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Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I can't belive James actually got her. I hop he does not bite her. I wonder I he really has Charlie.
Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
GOD!!!!!! YOUR KILLING US....... I can't even catch my breath. Please let Edward save her in time.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
OK... i revise my last review.... please don't let bella die from organ failure/ james or change before edward can do it himslef.
Reviewer: forever-his (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Man, why keep us waiting??????????? Ok, I will try to be patient and wait for the next chapters. But what a way to keep us hanging!!! Love the entire story so far.
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
HOLY CROW!!! Go Eddie, go!!!!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
HURRY UP AND FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER! DONT LEAVE ME HANGING ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT LIKE THIS!
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
of course she fainted.. poor girl.. hell i probably would of too! =)
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
LOVE IT!!! But then again, I always love your story so of course this chapter would be no different. Keep it up...now I have to stop reading fanfics and write my stupid paper! FML! Can you at least send Edward to make my day (more like my entire life) better? PLEASE??? :)
Author's Response: Okay--I'll loan you Edward--lol! Do well on your paper, hon. Write your little heart out!
Reviewer: Jynxx (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Wow, that really is suspenseful! I hope Carlisle arrives to the Belcabin soon. Edward may need help. But, I thought the story was that they had to trade venom? Bella doesn't have any of her own yet, so just him biting her wouldn't do it, would it? I might have missed that part, and since Edward never actually bit her yet, I might be a bit confused.
Anyway, I simply can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Edward and Bella have been French kissing for a long time. Thus, she has his venom which means it has sort of become her own. His mixes with her blood as it takes it over, making it like his, but not exactly. So the venom she does have will be unique to her. That's probably confusing. I hope I explained it well. Thanks for reading, Jynxx.
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
>.>
You're updating soon right? :p
Riiiight? *stare*
Reviewer: Nympho_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
*snickers..* horny teenager.. lol gotta love Emmett
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Mean Cliffie, bad author! Okay so here's my two cents. A whole story from a second POV I think is a bit redundant, unless it's vastly different than the original. Write the sequel if you have a compelling storyline, if it's so so and would be more fluff than plot, I'd say give it an awesome ending and be happy with it. That's my vote.
Excellent chapter and I can't wait for more! If I could I'd give it 12 stars :)
Author's Response: Thanks Mel. I appreciate your 2 cents (which I think was more like a nickel because you said it from a writer's POV). I'm going to end this well, and possibly mess around with a sequel. But like this, I'll have a lot of chapters written before I decided to post.
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I can't believe you left it at that!!! I want more dammit! Please update soon. You totally deserve to be on the top ten list. Good luck.
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Oh dear. Even forewarned, that was a rough cliffy. I can't wait to find out what happens, though I have a good idea based on your author note at the end. As for what to do when the story ends, my vote is a sequel. I don't know if I would read this story again in Bella's POV since Edward's encompasses so much due to his mind reading. But I would definitely read a sequel!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for your vote, cindy.
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
God I love this! I'm really debating in my mind over whether this is possibly my favorite story on this site. Good cliffy.
There's just one thing James doesn't have going for him. He's not a mind reader, so even with his "extra strength" or whatever, Edward has that on his side :D
Author's Response: Thanks Totoro. You are really kind. Glad you liked the cliffie. And you are very perceptive about what Edward has going for him. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
No! James can't have Bella. He should have pissed off moment where he gets so ticked that he just goes nuts and unleashes the monster within. That would be awesome.
Poor Alice. I feel so bad for her, because she was in that position of just letting James take her. I know she's feels horrible.
I think that you should write a sequel, both in Edward and Bella's POV. Or maybe just in Edward's. But, it would be nice to hear what Bella thinks. That would be awesome. But, that's just me. It's totally up to you.
I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?
Reviewer: MIna (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
good that is so unfair, don't make me pull my hair out waiting to see what will happen, make it quick please, this is painful. What if i beg pretty please
Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Hey! You can't just leave it like that! *Hiss angrily* Sorry, but please update quickly!
Also, I really like this story, so I don't want it to end soon. Can you write a sequel? :)
Author's Response: Thanks where9. Sorry to leave you hanging--well, not really. It keeps you reading and wanting more--lol! I'm evil--I know.
I'm thinking sequel, but I'll write several chapters before I decide to post. That's what I did with this one. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Hiraedd (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
omg don't leave me hanging to long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I wait...
Reviewer: Vec (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I can't wait for thenext chapter!
Reviewer: siouxchef (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I'd love a sequel, and I'm reserving my review until the cliffie is over. :P
Reviewer: michelleaz (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
I will love the story no matter what you do with it. It is so good!!!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
it was great.. no tomatoes
and I love carlisle
He grinned. “Great. All I need is another stubborn child. As if you, Rose, and Alice aren’t enough.” LOL
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle
Listen Pussycat, I'll read what ever you write about, but personally I'd like a sequel. Perhaps during the sequel you can include some flashback Bella POVs--that way we get the proverbial cake and eat it too!
Thanks for the update--hope getting it posted cheered up your evil work day.
Author's Response: Thanks for your opinion, viola. I could do so much with Victoria and the Volturi.
I took a hot shower when I got home and it help. And the posting did cheer me up. But more importantly, the reviews did.
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