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Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

I love this version of Twilight!  I hope Bella changes before James tries something. It would be so awesome to see Bella defend herself against James and not be the poor defenseless human!  Hope her change happens soon :-)

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

hhahahahahaa. Rosie's bathrobe =D

Gotta love that.

I aso LOVE that Edward is now chill =P I want him to just change Bells and get it over with. Especially because James never gives up that easily.

EVER. haha.

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

This was the best chapter yet!

Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Touche'  .....great chapter!! 


so is the race on...who will change bella first....Edward or James?

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

i seriously can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

OME that ending was hysterical.  I love Emmett and Jasper.  Great job on the chapter!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Loved it!

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Fabulous *claps and gives a standing ovation too* I can't wait to read more!!  This is great.  I love the Jasper and Emmett interaction *swoon* I can't wait for more

Thanks muchly!! Great writing!!


Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Please please don't let James be the one to change her.  Not after everything they've been through.  The bathrobe was a great ending touch.

Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

brilliant, love the bath robe!

Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

That was great a chapter. I justed loved the end of the chapter is a master piece, and I yelled run naked Edward. Better pic than the pink fuzz bathrobe. See you next chapter. Kym.

P.s. I'm glad edward mellow and not self pity thank you!! Updated soooon. Lol!!

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Keep up the good work

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

I liked this chapter, although I can't wait til she is totally changed. I want to read when they are totally mates and married. Update soon.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Kristi, this chapter was perfect, it's exactly how I think Twilight should have gone. You should write it from Bella's POV next, because it's so good. When it's finished, can I print it out and call it Twilight? Please?

Author's Response:

Aw shucks, C.  You say such nice things.  Thanks.  But you can't call it Twilight because SM came up with it first.  But thank you.

Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

HAHAHA Rose's bath robe??? I LOVE IT!!! please update ASAP!

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

oh! i can't wait for the next chapter.  please post soon!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

rofl Edward in Rosalie's robe... some how I think SHE will be the one pissed at the boys!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Good Chapter I am glad he has decided to change her.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Please let him change her before James does.

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

The bantering between the brothers was hilarious!  And the pink fuzzy bathrobe! LOL!!!!!

This has definitely taken a different turn than what I expected.  Edward's decision to change Bella is very surprising but I'm glad because I'd be devesated if James was the one who ends up changing her.  I can't imagine what it would do to Edward if that ever happened.  Can't wait to read what happens next!  Please update soon!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

I hope Bella gets changed soon so they can have the relationship they both want and deserve!  Great Chapter!

Reviewer: crazyaboutcullens (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Jasper started dabbing his eyes as if he were crying.  “You try and you try to raise them right, and then one day, off they go…”

“To get laid and make us proud.”  My brothers wrapped their arms around each other and proceeded to pretend to sob.  Rolling my eyes at their childishness, I splashed them.


LOL! Love your Emmett and Jasper! Love your story! And loved this chapter! So keep writing... I'm craving the next one!


Author's Response:

Thanks crazy.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: RaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

Well, I suppose having to wear a pink, fuzzy bathrobe is better than something made of lace!

I am pleased with Edward's thoughts and realizations regarding Bella - it's nice to see the maturity!

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

HEHE cute! I loved it. 

Reviewer: rohan (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need

can't wait for bella's change and i hope she decide's to do it sooner than later

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