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Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

OMG what a cliff hanger. . i love it!!!

Reviewer: J13lue (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

For the love of God, woman! You write an awesome story, and I love your version of Edward. The cliffhangers are killing me, but I guess that's the point... to keep me on edge and coming back for more, lol.



Author's Response:

It's all part of my evil plan...mwuhahahahaha!

Reviewer: moon_stone (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

ahhhh i hate cliffys!!!

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Oh you evil woman, leaving us like this....Ok here is my review so that you can reach your goal (I wish I had some more reviews myself instead of the very few I get).

In any case, I am not so keen at re-reading the same story again in another POV. Ms Meyer managed it with the interrupted Midnight sun, but that is a very particular case... In general I would prefer to have new things happening.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your vote, Camilla.  The story is now number eight on the top ten list of most reviewed stories.  Thanks for contributing to that.

As far as a sequel goes, we'll see.  I'll write several chapters and decide if it's good enough to post.  But I still have this one to finish.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Feature (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Wow, new chapter!!! That's great, I really loved it! Oh, I want next chapter... Keep going!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

OME you were right, that was some cliffie!  Great chapter, though.

I would love to see either a sequel or this one from Bella's perspective.  But, then again, I'm a huge sucker for EPOV, so maybe just the sequel. 

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!When you end the story, please write a sequel for after Bella is changed. I also find Edwards POV more interesting than Bella's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Well I would rather you do a sequel or leave it alone.....I love this chapter - it's AWESOME!! Can't wait for the next...and it's time for me to go to bed :D

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

*screams as she dangles from the evilness that is the cliffhanger that you left me with* NOOOOOOOOOO!!! *one hand slipping* I am going to fall if I don't find out soon.  *begging* please let this be fine, I know this will be alright *pleading* right.  I want Charlie to be ok too don't hurt him, don't let Bella lose him to these monsters!!!

Great writing I can't wait for more!!

Jace

WRITE A SEQUEL!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Jace.  I'll throw you a rope soon--lol!

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

I HATE CLIFFIES, I HATE CLIFFIES, I HATE CLIFFIES!

I VOTE A SEQUEL, I VOTE A SEQUEL, I VOTE A SEQUEL!

Seriously, I´m sorry I totally missed you posting last chapter and this one, but I´m correcting it now.

Edward better get there on time or................*fist flying to computer*, else.

UPDATE, SOON. Pretty Please!

 

sincerely,

Karina.

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Karina.  I'll try to get writing soon. 

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 33: Loose Ends

Ok, we have to advance you up in the most reviewed list!!

Excellent chapter.

LOL:“Pink is really your color, Edwina.”

sincerely,

Karina.



Author's Response:

You all have.  Thank you.  I've never made the top ten list, and now this story is #7. 

I'm glad you liked the catcalls.  They were fun to write.  Thanks, Karina.

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Okay after reading through some of the reviews on this chapter I saw a response you posted discussing possible sequel plotlines. I didn't realize just how close you are to having this story finished. A sequel would definitely be great with so much material to pull from and expand on in your story's context. It'd be interesting to see the Volturi's involvement, as well as things with the wolves (with no Renesmee in this story, would there be any alliance possible?)

Anyway, just thought I'd expand on my first review!



Author's Response:

Thanks twilover.  I've already been thinking about some of the things you've mentioned, and I'm think I might try a sequel.  We'll see how I feel about it after this one is over. 

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

AHHHH!!!!!!!! lol

Okay, I hate cliffhangers, but this is a damn good one! I can't even be mad, this chapter was too interesting and exciting! The mating bond is really neat and a dangerous weapon in James' hands; it definitely makes his capture of her more nervewracking. And I was surprised about Carlisle's diagnosis of Bella; I didn't think she was actually dying already. I can't wait for next chapter!!

