Love it!

Thanks for warning us about a possible lemon, you're great like that! Love the chapter!

I've sent you an email, k?

I felt more of a quil/ Clair connection rather than inappropriate behavior. Good chapter!

Heheh, the Rob Pattinson thing was cute :)I like that.

As always, I love this story. It's a very fresh take on the book

Really good- Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

I loved the Rob bit you threw in there!

That chapter was very sweet!  And I'd love to get a Valentine's card from Rob, if you can pass the message along, haha. 

And it should be a very interesting evening...I love smut, but you need to write where you're comfortable.  Your story has been great so far, I have no doubt the next chapter will be fabulous!!!

xoxo Sarah

I don't care if it's not canon.  I love the way you write them.  I loved the ending of this chapter.  I sooo want them to be able to stay together as well, but you do such an excellent job of making me feel miserable right along with them when they have to part.  I faching adored the kiss and their hands on the window as she left.  It was such a clear image and so heartfelt!  God, I wanted to see that in a movie.  It was perfect!

Love it, Fangs!  Excellent chapter.  Cannot wait for more!  I have about 5 weeks or so until I am done!  For good!  I hope you are generating ideas sweetie, cuz I really want to work on our story idea! Hope you are well!

Ms. Shrew :)

Author's Response:

Ms. Shrew!  I hope school is going well for you.  I miss you!  Wow--5 weeks!  The countdown begins!  I'm proud of you, btw!

Thanks for the kind review.  I really try to visualize certain scenes before I write them.  If I can see them, I can write them much better. 

I can't wait to write our story either.  I do have tons of ideas.  Take care of yourself!

I came across your story & am really enjoying it! Looking forward to your next post!

LindyP :)

DON'T WORRY ABOUT BEING CANON - I love things OOC and AU - if I want canon I will read the damn books again (don't let anyone give you crap about i! *the shrink steps off the soap box*

As for the chapter - loved it. I was so bummed that, typical ProtectWard is not going to tell Bella about Alice's vision...jeez, no matter what story he NEVER gets it! NOW this is NOT a criticism of you or your story - actually that is quit IC for Edward...sigh...it just makes me want to bitch slap him...with a tree...or a boulder...hard.

AND hearing that Alice saw her DRAINED WHY ON EARTH he wouldn't even ASK her if she wanted to be changed (i mean she is CHANG-ING already!). You write him very consistenly - and the scene at the end where B felt so torn about her allegiance to Charlie and he love for Protectward...was very sweet. But after he messed up and left her earlier, he better tread lightly on the not telling her stuff bc when she IS a newborn there might be hell to pay (that is something I would enjoy - B throwing a tree at Edward for all the shit he doesn't tell her! LOL)

Thank you so much for upadating...love the story!

Author's Response:

"But after he messed up and left her earlier, he better tread lightly on the not telling her stuff bc when she IS a newborn there might be hell to pay (that is something I would enjoy - B throwing a tree at Edward for all the shit he doesn't tell her! LOL)"

Hahahahaha!  I'll remember that when I write that scene.  That's hilarious.

I'm trying to keep my Edward true.  He wouldn't be Edward if he wasn't an over-protective ass at times.

Thanks for the lovely review.  I haven't had time to get caught up on Shrinking Violets yet.  It might be May before I can get to it.  I will be doing some traveling and will take my laptop and read fanfic when I'm not working.

This was a great chapter! I cannot wait to see how this plays out with the nomads!

WOW. Thats all I can say.