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Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Awww this was sweet! I thought it was funny that you had Rob listed as one of Bella's suitors also.
Hope the next chapter is up soon, and I'm anxious to see if you bring the nomads in during baseball just like the book.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Whee! Keep it up!
Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
haha edward feels like a teenager and a horny one at that
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Luv it Pleeease update soon!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
That was a fun chapter. I particularly liked the Valentine's Day cards to Bella and Edward's reaction to them; also how Edward came to Bella's room after she called to him in her sleep. He's so devoted. Can't wait for the next chapter; I love the lemons, tasteful or not, as long as they're tasty! Bring it on!
Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
omg did she faint how funny i loved it it was soo sweet and put a smile on my face i loved emmett in his lipstick it was such a funny image
Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
lol edward is soo a teenage boy in this chapter i laughed so hard at this chapter lol
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
I love the fact that ROB was one of the Beau's after Bella! Very cute. More plz!
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
i love how you had all of those guys send Bella a valentines card...even Rob Pattz! he is one gorgeous man...but i wish he would groom himself better sometimes...oh well!
i always hated when Edward and the rest of the family would keep things from Bella! i am soo glad that Bella called him on his lying to her, she didn't do that nearly enough in the Twilight series!
Reviewer: Arianajoley (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
uhmmm and awww
Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
i hate newton he is soo clueless
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Ahhh...Just lovely. Not that I am surprised, of course ;) You keep sucking me in and I am love it! :)
So I gotta say that I love you for putting Rob in there and THANK YOU for making him think kind words when Edward was reading his mind...That was just too sweet :)
I love the passion between Edward and Bella. You give me warm fuzzies every single time I read each new chapter! :) Oh, and I'm SO relieved that Bella knows about the nomads. I agree with the Cullen's, she has the right to know. Yet, I always understand Edward. Such a sweetie.
I'm SOOOO eager for the next chapter. You have no idea how much I've been looking forward to this!!! I just know it'll be sweet and hot all at the same time. Please update soon! :)
Reviewer: foxyLady (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Ok, Eric Yorkie, Tyler Crowley, and Mike Newton i can understand but rob Pattinson??!! :) It was really funny because i pictured rob as edward in this great story. Its awesome so far and grat writing. Keep Writing! :)
Reviewer: Arianajoley (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Do not attack the bag or try to eat the Kleenex. LOL
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Great chapter! The tons of notes in Bella's locker was pretty funny. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
I liked it. Wow, Rob Pattinson goes to their school? HEHE... Can't wait for next chapter, for their first time. I think he will be fine. Alice said there weren't any problems. So, yes, i want a lemon..Update soon.
Author's Response: I know what you mean about Rob. I am seriously rethinking about getting certified to teach now that I know he's in Forks--lol!
Lemons won't be too terribly graphic. I want them tasteful. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sprinkles (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
i like your edward i think he is sweet
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
I like this chapter.The rob was one in a million. See you on the next chapter
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Great chapter-I love that Rob conceded to Edward. Oh, and about the next chapter-don't worry about the lemons. Lemons are yummy:).
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Looking Good... Keep up the good work
Reviewer: LindyP (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Great chapter! I am so glad I found your story! I was wondering though how mnany of the girls were "mooning' over Edward on Valentine's day! And I am looking forward to a little "lemon". I wished SM had put a little more into her books, but I understand she had to keep it all PG. I think a little lemon adds a nice touch of maturity to their relationship. Looking forward to your next post!
LindyP :)
Author's Response: Girls moon over Edward so often that he's shut it out. He doesn't care anymore, because he only has eyes for Bella. Hope that makes sense. Thank you so much for reading, LindyP.
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
really good =]
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Good stuff!
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Bring on the naughty lemons! lol
Author's Response: They won't be too graphic. Just letting you know.
Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Haha! You used Rob Pattinson as a dorky guy with a crush on Bella. So cute.
Very cute and I can't wait to see the nomads.
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