As for what you should pursue next, I think you should end the story, then re-write it from Bella's pov. I've wanted to see what she thought about so many points throughout the story, although you were able to give us her perspective a few times through conversation. Because we don't know the ending yet, I'm not sure about a sequel or its possible storyline (although I'm sure it would be awesome). Overall, I just love your writing style and creativity and would read anything you submit! :o)



Author's Response:

Thanks twilover.  So glad you liked the cliffie and other surprises in this chapter.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

ppoooh!!! you are evil...that was one major cliffie...i do need a mani after this one...i really like it when Edward roars "MINE" that gets all of our panties in a bunch wishing he were real and claimed us in that way...*sigh*

Sequel!!! 

i want to know what happens to BxE when they move to Alaska and meet the Denali sisters....then i want to know what B&E combined powers are and how the Volturi will react to this very special family of vegetarian vampires with more than special abilities...



Author's Response:

I'm thinking sequel, but after I write a few chapter and see if it's good.

Love me some possessive Edward too.  Thanks, Jaenelle.

Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

well i must say for the last couple chapters both Bella & Edward been greedy, asking too much, wanting everything & everyone to be rosy & happy dont want to consider their consequences or how the dangers will affect others. as to your question Bella POV or sequel? Sequel plus definitely sequel

Reviewer: Team Edward (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Awwww man! Please update soon...I vote for a sequal. great cliffie though:)

Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

"the most evil, suspenseful, frightening, diabolical cliffie"   you're not kidding!!!   but I'm not mad at you, you did warn us and also, you promised to get the next chapter up really really soon, right?

This story has been amazing, you're a genius, it's just that simple.  I implore you to keep writing along these lines, be it a sequel or from another perspective.  You're quite clever and ya, I think you could even 'make it up'.  Even if you can draw out the ending a little more.....just for all the love we're giving you ♥♥♥, see?



Author's Response:

What kind things to say, antipyro.  Thank you.  I'm glad you like my story.

I haven't started writing the next chapter yet.  The last few have taken a lot out of me, but I'll try to get it going asap.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: StarsandInfinateDarkness (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I sware Edward better own his ass!!! 

But then Again Bella can be a sneaky and tricky so maybe she should kick his ass and test out her soon to be vamp skills... MMM.... This such a great story I really hope you do a sequel. ^_^

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Great chapter.  Very intense cliffie.  Please hurry with that update. 

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Oh shit! That was an evil, evil cliffhanger. Just wow. Damn, I think I'm speechless. And that doesn't happen often. I loved the beginning bit with Charlie. I was pretty much crying when he told her he was proud of her after she told him she was still drinking animal blood and didn't like the smell of human blood. That part touched me more than anything else in that conversation. I guess because if you're able to be proud of someone for drinking deer blood then you must really, really love them, lol. It was definitely a touching father/daughter moment. And he was warmer to Edward too! Yay!

I know it had to be horrible for Alice having to let the vision occur like that. Her gift often seems more like a burden...I mean it's terrible when you see bad things happen, but its even worse when you know something horrible is going to happen and you can't do anything to stop it. And Edward having to listen to James and Bella having to endure his sadisticness, ugh. I'm absolutely sitting on the edge of my seat anxious for more! Loved it even with the horrible cliffie, lol.



Author's Response:

Glad I wasn't the only one who cried a little with the Charlie thing.  I actually did seriously shed a tear or two.  I could just see it happening.

I agree with you.  Alice's gift can be a burden at times.  Thanks for reading, as always, TJ!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

Ok, first....FAN-FREAKIN'-TASTIC chapter! The suspense is killing me! UGH!

Now, I vote for a SEQUEL! I don't think I have patience for a BPOV of all of this. Edward's POV is ALWAYS the more interesting one, so perhaps if you had first done Bella's THEN Edward's, then it would be different. But really I'd just love an EPOV sequel. 

And I say EPOV because you write him so absolutely deliciously. MORE!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks icrodriguez.  I'm glad you like it.  I'm agreeing with the sequel, but we'll see how I feel when it's over.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kgostorm (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

i think you should never stop a chapter like that ever again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What a great chapter thanks

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

 

Brilliant, as usual!

Please update this soon!

Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

OH MY GOODNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 34: Seattle

great cliffie!  update soon!

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