward- boo. Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks TJ.  Edward wouldn't be Edward without his tendency to keep secrets from Bella.  I know he'll pay for it.

I always envisionsed Jasper and Emmett teasing Edward like brothers.  I think even Jasper had a lighter side.

Thanks for reading.

FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC! Just when I think I can't love this anymore, I fall deeper and deeper!

Please post more asap!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you fan-freakin'-much!  You are very kind.

Oh, WOW!  Three more strangers????  Could this be a replay of James/Victoria/Laurent??  Wait, where am I???

I can see Bella's reasons for not wanting the ring until after Junior year and taking her time with Charlie's feelings as to her changes.  With any luck, Charlie will see through her heartache and let her be with Edward, or something will happen that results in the same thing, kinda,...

Great prose on her accepting the proposal - it was cute and just sassy enough to be a Bella answer!

Great chapter, liked every bit of it, very satisfying.  It would be nice to know what Bella was thinking when E proposed, etc.  Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Since this is only Edward's POV, we don't know what she's thinking.  Though I have thought about writing the story from Bella's POV after I'm done with this.  We'll see how you all feel about that towards the end, whenver that is.

AMAZING.

This is why you're my favorite author. No joke.

I'm interested to see what Charlie is going to do with Bella when she gets home. I'd imagine it's going to be awkward.

MORE MORE MORE!

Author's Response:

You are really sweet, agiismsxx.  Thanks.

ROCK!!! Bella wants to be with Edward... and he may just let that happen soon@@@

I love how happy they are together in this chapter. It's so romantic. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

I think I need a shower. LOL