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Reviewer: xxsamanthahalexx (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 6

geeze, i'm gone for a few days and all of a sudden, there are three new chapters! i love it. i really love that edward is so silly. i mean, he didn't even say anything to her. i think that would be a little embarrasing. :D <33



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you liked it! And it must be pretty cool to have three chapters of the same story waiting for you when you check in... More to read at once! lol

And yes... I enjoy writing Edward this way; he's awkward and funny and wonderful, all at once! Edward will finally work up the courage to talk to Bella. Soon. Because he's shy and an idiot. XD Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tweemad (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

Too many details from Edward, and he sounds like a girl.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you don't like my Edward... As I see it, he completely overthinks things and jumps to conclusions, which is how I wrote him... I apologize if he doesn't suit your tastes, but maybe you'll come to like him more after you get to know him a little better... he's just overeacting right now, so perhaps you could appreciate him in the near future :D

Thank you for reading, and thank you for telling me what you thought!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 6

That was so cute!  Poor, embarassed Edward.  Emmett really knows how to turn on the "charm", huh? 



Author's Response:

Oh, he SO does, and I love it! More Emmett awesome-ness to come! XD And Alice awesomeness, and Edward-misunderstanding-awesomeness... He's such a funny boy, always taking certain things he witnesses to mean weird and strange things... such a funny Awk-ward boy.... :P Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

So cute!  I can't wait until they meet for real.



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks! We have a few more chapters until that happens, but it will all be worth it! Thanks for the review, my dear!

Reviewer: Nitachan (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Haha, their family interaction is hilarious!!!

Rosalie and Alice fighting over Edward's suitcase was priceless! I really love how you wrote them so close to each other... well, I bet in teh end Edward wisches they were a little less close xD But it really wasn't fair. All of them teaming up against him. *gg*

So now he wants to prove that he can be Bella's friend without wanting more xD Good luck with that!!! I would think he already lost that one^^

Thanks a mil for the quick update!!! I hope Edward's POV will be a regular in this story because it was so funny! *hug*



Author's Response:

Yes! I thought so, too! From man-to-man-to-virgin to Emmett teasing him the mornign befre they left to Carlisle and Esme showing up and screaming "AHA!" at him to Alice and Rose fighting over who got to bring more clothes... I had so much fun writing this chapter, and I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

EPOV will be happeneing frequently, because I love writing it so much... There will be some in the next chapter, too, I think.

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hahaha, like Edward's effort to prove them wrong will last!  Too funny.   Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Well, you have to realize that I like suspense and drawing things out... things will happen eventually for them, but not for the next couple chapters hahaha

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

I thought I was putting out a suggestion and not threatening nor demanding....but other than that, I am pleasantly surprised and pleased with said results of others who say such things.  More please!



Author's Response:

lol, y'all weren't really that threatening on this site, I don't think, but I got some pretty violent responses on another site this story was placed on and I was lazy and used the same AN for both instances hahaha

More will be added soon. Have no fear!

Reviewer: queenboogie21 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 5

Me love this storyyyy. I can't wait for Edward and Bella to meet! Plz update soon and keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Edward and Bella will meet... eventually.... XD

I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, and the next chapter will be out soon!

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

Weeeee!  There was an update and it was EPOV!  I'm doing my little "happy dance" right now!  I loved it!  I love how he's attracted to her, but doesn't want to be!  HA!  That will work out well for him, won't it?

Kathy M.



Author's Response:

Yes! And there will be more EPOV in the very near future, because he is so much more fun to write than Bella! She's observant, where he's verbose... and I hate when people are so concise anyway. :P

And yes... Edward will have some trouble convincing himself and his family of his 'non-asttraction' and Bella will be having the same problem, though she's not quite as stubborn as he is hahaha

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: verbaciouscat (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 5

You need to update more often because...because....that would be good. Just do it.



Author's Response:

Hey now... I've been updating pretty frequently.... three chapters in three days were submitted, so have no fear! Though thre will be a week when I pause to go back to my other story, this won't won't lay in wait for as long as it has in the past... I have the proper motivation now! XD

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

Just caught up.  So far so good.  :-)  Besides the fact that I am anti-Jacob and I totally do not like Bella's interest in him in parts...1000 watt smile?  UGH!  And now, poor Edward is going to be trying to prove something to everyone.   Looking forward to seeing where this goes.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry to tell you, but Jacob will not disappear from the story. He is my favorite character, and I find him charming and funny (even if I'm the only one haha). But have no fear; there will be no love triangle, and Bella ha no feelings for him besides friendship. Feel free to try to enjoy his good mood now that you know that specific complication won't be inserted into the story :D

And yes... Edward is trying to prove something, though it's more to himself than everyone else... The boy's just so darn stubborn, it's hilarious! XD

Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

Eddie has a crush! Eddie has a crush! ...oh no! I'm turning into Emmett! AHHH!!Someone save me!!



