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Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2013 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
OMG I LOOOOOOOVED THIS STORY!!!! I really really do love this.
You kept everyone as Stephanie wrote them but twisted it to make it your own story. I love that Edward knew about Bella. That they all knew her. That Alice was searching, because in my opinion, that REALLY does make sense to me, if you think about it.
One of the things I did not like in Twilight was their first meeting. To me it just didn't make sense with Alice seeing the future and all that. The being alone for a long time, and then stating you find out later in the series, oh yeah alice saw you coming just couldn't see you clearly. I don't know...I LOOOOOOVE your version better xD
Can't wait to see more of your work <3
Reviewer: chris1970 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2013 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
great story
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2013 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
loved it!
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
I do wish he'd told her a little sooner. I didn't expect her to believe "vampire" or supernatural without confronting or talking about something like that. I was also surprised that Billy et al., would put something like that in a note. Good to see Carlisle get angry over that.
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
:((
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Love that she received cell phone, too.
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
Wow - I wasn't expecting the "formal" invitatio to the family (via crest). V cool!
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits
LOL! *fans self*
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
Very nice.
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
how awful! :(
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Making Out 101
Oh no! And a sibling ... what does this mean?? lol, i'm so impatiend.
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow
"I had been so into Bella that I had forgotten what I was. I completely gave myself over to my humanity. That night, I wasn’t a blood thirsty monster; I was a man." That's perfect.
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Now this Edward sounds like a 17-yr-old from an experience, girls perspective!
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
um...whoa ... I felt a little flushed from that kiss! :)
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
Aw ... into the family fold!
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
I like the family dynamic and Rose starting off friendly!
Reviewer: shc92 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
Just found my way to this story. I'm very interested in this take. First... baby Bella ... sooo cute! I struggle with the whole Jacob/Ness ... imprint thing (I make it work in my mind by keeping him as "protector" -- she still has choice, choices, etc.). All that to say that I in no way got an "ick" vibe from Edward toward Bella here -- at all. I think you handled it well and I really love the way the whole family is involved in watching over here.
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
omg, I'm so glad its complete! :)
Reviewer: FutureMrsRPattz (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Changes
I love it! Its different than I expected so yay!
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2012 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
What a great way for Bella to have her first kiss with Edward. I like this Edward, already in control and used to Bella's blood.
Reviewer: MerryCain (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
Enjoyed your story!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 38: Worth the Wait
A fantastic ending; but, I still want a little Renesmee miracle for our Edward and Bella! Please find a way as Edward so desrved to be a lover, a husband and a father! Bella's loving sacrifice to be with Edward deserves to let be a lover and a mother, regardless!
I'll be watching for it!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 37: Trips
It's sad to think this means no little Renesmee! Oh, you wouldn't do that to us, would you!?
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 36: Newborn
Between Charlie permitting Edward to finish changing Bella, to Bella's first hunt, to the sex the state could have heard, to visions of Jasper (actor Jackson Rathbone!) dressed like a woman, I almost don't know what I enjoyed more, LOL! Your retelling of Twilight remains in my favorites!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2012 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 35: Changes
Wow...it was excellent to see Bella in the dominant position in that scene! Girl Power! Yes, Edward loved every minute of it I'm sure!
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