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Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
lol, Edward in Rose's robe, just the visual makes me smile...
Please don't let James near Bella (although I guess there does need to be some drama) just PLEASE don't let him change her... only Edward cause thats hot!
Great chapter, looking forward to more! :)
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Ooh, I loved the sexy Edward & Bella with the glasses of blood and putting blood on each other's lips . . . yummy! As you've done all along with this story, I like very much how you reference canon and then make it your own--the enounter with James, Victoria & Laurent was very interesting. Loved the Jasper & Emmett fun at the end! Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. If I was total cannon, it would just be a repeat of the same story. I'm glad you like what I do with it. Thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I've been behind on my reading. Massively so. But this? This was heaven and hell. So wonderful. I am torn between being pissed at myself for not having it sooner, and smug because I got three chapters of goodness in one shot. You write amazingly, love. If it weren't fir my sprained ankle, I'd be dancing around my livingroom right now. Your latest chapter made me feel that light.
Why do I love your James so much? He feels like a creepy hot scientist to me. But the hotness and curiousity are massively overpowering my feelings of creepiness towards him. I can't wait for more. Beautiful beautiful crazy beautiful.
~Mia
Author's Response: Mia--I'm so sorry to hear about your ankle, dearest. Please take care of yourself. Absolutely no dancing until better, okay?
James--hot? Well, no one has said that before. He just creeps me out. Maybe you like bad boys--lol! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: kay321 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
hahaha @ Rose's bathrobe!
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
This was too good! I am curious to see if Bella will choose to be changed right away, or wait. I'm happy that Edward has finally decided to let Bella make some decisions on her own.
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Just a quick review. I really like the story you have written. Some parts at first I questioned, but as I continued to read, it came together. Now I am wanting more, more, more! I like your take on the characters, they are more interesting for me. I like that Bella is more willing to stand up for herself, but I also enjoy that you kept Edward as over protective. I enjoy that the entire Cullen family has accepted and bonded with Bella.
Please keep writing!
Author's Response: My writing style is not to give everything away at once. I use foreshadowing that is very subtle--you don't realize that I said anything previously until the event happens, and then you say, "oh yeah, I remember that". I'm not sure what you are referring to when you say you questioned stuff, but I'm glad it came together in a way that you liked and that you kept reading. Thanks for the kind review and for reading.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 29: Be MIne
Im a little nervous but i know Edward loves Bella more than enough,more than his own life, that hell be able to keep the monster caged.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Yes, I can see how that would be draining for you. Decisions that had to be made.
Thaks for such a great story.
Reviewer: okgrdnfn (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
awesome, i love it!
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
i cannot wait for Edward to change Bella!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I love it, as always. I really liked the ending, gotta love Jasper and Emmett.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Love it! I loved the growing up line and pay back one too. Oh, sigh... I am ready and excited. I like very much how this one turned out. I can see James wanting her for his own...Can Bella kick his sorry ass? But make sure that Edwards changes her? More please!!
Reviewer: Almis (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 31: Play
"Wonder Twins activate" made me laugh - a lot. I think the fact the Carlisle said it made it even funnier.
Great chapter.
Alice.x
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Wow awesome chapter. Edward is geowing up congrats. I really like your Emmett and Jasper. Great interaction between the brothers. You are a great writer and i love your writing style.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly, Laila.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
HA, HA, HA, HA, HA, "Payback’s a bitch" indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can´t stop picturing E in Rose´s robe. Genius. I also loved this:
"I always said she’d be the death of me. Death by sex. What a way to go…" LOL.
You have really grown as a writer. Getting better with each new chapter. Keep it up.
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: Thank you, Karina. I really appreciate your comment on my growth as a writer. I hope it continues. I'm starting to seriously write my first novel this summer.
Reviewer: shelby524 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I love it ^.^ I can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I love that you brought the bathrobe back!
Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
WOW! I was woindering how the whole confrontation with the nomads would go and I was surprised, a good surprised! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!! I HAVE to know what happens next!
Reviewer: Nicab (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
I love this version of Twilight! I hope Bella changes before James tries something. It would be so awesome to see Bella defend herself against James and not be the poor defenseless human! Hope her change happens soon :-)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
hhahahahahaa. Rosie's bathrobe =D
Gotta love that.
I aso LOVE that Edward is now chill =P I want him to just change Bells and get it over with. Especially because James never gives up that easily.
EVER. haha.
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
This was the best chapter yet!
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Touche' .....great chapter!!
so is the race on...who will change bella first....Edward or James?
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
i seriously can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
OME that ending was hysterical. I love Emmett and Jasper. Great job on the chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 32: Primal Need
Loved it!
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