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Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
TOTALLY FREAKIN SWEET & AWESOME!!!!!!!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Great job. I also loved the baseball scene. Things are heating up.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I love this story! I hope Edward is the one to change Bella all the way. I would hate for it to be James. He is so evil! I also think it will be cool for Edward and Bella to share a third gift. If you write this I can't wait to see what you would come up with.
Reviewer: rohan (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Another fantastic chapter :-) Please keep them coming.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
hanks for the update :)
Reviewer: Razzles (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Dude Looks Like a Lady? Does that have anything to do with Jacksons performance in Criminal Minds? Hmmmmm....
Awsome chapter. I love the 3 kinds of mating.
~razzles
Author's Response: Actually, I've never watched that show before in my life. I had no idea, and I need someone to explain to me what happened on that show.
No. I just thought it was funny, honestly. I had written some of the chapter and added that part later because it just seemed to fit. My brain instantly concocted a scernario as to why that was Jasper's ringtone. Can't wait to share it. It will probably show up in the next chapter even. Thans for reading, Razzles.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Sentimental Reasons
YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME?! WHAT THE HELL EDWARD ANTHONY MASEN CULLEN?!!!!! WHAT HAPPED TO"IM IN CONTROL"?!!!!! DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
Poor Bella...Poor Charlie...and I want to smack Billy!!! GROWL...dang, girl, you are GOOD! LOL
Yep, I needed that fan for that lovely interlude between BxE...HOTHOTHOT!!!
Ah.....RELIEF from the Lauren thing! That was beyond LOVELY! And the "baby" remark a the end....AH!!!!!
Whew...what a chapter! Thanks for sharing!
Kathie
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
luv it
Reviewer: DazzledBrunette (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Another well-written chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Update soon!!
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
Well, I can say for sure....that I'm glad you are not totally ADDICTED to cliffies! You mean thing! LOL
Great, I was really looking forward to what they were going to do to Lauren, and now I have to worry about WEREWOLVES!!!
Oh, wait...I can click NEXT right this second! Woohoo!!!
;)
Kathie
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Terrific chapter! I especially liked Bella's reaction when Edward explained what mating is to vampires, and then later the description of mating that Carlisle read from the book--I'm looking forward to seeing how their gifts merge. Wouldn't James realize that Bella was only partly human?
Author's Response: I've told some other reviewers with the same question to look at how I ended it. James says, "You brought...a snack?" It's a question, meaning he's rather confused. As for the other two vampires being able to tell--all of that will be dealt with at the first of the next chapter. Thanks so much for reading, my1edward.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I am enjoying this story SO MUCH, I was sad there wasn't another next button to hit. Looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Sorry. I'm writing as fast as time will allow. I've also got some issues to resolve with the next chapter, so I really have to think.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I just love the way Edward thinks. Don't hate me but....I prefer his POV!!! :D lol.
I loved their little playful banter in the kitchen...If I were Bella, there's no freaking way I'd have made it to the bedroom....Table...food :D lol. Sorry...moment :D lol.
I felt so bad for Edward but I just couldn't stop giggling. Carlisle was chastising him for french kissing with Bella!! FRENCH KISSING! They had just had SEX!!! :D ROFLMAO. Sorry... It was too flippin' funny! :D lol. Loved it.
I'm really glad that Bella is looking forward to the change. Oh!Oh!Oh! I loved the whole idea of Edward turning Bella and then them having an extremely deep connection....Brilliant!!!! So awesome and different. Love it. I so can't wait for that one. I want her to turn so badly now.
The baseball game was so great!!! I loved the banter, of course. When Edward tried to say he was in and Bella was saying he was out. That was adorable. He tried to pull a fast one and it wasn't happening! HA! :D lol.
Ooooo...Nomads! I can't wait...Update SOON, woman! Nofangs...you're my heroine :D lol.
Author's Response: Am I your drug or your hero?--lol!
You know the reason why Carlisle flipped about the Frenching is that means Bella got more venom. But I tried to have Edward tune him out like a normal teen by having him eavesdrop on his sisters.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
I don't know what you changed in this chapter, but I LOVED it...It was HOT, cute and sweet as all get out...
Oh, did I mention HOT????
Thanks so much!
Kathie
Author's Response: Well, there's more hotness to come, so you might want to get a fan to put by your computer--lol! Thanks for reading Kathie.
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I am in love all over again. sigh. swoon. I love your Edward.
Author's Response: I love him too. Thanks edwardsmine.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
LOL! This was GREAT!
I just love Charlie..."Say goodnight Bella..."
Author's Response: My Charlie is a little more involved in Bella's life than book Charlie. As a parent, book Charlie angered me a bit. He was barely there for her, which is sad, considering he'd been basically absent in her life previously. So, mine is a tad bit more involved with her, though you don't always see it.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
URG!!!! I have been dreading this chapter! Ok, so now it is here and we have A LOT of things differnt now... Charlie knows, then Billy knows...so they have back up and a lot of different things that could happen... So plesae spare my feeling and no flight away, no harsh words and no Ballet studios get harmed in this production? :)
More please!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
Him trying to get her to change her call was funny and sweet. The news about their connection is rather alarming. I'll be interested to see how this plays out but hope the plot line with the nomads plays out differently from what I expect!
Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
I think this was one of your best chapter in this story. I found your explanation of vampire soulmates very interesting...the depth and importance you gave them was fitting and perfect. The baseball interactions were too funny, especially the one between Alice and Jasper...lol. But the whole chapter overall was great. :)
Author's Response: Thank you kindly. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
**Squeak** I loved this, not fair; not fair at all. Oh please update fast. Thanks for explaining the mate thing...That's interesting, now Edward has to tell Bella that. great chapter.
Author's Response: What's not fair, kimberly? Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
Good Heavens! WHAT a FIRST KISS! And I thought mine was a good one...whoa...I need a fan...
But she passed out...too funny!
Kathie
Reviewer: Lenore (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
WHAT! COME.ON.
lol so good though.
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
So glad that I can click next... ;)
Yes, Mike needs a quick slap against the head!
I like the twist you've made with this story. It's close to original, but it stand well on its own...yep, glad I can click:
NEXT!
Thanks for sharing...
Kathie
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 31: Play
The chapter is really good...I wonder how everything is going to go with the 3 nomads and Bella supposedly changing a little more...Good so far!
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