Author's Response:

Hey, what's wrong with Emmett, eh? :P IF you like Emmett, you'll certainly enjoy the coming chapters... mwahahahaha

Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

lmao poor edward, he's gonna get steamrolled ain't he *sigh* (still laughing) 



Author's Response:

lol, well, I guess that depends on your definition fo "steamrolled"... I certainly won't have a big machine run him over ;P

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

good luck with that edward,cant wait to see "just being friends" fail you lol...excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Lol, of course they'll fail at just being friends! Especially considering how much teasing and ridiculing they'll eventually be subjected to ver that idea from the Cullens... They love to mess wth Edward, and Bella will soon become one oftheir targets... XD

Thanks for reading, and thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love Edward's point of view!  Now I can't wait for them to actually meet.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks! I'm glad that he's being received so well by readers hahaha

They'll meet... eventually... can't ruin the suspenseright away, now can I? :P thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MrsCullen_887 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 5

i love the story its really good and its funny too!!! i cant wait read more!!!!!



Author's Response:

Why thank you! I try to have fun with writing it, and I'm glad that shows through... Thanks for reading an reviewing!

Reviewer: x_twi-kat_x (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ahh I'm so excited for the next chapter!! Please update soon :D



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you, hon! Next one will be out soonish!

Reviewer: Elizabeth (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

ok im obsessed with this and i desperately need you to fuel my obsession (or is it addiction?) to this story!! please update soon, this was so fun to read, i like edwards point of view. also who doesnt love a little cullen family bonding time?



Author's Response:

Lol, if you'd like, I can classify your name under both "obsession" AND "addiction"... Just to do you a favor :P

Next update will be coming quickly, and that chapter will also be EPOV, leaving off from chapter four when I just put in that one sentence from his mind..

And I don't know who wouldn't... especially when everyone teams up to tease Edward hahaha Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anazarel (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 5

Edward has a cruuuush, Edward has a cruuuush, ...! Hahaha! Poor boy.



Author's Response:

Haha, yes he does! But he's much too stubborn to admit that, even to himself. Let's all laugh at his cute stupidity, yes? XD

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 4

Hurry! Please! Update soon! Please! Hurry!! (Am I making myself clear?)



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm very clear on the meaning of your subtle prodding... I'll have the next chapter out soon, have no fear.

Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 4

that was cute! i was so happy to see a new chapter!! i hopw you update soon!!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much! A new update will be posted soon, so have no fear!

Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hmmmm, review...what to say...more please, longer please, EPOV please, some school interactions please and I am enjoying this!  :)



Author's Response:

Three out of four of your requests will be honored in the next chapter, though Edward didn't go to school for a week, so we couldn't exactly bring that up right away. School highjins are to come with Edward eventually, though, so have no fear! Imagine how he'd react to Mike Newton putting his arm around Bella... :P

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 4

I found myself laughing out loud in places.  Your dialogue is very reminiscent of some of those old Cary Grant romantic comedies.  Witty and charming.  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Wow, I feel really flattered by your review... I know the difference between thinking something you read is funny, and haing it cause you laugh out loud, so thank you! And the Cary Grant comment... Calm down, missy, or I might get a big head :P

Thank you so veyr much for making me smile when I'm sick and still attendig classes after gettingpulled over on the freeway. You have sincerely brightened my day :)

Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 4

liked the comedy with jake very like him keep writing and dont leave us waiting to long im really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Wow, that was quite a sentence you wrote there hahaha

Ahem.

I'm glad you like my Jake, because I do, too, what with is proposals and threatening to play with Bella's underwear and whatnot... :P
I'll be sure to keep writing. A whole lot, in fact haha
I'm going to post the next chpter soon, so y'all won't have to wait nearly as long this time...
And thank you!I'm glad you're enjoying it, because if you weren't, then I must be doing something wrong lol

Reviewer: Nitachan (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was really nice. Jake is very similar to the books and I'm really looking forward to what problems will occur.

Edwards point of view was short but now I defenetly need to read more from his side!!!

Please don't have me waiting so long again... I seriosly was dying over here!

Love your story!!!!! Thanks for the update XD *just remembered her manners*



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm glad you thnk my Jake is realistic, because I love him to death XD

And to appease your apetite, the next chapter will be EPOV and what he's been going through up until this point in the story; it will help you get a feel for him and his life and family before we ee some awesome ExB encounters...

The next update will be going up very soon, and I apologize fo the wait, and will thank you for your manners! *hug*

:)

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